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Teacher Chen Pei is from the Beijing Institute of Education, and the last article was to teach everyone to observe horizontally. Even if you only have a few seconds in front of you, you can see a wealth of content by looking horizontally.
We can start with the environment and focus on the performance of the characters! And organically combine the long-range picture and the close-up picture, and then organize the order of the narrative.
I personally feel that horizontal observation is to first fix the point and then sweep. For example, observing Beethoven's portrait, his thick hair is very impressive, so he focuses on the hair, connecting the black, thick, etc., plus a metaphor, to achieve the expression of Romain Rolland in "Celebrity Biography": black hair, unusually thick .... Of course, this is an observation from a small point of view, but also from a large point of view, such as from the environment, the general outline of the character, clothing and behavior.
Observation is the premise of composition, and observation is a method to follow, grasp a point, horizontal, and then grasp a point, and then horizontal, in the expression do not forget to use a little rhetoric, to carry out linguistic processing, it is easy to write out the results of observation, write full.
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