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"I thought I was going to die"! Yang Liwei's text, why can it be fire

author:Shangguan News

The three astronauts of Shenzhou XII stationed in the core module of tianhe, Nie Haisheng, Liu Boming and Tang Hongbo, have been stationed on the Chinese space station for more than ten days. At the time of national attention, a text called "Space Day" naturally caught fire.

On October 15, 2003, Yang Liwei successfully set out into space aboard the Shenwu manned spacecraft, becoming the first Chinese astronaut to visit space. Recently, some netizens found that there is a text in the second book of the seventh grade language book of the human-taught version called "Space Day", and the author is Yang Liwei. Because the textbooks are newly revised in recent years, many people have not learned them. On June 26, after the article was posted online, it was only a few hours after it was forwarded by tens of thousands!

On June 27, as the chief editor of the language compilation textbook, Wen Rumin recalled to the Beijing News reporter: "Yang Liwei wrote this article very interestingly, writing about the mystery of space, the psychological reaction of astronauts when they encounter various tensions and accidents, and the bravery and rigor of the scientific exploration process, and the text expression is also concise and clear." In the author's opinion, the essence of this article being selected as a textbook textbook is to stimulate the enthusiasm of the whole people, especially young people, to advocate science, explore the unknown, and dare to innovate, and to gather powerful forces for the realization of the Chinese dream of the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation.

As a popular science narrative, "Space Day" requires the author to be able to record the beginning, process and result of things in a true, comprehensive and accurate manner, so it will inevitably require the author to use plain, simple and simple language for scientific and accurate expression. Starting from the complexity of the state itself, it is more necessary for the author to work enriching the plot, especially in restoring the details. It is precisely because of the attention paid to the detailed expression of this text that this text is not long because of the vividness, twists and richness of the details, which leaves students and readers with unlimited imagination and triggers great emotional resonance.

From the perspective of "Space Day", the article has been showing details and portraying details from beginning to end, and the whole story is connected with details, set off by details, and interpreted by details. Naturally, this detail is not a vassal of elegance, nor is it a lengthy and superfluous burden, nor is it a false and false fabrication, many of which occur naturally, unavoidably, and unexpectedly. The author's restoration and description of these details not only paves a lot of aerospace science knowledge, but also restores and highlights the astronauts' "spirit of struggle to forge ahead in spite of difficulties, the spirit of indomitable innovation, the spirit of dedication willing to be bland, the fighting spirit of the motherland first, and the spirit of climbing to challenge the limits" of the astronauts.

In fact, as long as we calm down and read it a few more times, we can read at least "five types of details" in the text:

One is the abruptness of details. For example, in the face of "vibration superposition", although he "has never carried out this kind of training" and "the pain is getting stronger and stronger, and all the internal organs seem to be broken", his "mind is very clear", in the calm and calm battle, in the judgment of rigorous thinking, finally passed the unbearable "26 seconds".

The second is the mysterious details. For example, in the face of "knocking sound from time to time", "burst after burst, no matter day and night, there is no law", for this reason he dared to question, pay attention to careful listening, careful discrimination, more good at dispelling doubts, telling astronauts "Do not be afraid of this sound, it is a normal phenomenon."

The third is to pay attention to details. Flying in space, he always pays attention to the world and the motherland, he "accurately judges the orientation of all continents and countries on the earth", he "once overlooked the capital Beijing, and at night it showed a red halo, where there were my comrades-in-arms and relatives", and his strong feelings of home and country, comrade-in-arms, and relatives jumped on the paper.

Fourth, errata details. Space flight is originally to complete a scientific research mission through flight. In fact, many problems were found, such as the uncomfortable vibration of the rocket, which was later solved by improving the process. For example, the original widely circulated saying, "The only building that astronauts can see in space is the Great Wall", but he "tried to find" and frankly stated that there was no result, and his character of adhering to the principle of seeking truth from facts and solving problems in a targeted manner can be seen.

Fifth, the details of authenticity. As the first person to eat crabs in Chinese space flight, although during the entire flight, he also had times of fear, such as when the rocket took off, he "exerted all his strength, muscle tension, and the whole person contracted like a piece of iron", and in the face of the "mysterious noise" and even mistakenly thought that "there was a crack in the porthole glass", he appeared "very nervous", but this did not weaken his tall image in the slightest, but in the real restoration of his temperament and tenderness, highlighting the heroism and tenacity, open-mindedness and bravery of a real astronaut - At the critical moment, it can show its spirit of "sacrificing the small self for the big self" and being brave to take responsibility, being good at tackling tough problems, being willing to dedicate, and daring to win.

Yang Liwei's text writes out the "big background" with "small incisions", launches "big science" with "small capacity", and refracts the "big spirit" with "small details". Whether for students or the whole people, this is an extremely vivid and intriguing good teaching material. Reading it, our hearts will arouse our admiration for the fearless spirit of the Chinese astronauts represented by Yang Liwei in fighting space and benefiting mankind; once we understand it, we will be able to touch their hearts of loyalty to the party, service to the motherland, challenge the limits, and be willing to dedicate; when we learn, we will be able to spur ourselves to ask ourselves questions, see the wise and think together, love our posts and dedicate ourselves to work, and be indifferent to fame and fortune to grasp life and surpass life.

Column Editor-in-Chief: Zhu Minqi Text Editor: Zhu Minqi Inscription Source: Xinhua News Agency Photo Editor: Cao Liyuan

Source: Author: Zhao Chang

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