Introduction: Poetry, sometimes need to be exaggerated, but avoid excessive exaggeration, the consequences of excessive exaggeration, either "vulgar" or "empty"
Let's look at the previous issue of Feishan poems on 1487:
Flowers startle a tree grooming birds
See which friends have a good sentence:
@Leisurely elegant 61482192175
Flowers startle a tree to groom birds, willow plays a number of fun fish.
Drunk, the angler forgot to put the bait, and sat quietly on the crossbar to cover the frost whiskers.
Drunk fishing, it seems too exaggerated, except for Jiang Taigong, there is no one who does not eagerly wait for the fish to be hooked; the fish and whiskers are just neighbor rhymes, and "drunk" seems to be more interesting in the previous sentence:
Flowers startle a tree grooming birds, willow drunken half pond fun fish;
Lede Angler hurriedly took the bait, his eyes were red and his chest was tight and hissed.
@Fu Man Tianxia 72
Flowers startle a tree grooming birds, cranes accompanied by semi-idle clouds.
I was too tired to go around and talk about sending loneliness to poetry.
The last two sentences seem to be disconnected from the first two sentences, and have little to do with each other, and the transfer sentence suggests: let go of the name and seek wild fun.
@ White water a cup 9875
Flowers surprise a tree grooming birds, willows three rivers moored shore boat.
Last night, the tide was busy with the net, and there was no singing to accompany Chan Juan.
趏, should be "暇", the last sentence suggests: no time for the moon to accompany Chan Juan.
Look at the picture proposition poem "Xiaoyang Chun":
@Benjo and Ming
"Little Yang Chun"
October small yang spring, maple red chrysanthemum hedge new,
Smoke thousands of miles, seduce thousands of families.
Chrysanthemum, tune down: hedge chrysanthemum, both reasonable and law-abiding; the last sentence "ten thousand" seems too exaggerated, so make a look at the line:
October small yang spring, maple red hedgehog chrysanthemum new;
Fragrant and fragrant, drunk a villager.
@123 Old Mei Wu Lin Fu
Seven Absolutes , Xiao Yang Chun
In early winter, october, the sun is small and spring, and the red scenery of chrysanthemum maple is new.
There are also persimmon lanterns hanging from wild trees, beckoning birds to sing in the morning.
Very well-woven, smooth and fresh, full of leisure and elegance.
"Early Winter Little Yang Spring"
Autumn clothes are not exhausted, and the geese are still flowing without a trace.
In October, yang spring is warm, and Yan invites you to revisit again.
The last sentence seems to be too colloquial, it is better to borrow the old man's word: fish flying shallow bottom wave flying boat.
Well, it's time for me to make up the sentence, first of all, the sentence syntactic poem:
Sentence: Flowers surprise a tree grooming birds, flat and flat
Sentence: Lonely people who are cold all night in the moon. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Sentence: The grass warbler has hatred in his heart, and the servant is flat and flat
Sentence: Red dark green light eyes without spring. Ping Ping Ping Ping
People, spring, flat water rhyme on the flat eleven true.
Grass warblers fly with hatred, red, dark green, light eyes without spring; the picture comes from the Internet
Xiao Yangchun, picture from the network
Look again at the picture proposition poem "Xiaoyang Chun":
"Seven Absolutes" Xiao Yang Chun
The rain crosses the Qingjiang River, and the servants are flat and the servants are flat
Finally the fog dissipates and the moon rises. Ping Ping Ping Ping
Hugh said that the October Yang Chun is small, and the ping ping is flat and flat
The trees are full of tomato lights. Servants are equal
Cheng, liter, lamp, flat water rhyme under the flat ten steaming.
Birds take advantage of the wind and flowers to take advantage of the warmth, the picture comes from the Internet
Serenade, picture from the web
Well, take a look at today's outlink:
Shanglian: Birds take advantage of the wind and flowers to take advantage of the warmth, and the servants are flat and flat
Lower link: Ping Ping Ping Ping
Look at the picture as a propositional poem "Serenade", the title can add words, unlimited rhyme, five absolute seven can be.
Looking forward to the wide participation of friends and friends!
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