"Red China Poetic Shaanxi" Shangluo Division Essay Contest, after the initial selection, a total of 50 contestants were selected to participate in the composition contest held simultaneously in The First Primary School of Shangzhou District. On September 28, the first issue of Shangluo Essay Contest was successfully concluded, and on October 11, 10 works were selected by famous teachers of the school and sent to Huashang Newspaper and other prefectures and cities in Shaanxi for selection.
On October 22nd, the selection is over! Excellent work is out. A total of 3 students' works in the Shangluo Division Essay Contest were honored in the Huashang Daily and became the outstanding players of the Shangluo Essay Contest. They are Du Leyao, the third class of the sixth grade of the first primary school in Shangzhou District, Fan Yuxuan, the seventh class of the sixth grade of the first primary school in Shangzhou District, and the tenth class of the sixth grade of the first primary school in Shangzhou District, Jin Yuhan.
Now the excellent works are displayed one by one, and I hope that the students will continue to work hard to strengthen their writing skills! At the same time, students who have not been selected, do not be discouraged, according to the writing guidance of many famous teachers interviewed by Huashang Bao-Ersanli Information, look for their own shortcomings, find the correct writing method, write more and read more.
My hometown
Shangzhou District No. 1 Primary School Class 63 Du Leyao
The song "The most beautiful thing in Qinling is Shangluo" has sung all over China. The beauty of Shangluo is well known, and bai Juyi, a great poet of the Tang Dynasty, once left a famous sentence for thousands of years: "I have not seen shangshan jun, and qingquan baishi is in the mountains," my hometown is in this beautiful Shangluo.
Shangluo City is surrounded by mountains, the beautiful Jinfeng Mountain in the north and the ghostly Guishan Mountain in the south, the rolling Donglong Mountain in the east and the Bears Ears Mountain in the west.
The beautiful Danjiang River runs through the city. It is like a bright ribbon of silk that snakes through, bringing a little joy to people. The most beautiful thing is the summer river, a large patch of turquoise lotus leaves swaying in the wind. Flocks of fish frolick in the water, and sometimes a few egrets and ducks appear, they play in the water, and unknown water birds perform a good trick on the water, only to see them burrow into the water for a while and then float to the surface of the water for a while. In the blink of an eye, a group of water birds swept across the water again, creating ripples and splashing water.
The most lively thing in Shangluo City is Danjiang Park. It stretches seven kilometers from the east of the city to the west of the city, and the beauty of the four seasons is fascinating. In the spring, when all kinds of flowers and trees appear, here is a huge garden; in summer, the park is full of willows, green grass like fungus, here has become a cool resort for people; in autumn, a tall ginkgo tree dominates, the trees, the ground is a piece of gold, here is like a fairy tale world; in winter, after a heavy snow of goose feathers, everywhere is pink and jade, only the plum blossoms branches, here is a good scenery of plum snow fighting for spring.
Our urban construction is constantly changing. Large supermarkets abound, beautiful residential areas rise from the ground, shopping malls, hotels are lined up, and the wide and flat roads are full of vehicles...
The pleasant scenery and convenient living facilities make Shangluo City a good place for people in surrounding cities to relax and vacation. Every weekend, people in Xi'an and other places will always rush here in an endless stream, they are drunk on the landscape, or enjoy the country food, or do nothing, quietly born on the grass of Danjiang Park to look up at the mountains, look down at the water, hear a flurry of warblers and swallows, and suddenly the week's epidemic preparation is swept away.
Now that my hometown is creating a national forest city, my hometown will be getting worse and worse, and you are welcome to come to my hometown.
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