Words written before: The structure of the article I wrote is basically like this, asking questions How to do it Finally concluding This is the classic syllogism, and the high school one uses this way, I hope you will read more and point out the problems in my article. I also hope that everyone will pay more attention to me, so that you can grow up happily, and I hope to help anyone around you.
Be aware of the problems in writing; don't abuse associative words such as then don't use pronouns or the like
Accumulate some logically structured phrases:
1、......... It is advocated by the state and society, and it is also the direction of personal growth.
2. In China's socialist core value system,...... It is an important condition that affects people,..... The nature of the world is most needed.
Answering ideas:
1. Examination topic (1. If it is a short film article, we first analyze the characters or things in the material, list them separately, and then write their views or events in the material 2. If it is an article in the material, dig out the views from each material)
II. Outline (Introduction, Theory, Conclusion)
Third, the organization language; I want to describe things clearly, and then use related words to express their own article logic, you can accumulate some famous quotes to prompt their own article writing ability,
Fourth, start writing
1. You can use the beginning of the things in the material or the situation of the character's encounter to elicit your own point of view. 2, the beginning should not be too wordy to write straight to the point,
Middle: 1, there is no example how to write Write it to explain it casually in the material to serve as an example (note that the example should not be written in large lengths, otherwise it will appear that you have no writing ability, 2,
End: Corresponds to the beginning of the article
2021 Teacher Qualification Certificate Section I Essay Question
Material one: Hunan left-behind female Zhang Xiaozhong college entrance examination excellent, admitted to Peking University's unpopular archaeology major, triggered a hot discussion, the girl tweeted that "since childhood like history and cultural relics, the daughter of smoke Fan Jinshi as her idol" so only after the entrance to Peking University archaeology fan Jinshi learned, specially gave him his "My heart belongs to Dunhuang - Fan Jin's self-complaint" to him
Material 2: Fan Jin has been working in Dunhuang for more than 40 years after graduating from Peking University in 1934, and has been named "The Person of the Year who Moved China 2019" and is now the honorary president of Dunhuang Research Institute.
Synthesize the thoughts and perceptions caused by the above materials and write an argumentative essay
Requirements: Write in standardized modern Chinese; self-selected angle, self-determined, self-drafting title, no less than 100 words
The idea of answering the question
1. Examination of questions
1, from the perspective of the little girl: (1) adhere to the original heart, to always (2) do not forget the original heart, adhere to the ideal (dream) (3) firmly take the road they choose from 2, social perspective: pass on the torch, cultural inheritance 3, from the teacher's point of view: the power of idols /role models, dedication
2. Outline of columns
Introduction: These are two examples in the material
Theory: How to pass on the legacy of a new generation of young people
Conclusion; the new youth should do a good job in the inheritance of culture,
Third, the organization of language; the accumulation of some famous quotes
The right path is this, absorbing everything your predecessors did and moving on again. --Tolstoy
Being a human being is like a candle, there is a point of heat, a point of light, giving people light, giving warmth.
Who will do the inheritance work
In this era of information explosion, some things need to be passed on, rather than simply enjoying the happiness brought to us by this era, Zhang Xiaozhong, a high-scoring left-behind woman, became excellent in the college entrance examination, chose the archaeology major, realized her own interest and added a talent to the field of archaeology, Peking University graduates insisted on working in Dunhuang for more than 40 years after graduation, these are the talents of the country but choose a fortunate and meaningful inheritance of the work, they are our new youth to learn from the model.
In the face of the excellent history of the Chinese nation for five thousand years, as a new generation of young people to inherit excellent culture has become our responsibility, which brings challenges and opportunities to every new youth, in this era of information flooding, although we are accustomed to fast-paced life, but also enjoy swimming in the ocean of fast reading, but this and our process of accepting cultural inheritance is contradictory, so in the face of knowledge we must be based on the traditional way, supplemented by contemporary fast reading methods to complete our inheritance responsibility ，
As the lucky ones of this era, the inheritance responsibility we face needs to be implemented in all aspects of our lives, so what should we do to achieve our inheritance responsibility? This is something we should consider, rather than leaving our youth to games and entertainment.
First of all, we should learn from Zhang Xiaozhong, a high-scoring left-behind woman, to cultivate their own interests, and to study hard for it, to link their interests with the inheritance of our Chinese culture, to constantly remind ourselves in the process of learning, to apply our interests and our inheritance tasks to our daily lives, this process is very painful, so we have to stick to it to the end to complete the inheritance task and combine it with actual life, this is the beginning of our inheritance task, so we need to understand ourselves, as the beginning of the inheritance task.
Second, we should set a better example as an inexhaustible driving force for the inheritance of civilization, such as Peking University graduates who have been working in Dunhuang for more than 40 years after graduation, as Tolstoy of Russia said, "The right path is like this, absorb everything your predecessors have done, and then move forward." "We need the power of example as our predecessors who inherit culture, let their great deeds push us forward, let us go further and higher on the road of inheritance, and also let Chinese culture be disseminated."
Finally, we should bring them both together
At the end we echo the previous text
Sorry that I did not finish this hydration, because my home power went out for an afternoon, and my notebook battery life is not good, so I chose to give up the remaining 300 words or so.
I will give you two new essays tomorrow, hoping that you can actively correct the bad points of my article, I will apply the advice you gave me to the article, thank you. See in the comments section