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How to write the end of the five laws? Shen Deqian told us three ways to preface one, the position to hold two, to leave the distant gods three, and to let go of one step of the closing words

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Shen Deqian ,1673 – October 6, 1769) was a famous scholar and poet of the Qing Dynasty (沈德潜) (24 December 1673 – 6 October 1769), a scholar of the Ziqi (què), a native of Suzhou, Jiangsu Province.

Shen Deqian studied poetry with Ye Xie in his early years, and at the age of 23, he made a living as an apprentice. In the fourth year of Qianlong (1739), Shen Deqian was awarded the rank of Zhongjinshi at the age of sixty-seven and was appointed as the editor of the Hanlin Academy.

The Qianlong Emperor liked his poetic talents and called Shen Deqian "an old famous scholar in Jiangnan". Shen Deliang's "Speaking Poetry and Sayings" mentions three five-law ending methods that can be used as a reference for poets.

How to write the end of the five laws? Shen Deqian told us three ways to preface one, the position to hold two, to leave the distant gods three, and to let go of one step of the closing words

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Zhang Yangong: [If you don't be a border city general, who knows how to meet the depths?] ] Just drink the night to put away also.

Zhang Shu (yuè) (667-730), character Daoji, one word to say. Zhang said that both literature and martial arts were complete, and he had worshipped him three times. He was in charge of the literary world for thirty years, and together with Su Qi, the Duke of Xu, he was called "Yan Xu Dabi".

Zhang said that there are five laws of "Youzhou Night Drink" poem Cloud:

Cool wind blows night rain, and the cold forest is shaken.

There is a high hall feast, and you can forget the twilight of your heart.

In the military, it is advisable to dance with swords and stuff heavy tones.

Don't be a border city general, who knows the depth of grace!

First night view: cool wind blowing night rain, cold forest. In the wind and rain, the cold forest outside Youzhou City was desolate.

The jaw is connected to the flowing water, and the upper link writes that there is a night feast: there is a high hall feast. Lyrical: Can forget the twilight heart. Yes means not. Chi Twilight, from the meaning of Qu Yuan's "Leaving the Troubles": "But the grass and trees are scattered, and the twilight of the fear of beauty."

Although there are fine wines and delicacies, the hero is late and unwilling.

The neck joint writes the scene of the banquet: the sword dance in the army, stuffed with heavy flutes. The military banquet is suitable for sword dance, and the music of the side plug is the most suitable for playing the hu flute. Only in this way is the style of night drinking by the border keepers.

After the previous description of the inside and outside of the banquet, the tail link lyrical words: Do not be a border city general, who knows the grace to meet deep! If you are not stationed at the border, you will not feel the trust of the emperor.

Zhang said that he was deposed and demoted to Xiangzhou and Yuezhou, and later moved to Youzhou to guard the border. In the last two sentences, it is estimated that Tang Xuanzong should be very happy in his heart after seeing it. Zhang said that since then, he has made many military achievements, regained his trust, and once again paid homage to him.

At the end of the poem, the poet is touched and moved, and is stopped by argument.

How to write the end of the five laws? Shen Deqian told us three ways to preface one, the position to hold two, to leave the distant gods three, and to let go of one step of the closing words

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Wang Youcheng: [Jun asks poor reasoning, fishing song into Pushen.] 〕 From unwinding the piano out of the far god also.

Wang Wei was a poet of the Prosperous Tang Dynasty, and he served as the Right Servant of Shangshu during the reign of Emperor Suzong of Tang, so he was known as "Wang Right Cheng".

Its five laws "Reward Zhang Shaofu" poem Yun:

In his old age, he was quiet and did not care about everything.

There is no long-term strategy for self-care, and the empty knowledge returns to the old forest.

The loose wind blows the belt, and the mountain moon plays the piano.

Jun asked poor reasoning, and the fishing song went deep into the pool.

The poet is unwinding and playing the piano, and the friend asks "the reason for the poor", and the poet does not write whether to answer, but jumps out, ending with the scene, and answering the question.

The scene at the end is like a movie shot from the opposite place of the two people, pulling far away to the depths of the water pool where the fishing song is located. This lens language is also an answer. Forgetting the poverty of the world and being hidden between the mountains and rivers is the best destination for you and me.

How to write the end of the five laws? Shen Deqian told us three ways to preface one, the position to hold two, to leave the distant gods three, and to let go of one step of the closing words

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Du Gongbu: [He Dang hits all birds, and the hair blood spills pingwu.] Speaking of the real eagle, let go of a step.

Du Fu (712-770), zimei, self-proclaimed Shaoling Yelao, when he was in Chengdu, he served as a member of the inspection and school work department, so he was known as "Du Gong Department".

Du Fu's Five Laws "Painting eagles" poem cloud:

The wind and frost of the plain practice are raised, and the goshawk paintings are special.

He thought of the cunning rabbit, and his eyes looked like he was worried.

The light of the thunderbolt is impressive, and the xuan is powerful.

He Dang hit the birds, and the blood sprinkled on the ground.

This is a poem with an inscription, written about the goshawk in the painting. The last sentence also ends with a discussion. The poet went from the eagle in the painting to the real eagle, but in fact borrowed the eagle to speak.

This poem is different from Wang Wei's "Reward Zhang Shaofu" out of the distant gods, Du Fu compared the eagle in the painting to the real eagle, all of which are written eagles, so let go of a step.

In addition, this poem is a metaphor for the comparison between birds and goshawks, alluding to philistines and haojie, and has another layer of deep meaning.

How to write the end of the five laws? Shen Deqian told us three ways to preface one, the position to hold two, to leave the distant gods three, and to let go of one step of the closing words

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The three ending methods mentioned by Shen Deqian, although using the Five Laws as an example, are not limited to the Five Laws of Poetry. Poetry such as absolute sentences and seven laws can be borrowed.

Learning poetry, like calligraphy, begins with imitation step by step.

@Old Street Taste

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