#理想之城 #
"Ideal City" is coming to an end, although it has not become a hit, but the topic is hot. As a workplace drama, every character has a soul.
Whether it is Du Juan, the front desk sister of Hua Crazy, or Xu Feng, who is bent on making achievements in front of the chairman, or the competition between Wang Jiong and Huang Lilin, the two leaders of Tiancheng and Tianke, or Wu Hongmei, who has been looked down upon by Maria for many years, everyone is not easy. Especially social animals like Wu Hongmei and Donglin feel empathy and are too heartfelt.
The emotional line of the play is also quite interesting, after Su Xiao's ex-boyfriend split her legs, she became a young woman who lost love. In addition to overtime every day, it is also work, and in spare time, it is also studying and working.
However, Su Xiao has strength in his work, that is, the shaft is a little. Xia Ming has helped her many times, and she has also achieved a triple jump on the road of the workplace, ushering in a highlight moment. As she stood at the pinnacle of her life, so did all sorts of problems. Huang Lilin was hospitalized, and her relationship with Xia Ming would be tested.
In addition, she suffered from online violence, physically and mentally devastated, and it was also very difficult. However, this is just the artistic reprocessing of the plot, Su Xiao always has the aura of the protagonist, all the way to upgrade and fight monsters, and finally become what he wants to be.
"Ideal City" has a lot of interesting working life, but there are also many loopholes in the plot, let's take a look!
The first plot loophole: Wang Jiong said the wrong line
Su Xiao, who is "beautiful and strong", enters Tiancheng Company, and Wang Jiong becomes her Bole. Wang Jiong has circled a wave of powder with excellent qualities such as integrity and talent. Su Xiao had the ability not to forget, and when she took a look at the business data of Xia Ming's company, she remembered it in her heart. In the third bid, Su Xiao defeated Xia Ming and won the bid.
When Huang Lilin saw this, his heart was not convinced, and he and Wang Jiong scolded each other. Huang Lilin yelled angrily, Wang Jiao, if you didn't steal the data, I would follow your surname. Wang Jiong may be too nervous, or too angry, directly shouting at Huang Lilin's background: Wang Lilin, you walk and see!
The second plot loophole: Li Xue's power is a bit big
Su Xiao, like Xia Ming, is an excellent cost engineer in the construction industry. In the first six episodes of "Ideal City", Su Xiao is very miserable, almost all of them are the characters who are not treated well. Good things are not her, bad things are a bunch. It was not easy for Su Xiao to enter Tiancheng Company, because of the reason of the cost division certificate, he could only be a shadow cost engineer, and the names on the bidding were all Lu Zhengming.
From the play, it can be seen that Su Xiao's cost division certificate was withheld by Li Xue. As we all know, the first-level engineer is a national unified examination, and after passing, the Ministry of Housing and Urban-Rural Development and the Ministry of Human Resources uniformly produce the qualification certificate and hand it over to the local human resources bureau for issuance. And Li Xue is a staff member of the Housing and Construction Bureau, the certificate has nothing to do with her, and she has no power to buckle at all. Obviously, the cost engineer was detained by Li Xue, mainly to promote the plot and make Su Xiao's professional life more tortuous, and the cost division certificate was finally xia Ming's help to get back. It is easy to understand that Xia Ming and Su Xiao have emotional lines.
The third plot loophole: Su Xiao's back pot is a bit inexplicable
Su Xiao's punishment is too much like a child's play, just like the manager Yu put on small shoes for Su Xiao. A company wants to rectify, and it makes sense to find a reason to fire employees. A construction site quality accident, a large number of people responsible, construction project managers, supervision engineers, safety leaders, etc., no matter how responsible, can not turn the cost engineer, and the quality of the project is not directly related. In the plot, it is really done this, and Su Xiao has become a back pot man and has been expelled.
Although art comes from life, all the presentations in film and television dramas are reprocessed by art. Especially "Ideal City" is adapted from "Su Xiao's War", and it is inevitable that there will be a big adaptation. But no matter how to adapt, there is also a degree, follow a certain principle. You can't change it for the sake of plot stimulation, then there is no difference between it and magic reform.
The fourth plot loophole: Su Xiao's ability to never forget is a bit fake
Most of the construction industry deals with numbers, and things like decimal points are common things. Su Xiao looked at a statement for 2 seconds and remembered all the data. This kind of camera-style memory is a bit fake, not to mention that Su Xiao may not even be able to remember it all at a glance. Obviously, this is Su Xiao's protagonist aura again.