Fan Wen 1: My family's begonia flowers
I've seen fiery red roses, I've seen lotus flowers, and I've seen fragrant osmanthus flowers, but what makes me love is the begonia flowers on my balcony.
There is a pot of begonias on my balcony. Begonia flowers have been in my house for six years. Its trunk diameter is about three to four centimeters. The branches on the top of the trunk had been carefully repaired by Dad, and the long branches were all woven together, like the fluffy hair that had been combed to one side. Dad also fixed them with thin wire and molded them, all of which let them grow to the right.
Most of the other flowers grow leaves first and then flower, but our begonia flowers are different. Every spring, when the weather is warm, many small flower buds first grow on the branches. The small flower buds are wrapped in green, revealing a little red. After a month or so, the small flower buds will become a flower, a rose red begonia flower, from a distance, these begonia flowers are like a burning cloud, very beautiful! When the flowers begin to wither, small green leaves grow on the branches.
Standing in front of the window admiring these beautiful flowers, I suddenly felt as if I were a begonia flower, dressed in rose red. At this time, a few small birds flew and chirped, as if to praise me for my beauty, and the beautiful pot of begonia flowers.
I love my begonia flowers, which are not only beautiful, but also bring me infinite joy. I must take good care of it and let it bloom beautiful and beautiful flowers every year.
The opening author uses the foil technique to point out that "what makes me love is the begonia flowers on my balcony", which is the whole text. The text of the detailed object is written from the shape and growth process of the begonia flower, which is very specific, and the details are particularly vivid.
Sample 2: Observe aloe vera
I have a pot of green plants at home, layered on top of each with spines on each petal, guess what kind of plant is this? It's an aloe vera.
The appearance of aloe vera is very special, the color of each leaf is green, but the degree of green is different. Some of them are big and old and dark green, like a learned old man. Some of the newly grown leaves are tender green, as tender as a newborn baby. Aloe vera has spines on each leaf, and it is still very hard, and if you gently place your hand on the thorn, you will leave a deep mark on the skin. The thorny leaves are layered on top of each other, and the aloe vera resembles a heavily armed general.
The pot of aloe vera in my house is a conscientious cleaner, absorbing dust from the air, spitting out fresh air, and "cleaning" my house clean.
This is a composition of objects, the language is lively and brisk, "some are very large and very old is thick green, like a learned old man", "some newly grown leaves are tender green, as tender as a newborn baby" and other anthropomorphic descriptions highlight the characteristics of aloe vera, smooth writing, reasonable structure.
Assignment 2: Fly a kite
Fan Wen 1: Fly a kite
Today, we go to the nearby meadow to fly kites
When we came to the grass, the wind blew. I first put the kite on the ground. Since the wind was a little strong, I asked Li Li to help press the kite, so that the kite would not be blown away by the wind. Then, I took out the kite's bracket and placed the kite's bracket on the kite, so that the kite could finally take off. I asked Dongdong to lift the kite. I shouted, "Three, two, one, give up." "We thought the kite could fly. However, the kite landed on the ground, and we were disappointed. It turned out that I didn't run against the wind. In order to get the kite to fly, I quickly ran against the wind for a while. yes! The kite is finally flying! The kite swayed in mid-air and waved at us. We jumped and jumped happily, excited. We chased the kite and shouted happily...
Flying a kite is really an interesting thing. I love flying kites, so give it a try!
This study writes about our kite flying, the thing is written very specifically, flying a kite from failure to success, it is also very real, the part of the kite flying on the day after this part is very wonderful, the whole text can see the happy mood of the small author.
Fan Wen 2: Fly a kite
On Sunday morning, when the weather was clear, I took my brother and sister with me to the countryside to fly kites. The meadow is boundless, full of greenery, and the blue sky is full of white clouds.
There are so many kite flyers! The sky has become a kite stage, a lively and cute little goldfish, a brave and high-flying eagle, and a big amusement worm with countless feet... They resemble naughty elves, playing with white clouds, dragging colorful tails, like fairy dancing colorful ribbons, very beautiful.
Looking at the various kites in the sky, I feel envious. I said to my brother, "Let's let's let it go." "My brother picked up my swallow kite, I held the kite line, grasped the spool, a gust of wind, I ran forward quickly, my sister took her butterfly kite and ran after me. Sister Chunfeng stretched out her invisible hand to carry my kite and flew into the sky. "The kite is in the sky! The kite is in the sky! "The kite flies higher and higher in the breeze, sometimes circling a few times, as if to show off its beauty; sometimes flipping a few heels, as if playing a game with a bird; sometimes drilling down, but immediately flying mischievously.
After a while, my sister's butterfly kite also flew up, watching the kite fly freely in the blue sky, we have unspeakable happiness in our hearts!
The author closely follows the requirements of "looking at pictures and writing essays", carefully observes, adopts the observation method from the whole to the part, from the main to the secondary, not only writes what he sees, but also properly links life to write what he thinks, which is a good article.
Assignment 3: Write about traditional Chinese festivals
Fan Wen 1: Dragon Boat Festival
"Hundreds of miles of different winds, thousands of miles of different customs." My hometown is also in Changsha, Hunan. During the Dragon Boat Festival, we have to eat rice dumplings and race dragon boats - but it's hilarious!
Eating zongzi during the Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional custom, and the reason why this custom can be passed down to this day is because it is deeply loved by everyone. Because when eating zongzi, it is always a big family sitting in a large courtyard while chatting and eating zongzi. When eating rice dumplings, everyone does not eat their own, but first helps others peel them to let others eat first, and then eat themselves. Parents peel children, wives peel husbands, husbands peel wives... This is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people - the spirit of humility. You help me peel, I help you peel, I push you, you push me, so the whole courtyard is made lively by your words, I say a word. Everyone laughs when they eat rice dumplings. Laughter filled the courtyard
Dragon boat racing is also a major traditional custom of the Dragon Boat Festival. The scene during the dragon boat race is extremely spectacular. Dozens of dragon boats were planted with flags of different colors, and each flag was embroidered with a dragon. A flag is a dragon boat team. There are about 8 or 9 rows of rowers on the dragon boat team, and there is a drummer at the front, and the drummer is mainly to add momentum to the team. The drummers and rowers must have great strength, because only in this way can the drums be beaten and the boat rowed fast, and the first place can be won. Looking at the faces of the dragon boat team members covered with beads of sweat, and the green tendons on their heads and hands, you can see how hard they work!
The Dragon Boat Festival is a grand festival. During the Dragon Boat Festival, we were all happy. The sky was filled with the laughter of all of us!
This article mainly introduces the Dragon Boat Festival in the author's hometown in detail, especially the traditional customs such as eating rice dumplings and racing dragon boats, which not only shows the liveliness of the Dragon Boat Festival in his hometown, but also expresses the author's love for the Dragon Boat Festival in his hometown. The language is intimate and natural, and infectious.
Fan Wen II: Spring Festival
The annual Spring Festival is coming, and everyone is preparing.
Why is there a Spring Festival? Because there is a legend that in ancient times there was a very fierce animal called "Nian", and whenever the night of Chinese New Year's Eve, "Nian" would come out everywhere to do evil and harm the people. In order to pass the "New Year" safely, people did not dare to sleep that night Chinese New Year's Eve. Everyone gathered around a fire, ate and drank and chatted, and from time to time threw bamboo into the fire and burned it. When the bamboo burned in the fire, it made a loud cracking sound, frightening Nian into hiding far away, and no longer dared to enter the village to harm the people.
In the evening of Chinese New Year's Eve, I kept vigil every year, stayed up all night, watched the Spring Festival Gala, made dumplings, set off firecrackers... Looking forward to a prosperous new year. Before twelve o'clock, I took down the Spring League on the door and put the newly written one on it, adding to the festive atmosphere, after which I gave the elders and the elderly a peaceful and happy year. When the clock strikes at twelve o'clock, firecrackers begin to be set off. "Whizzing" fireworks sprayed into the sky, "pop" a sound, a point like an arrow off the string flew into the sky, opened a smiley face, everyone cheered. After twelve o'clock, the dumplings are just on the pot, and they begin to eat the dumplings, so it is the time of the child, taking the alternation of the old and the new, and the meaning of the coming of the child.
The streets before the Spring Festival are crowded with people, all of whom go to buy New Year goods, and everyone wants to have a peaceful year. There are always a few words "Happy New Year" written on the door, and the store is full of cheerful and festive music!
I love Spring Festival!
This is a narrative article describing the Spring Festival, the context of the article is clearly visible, the description of the Chinese New Year's Eve's lively eating reunion dinner, dumplings, and watching fireworks in the evening is vivid and concrete, the language is lively and bright, full of interest, and a large number of spoken languages in life are used, making the article more natural and kind.
Assignment 4: I did a small experiment
Sample 1: Interesting little experiment
In the last class on Friday afternoon, we did a fun little experiment. For this fascinating experiment, I prepared paper, brushes, water, white vinegar and candles on Wednesday.
The exciting moment finally arrived, and the teacher of the lab class demonstrated it to us first. First prepare a piece of paper, then light the candle, and then pick up the paper and bake it on the fire, be careful not to light the paper, bake for a while, the teacher picked up the paper and showed it to us, and the words 'month' and 'day' were clearly displayed on the paper. The teacher asked us why the words appeared on the paper, and everyone replied in unison: "I wrote in advance on the paper."
The teacher smiled softly and taught us how to write secret words, and we could write an invisible word on the paper with water or white vinegar or other colorless liquid.
Finally, the teacher let us do it ourselves, I used a brush dipped in white vinegar to write a 'big' word on the white paper, just close to the lit candle to bake, this is really not an easy task, all of a sudden the paper is on fire, I panicked and threw the paper into the ground, the fire was extinguished, and a large hole appeared in the middle of the paper. I looked at the classmates in the back, and he had baked out a 'human' word.
I wrote another word and dried the paper, and this time I carefully took it to the fire and roasted it, roasting on the left and baking on the right, and the paper was all charred, and the words were not shown.
I tried it more carefully, and finally managed to bake a 'good' word, looking at the results of my efforts, my heart was sweeter than honey. Little experiments are so much fun!
The assignment echoes from beginning to end, highlighting the fun of small experiments. The study uses action description, language description, psychological description and demeanor description to narrate the experimental process of "baking words", highlighting the magic of scientific secrets, and telling us that only by understanding the truth can we do things better.
Fan Wen II: A small scientific experiment
Today, the teacher said that he would lead us to do a small scientific experiment called blowing table tennis. We listened, and it was like hanging the key on my chest – happy!
I saw that the teacher first rolled a piece of white paper into a conical shape, and then glued the funnel with tape, the upper mouth was very large, and the lower mouth was about one centimeter. In this way, a "paper funnel" is made.
The teacher took out a golden ping-pong ball, threw it into the funnel from the top, and asked us: "Blowing up the air from the lower mouth, will you blow the ball away?" The students scrambled to answer, some saying yes, some saying no. I thought: Ping-pong balls are so light, they will definitely be blown up
The teacher blew up hard, several times, but when he flew out first, he fell down again. Then he looked for Yang Zhibo to blow, he said that his lung capacity was still 1800, the result was the same, failure! Zhang Xinyi volunteered to take the stage and boasted: "When I was in the first grade, my lung capacity was 2,000! Or I'll come! He blew his face red and his neck was thick, but he was not successful. Daniel Zhang Bing said, "It's still 2,000, at most it's 20." The students laughed when they heard it, but I was a bit of a monk - I couldn't feel my head.
Later, the teacher told us the mystery of it, and it turned out that the air flow that was blown in was divided into three streams: the first air flow bypassed the ping-pong ball and "escaped"; the second air flow followed the surface of the ping-pong ball, came to the top of the ping-pong ball, and pressed down; and the rare third air flow pushed the ball upwards, canceling out the second and third air currents. So, the ping-pong ball only jumped up a little and fell down again.
This little experiment is really interesting. It made me understand that scientific knowledge in life is everywhere, the mysteries of science are endless, and we need to spend our lives exploring.
By describing a small experiment of blowing a ping-pong ball, this article makes the little author understand that the scientific knowledge in life is everywhere, the mysteries of science are infinite, and we need to spend our lives to explore the truth. The small author can comprehensively use the description methods such as language description, demeanor description, action description, etc., and the article has vitality. The meaning is simple and intriguing.
Assignment 5: Wonderful Imagination
Fan Wenyi: If I had a pair of wings
Every day I can see butterflies flying around in the sky, and I feel at ease. The two pairs of long wings of the dragonfly trembled to make themselves gliding happily; and the industrious little bee, which flapped its wings to make itself fly happily; the cute little bird spread its wings and flew high in the sun. It occurred to me that if I had wings too...
If I had wings when I was born, others would have been very surprised and envious. At that time, I will carefully protect it. If I were to go out and play, I would add beautiful colors to my wings, and people would follow me in surprise for a moment, so many people would not come home very late
If I had a pair of wings, I would fly everywhere to see my family, to Harbin to see my grandmother, grandfather, and sister, to Jiamusi to see my grandfather, grandmother, aunt, and sister-in-law, and to Toronto, Canada to see my brother and sister. How happy!
If I had wings, I would fly to Baghdad with a few bags of rice to feed people and ask for warmth. Tell Bush not to march into Baghdad
I'm also going to fly into the universe to explore the mysteries. Perhaps, when I come back, I will already be a great scientist and astrologer!
Not good! it's raining! I had to go home and wait for the sky to clear. When it finally cleared, I flew up to Aunt Rainbow to hit the slide, which was very interesting.
I wish I had a pair of beautiful, endearing wings.
This is an imaginary article. The young author imagines that he can have a pair of beautiful, cute wings, and have wings to do a lot of meaningful things, and the whole article feels interesting and beneficial to read. Without whimsy, how can childhood be colorful? Extremely recommended!
Fan Wen II: If I were a small drop of water
If I were a small drop of water, I would turn into a drizzle of spring cattle and water the crops, so that every place would have a good harvest every year.
If I were a small drop of water, in the winter, I would gather with other small droplets, become beautiful snowflakes, scattered, like the fairy tale "fairy scattered flowers", let people feel comfortable, and killed pests for the farmer uncle, the farmer uncle said: "It is really a 'snow mega year', next year there must be a good harvest."
If I were a small droplet of water, I would merge into a stream with other small droplets, play in the arms of the sea mother, play tired, lie in the arms of the sea mother, look up at the twinkling stars in the sky, let all the fatigue disappear and disappear with the wind.
yes! It's good to make a small drop of water, would you also be willing to make a small drop?
A small drop of water can be a drizzle, it can be a snowflake... A simple drop of water, full of your good wishes. From your article, the teacher saw an imaginative you! The article is rich in imagination and vivid in language, it is an excellent imagination essay, come on!
Assignment Six: Those who have characteristics around you
Fan Wenyi: My friend Chen Zongyang
I have a good friend who is inseparable, he is my brother - Chen Zongyang.
We played from the age of six until we were ten. Chen Zongyang is thinner than me, taller than me, but he has more strength than me, and he always wins when I play wrench wrists with him.
He loves to play with remote control cars the most, and the drift I practiced in four weeks, he learned in less than a day. He is also very energetic in playing computer games, games played by two people, he can pass the level alone. He calculates very well, and he can know the answer with a little calculation, and even the computer can't keep up with his speed
He attended Jinshu Elementary School, and his classmates liked him very much. At one of the Autumn Games, he took the second place in the 800-meter run, and everyone in the class nicknamed him "Liu Xiang Second".
The language of this article is concise, the thinking is clear, the narrative is organized, and it is easy to understand. The author's description of the brother's character image is very vivid and concrete, the feelings are sincere, close to reality, so that the reader has a further understanding of the brother. The full text is vivid and is a good study.
Fan Wen II: The gluttonous brother
There was a man with thick eyebrows, big eyes, a small nose, and a greedy little mouth. Do you know who he is? He's my brother
My brother was very gluttonous, so his nickname was "Eight Commandments of pigs". Once, my mother bought a lot of food, and when my brother saw it, he wanted to eat it, but his mother refused. After my brother listened, his heart itched, and he wanted to eat. At this time, my mother's phone rang, and after listening to the phone, my mother said, "I'm going out for a while." When my brother heard this, he danced with his hands. He rummaged through boxes and cabinets to find food, and in a few moments, he found it. He ate a lot, and when his mother came back, she said, "You are really a little pig with eight precepts, and you should eat less and drink more water in the future." When my brother heard this, he giggled and said, "Got it, Mom."
This is my little piggy eight precepts brother, you now know how greedy he is!
This article, through the description of appearance, makes us have a first impression of the characters, and the author grasps the characteristics of his brother's love to eat to narrate. The language of the whole text is lively, the description is delicate, and the love for his brother is revealed between the lines.
Assignment 7: National Treasure Giant Panda
Fan Wenyi: Cute panda
Today, my father and many teachers and children, together with me, drove to visit the Anji Bamboo Expo Park.
Today I deliberately went to see the national treasure giant panda of our country. Giant pandas are mainly distributed in Sichuan, Gansu and Shaanxi regions of China. Captive giant pandas mainly eat tender bamboo, apples, milk, bread and so on. After 8 months, I especially love to eat bamboo, bamboo shoots, and bamboo shoots. As soon as you walk into the Bamboo Expo Garden, you will see a phoenix made of bamboo. It's beautiful. Follow the winding path in the park to the Panda Pavilion. First of all, what catches the eye is a cute panda lying in an artificial environment, standing outside the fence, looking around, the panda's body is fat, the tail is short, and the fur is smooth like black satin. The head and body are white, with a pair of furry black ears on the head. The two round black eyes are like wearing a pair of large sunglasses. I heard my father say that pandas were very lively and active when they were young, climbing up and down all day, but when they grew up, they were particularly lazy. He often slept with his paws on his head, and when he was hungry, he swung his chubby body to find something to eat. Pandas are first-class protected animals in China, which are only available in China and are rare in number. I hope that they will breed more and more under the protection of humans, so that children around the world can play with the giant panda at close range like me to see its cute appearance.
Although the article is small, it is not lacking in highlights. For example, the author's description of the giant panda uses a certain order to describe, such as "first" and "look around". And the small author is good at using overlapping words, such as: "furry", "chubby", etc. not only highlight the characteristics of giant pandas, but also increase the color of the article.
Fan Wen II: Giant pandas in the zoo
During the summer vacation, my mother took me to the zoo. In the zoo, I saw many animals, but the most interesting thing was the cute giant panda.
It's chubby, round, and cute. Their heads and bodies are white, and only their eye rings, ears, shoulders, and legs are black-brown. In particular, the pair of black eye circles on the white face, like wearing a pair of sunglasses, coupled with the clumsy movements and the look of walking up and looking around, it looks very cute.
The giant pandas in the zoo are trained and perform many shows! My favorite thing is watching giant pandas flip heels. It shrinks into a ball, living like a large leather ball.
When the panda sleeps, it is not honest. Sometimes it gently pats its stomach with its front paws; sometimes, as soon as it kicks its legs, it rolls over. I thought it was awake, but it was still asleep. When it woke up, it rolled over, rubbed its eyes with its hands, and looked at people curiously.
When the panda eats, it often sits down cross-legged with its front paws grasping the tender bamboo and sending it to its mouth. It loves to eat tender bamboo leaves. When you are full, you have to moisten your throat with water. It walked to the edge of the pool, leaned down, leaned its front legs against the edge of the pool, lowered its head, and grunted and drank. Looking at its appearance, it is really laughable.
Pandas are the world's most precious animals and darlings in zoos. Its every move will add endless fun to thousands of tourists.
I love giant pandas.
This is an article describing the giant pandas in the zoo, the beginning is very clear, playing the role of the general leader of the whole text, highlighting the characteristics of the giant panda's cute posture, detailed and appropriate, the content is specific, in a relaxed and pleasant tone, telling us about the cute appearance of the giant panda when sleeping and eating, which is endlessly evocative.
Assignment 8: Making up a fairy tale
Fan Wen I: Self-righteous little rooster
One sunny morning, a little rooster went for a walk. As we walked, we came to the small river. It saw the ducks swimming happily, so it shouted, "Little ducks, let's swim in the race!" The little duck said, "No, you can't swim." The little rooster said, "I'm going to be more, but if I don't believe it, I'll jump right away."
With that, the little rooster jumped violently into the water. Instead of swimming forward, it sinks downwards. The little rooster cried out for help: "Help! Help me! "It flapped its wings desperately, but to no avail.
Just when the little rooster was dying, the little duck quickly lifted the little rooster on his back and immediately swam to the shore.
After a while they came ashore, and the little duck gently placed the little rooster on the ground and asked, "Why are you so stupid?" The little rooster said ashamedly, "It's all my self-righteousness." The little duck said, "Never do such a stupid thing again!" ”
This article is imaginative, describing for us the fact that a small rooster finally suffers the bitter fruit because of its self-righteousness, and admonishes us to be humble. This article is simple and intriguing. If the small author can depict the self-righteous appearance of the big rooster in detail, the article will be better.
Fan Wen II: Silkworms and spiders
Both are textile experts, and they decided to compare and see who has excellent results. From his fan-like feathers, the peacock selected the most beautiful one to make a certificate of award, ready to give to the outstanding.
The spider climbs up the corner of the wall first and weaves in a circle. In a short while, they were woven into a net, one ring after another, and they were fine and dense.
After weaving the web, the spider hurriedly introduced to everyone: "The web I knitted is very strong, even if it is windy and rainy, it can stick to many flying insects." Three meals a day, I can eat every meal. ”
The white fat silkworm climbed up the grass mountain, and she knitted so well, so fast. Left, right, meticulous, in a short while it was woven into a round cocoon, and the snow-white cocoon was bare.
At this time, the silkworm also explained to everyone: "Although I spit out a lot of silk, I did not keep it at all, and gave it all to people to form colorful silk."
The spider happily climbed up to the peacock and said to the peacock, "After listening to the introduction of the silkworm, this glorious award should belong to her." ”
This is a fairy tale rich in philosophy. The story tells the story of a silkworm and a spider with more ability to weave than to a silkworm, and finally the silkworm sacrifices the cocoon to a person. Through this story the author conveys the idea that "people must have dedication". The article is concise and condensed, rich in meaning, and very good.