Countryside march
In March, when the mountains and flowers are full of flowers and the birds are singing, how can I, Yang Wanli, resist the temptation of spring! With the spring breeze and the spring light, they happily went to the countryside. When the last rays of sunset set, we finally came to the mountain village. Oh, tired, just stay in this "Xinshi Xugong Store"!
In the early hours of the next morning, a crisp birdsong woke me up from my sleep, and I got out of bed in my clothes and pushed open the window: Oh! Nice fresh country air! Nice charming countryside views!
You'll be greeted by the sparse hedges that lead to the trails and paths that lead to the distance, and the golden canola flowers that come from near and far. I couldn't help but step out of the hut and take a leisurely stroll down the trail. The peach blossoms and apricot blossoms that once flourished have long since withered. And a few poplar trees on the side of the road, each branch spitting out tender green new leaves, the leaves of the crystal dew shining in the morning sun; the willow trees hanging down the countless green silks fluttering in the soft spring wind; the birds singing beautiful songs on the branches; the grass shakes its head, as if it is dancing in the spring dance... Ah, it's intoxicating.
The blooming rape flowers in the vegetable garden are stretching out their pink and tender petals, facing the sun and blowing the spring breeze, so it is not lively! I squatted down and hugged a bouquet of golden rape flowers, the fragrance of the delicate and elegant came to my nose, and when I looked closely, the yellow petals also had a trace of pale white, revealing a bubble of light green, and the petals were thin enough to be a little transparent, and a little crystal clear. Suddenly, a silver bell-like laughter sucked my eyes away like a magnetite. It turned out to be a group of cute naughty children catching butterflies. At this moment, a butterfly landed on the cauliflower, and a little girl crept close to it and grabbed it like lightning. The girl held the butterfly and showed off in front of her companions, and due to the excessive excitement, her hand was loosened, and the clever butterfly flew away. By the time the girl reflected, the butterflies had already flown into the cauliflower bushes and could not be found. The little girl was not discouraged, and began to catch the butterflies again, and those butterflies flew leisurely, sometimes dangling in front of her eyes, sometimes hovering over her head, sometimes falling on the branches, sometimes stinging the blades of grass... As if deliberately teasing her. Seeing that the little girl was about to win, the yellow butterfly flew into the cauliflower bush with a "whoosh", she bent down and carefully searched for the butterfly in the flower bush, she looked for ah, looked for ah, how could not figure out where the butterfly was hiding.
1. What kind of scene is the countryside in The Spring of March?
2, "I" only went to the mountain village at night, tired, in the stay.
3. What views of the new city are written in the article?
4. Why should the word "hu" be put in quotation marks in the article?
5. Excerpt the words describing the action in the article:
6. Sketch out sentences that use anthropomorphism in the article.
7. What is the author's mood from the article? Why?
Methods and techniques of scene description
First, grasp the characteristics of the scenery: Careful observation of the written scenery and grasping the characteristics are the premise for writing such articles. And whether you can grasp the characteristics of the scenery is the so-called "quiet observation, familiar with the heart". Therefore, it is required that in observation, be good at grasping the unique changes in the color, form, sound, smell and other aspects of the scenery in different seasons, different times, different regions, and different moods, and observe and experience through the senses such as eyes, ears, nose, tongue, and body. In this way, we can grasp the characteristics of the scene and describe it.
Second, we must choose a good angle of observation. To choose a good observation angle, we must first establish a good observation point. According to the needs of expression, it is necessary to use the method of fixed foothold and changing the foothold to observe the scenery, or to look at the scene from a distance, or to look closely, or to look up, or to overlook.
Third, arrange the order of description. The order of scene description is generally divided into two types: spatial order and chronological order. Spatial order: Generally take a fixed observation point, according to the order of line of sight movement in turn to write out the scenes in each position. There is also a spatial order, which does not take a fixed observation point, but describes the scene with the shift of the observer's position, which is called the tour order. Chronological order: The same place in different times, its scenery is changing, according to a certain period of time in turn, can show the richness of the scenery, so that people have a sense of beauty. There are long and short periods, long periods such as spring, summer, autumn and winter, and short periods such as morning, noon, twilight and night. Which chronological order to choose should depend on the characteristics of the depicted object,
Fourth, the use of dynamic and static combination of techniques. Writing only static scenes can easily make the article sluggish, and only writing moving scenes may lose stability. Only by combining the formal characteristics of static depictions and dynamic depictions to convey the strengths of the gods, the painted scenes will be concrete, vivid and leave a deep impression on the reader. Depicting scenes needs to paint shapes, colors, and sounds, as if people can see, touch, and hear, which requires the use of those vivid languages as much as possible. Therefore, we must be good at finding verbs and some appropriate adjectives that can best express the characteristics of the scene, especially good at using rhetorical methods such as metaphor and anthropomorphism, but we must pay attention to not piling up rhetoric.
Example 1, rustling, rustling, the wind is blowing, the breeze is gentle, like a transparent gauze, gently brushing on my face, very comfortable. Taking a deep breath against the wind, and then carefully distinguishing, the wind sandwiched the faint fragrance of the earth and the green smell of the grass made my heart suddenly open. Smell it again, it's still a little sweet. Ah, the wind gradually became stronger, following the whistling sound, and at the foot of the distant mountain, a layer of white waves rushed over.
Example 2: It is a tree that strives to go upstream, with a straight stem and a straight branch. Its stem is usually high, as if artificial, and within a zhang, there are no side branches; all its branches are all upwards, and they are close together, as if artificial, becoming a bunch, and there is no horizontal escape; its wide leaves are also in the middle, almost no oblique, let alone upside down; its skin, smooth and silvery halo, slightly glowing blue. This is a tree that stands stubbornly despite the pressure of the wind and snow in the north.
Demonstration 3, this is a good melon. Under the cover of green leaves, the turquoise melon peel is revealed, reflecting a few soft sunlight. Pull out the branches, you see, what a big one! It lay there quietly, like an unhatched dinosaur egg left behind by ancient times. The light green and dark green cloth on the melon skin have become many strange patterns, the dark green resembles the XiangJiang River of "flooding the river and the blue", and the light green resembles the "daughter green" in Mr. Zhu Ziqing's eyes. It reflects the sunlight as if it were beckoning you with a clutch of divine light: come and admire, come and taste the mysterious and dense "circle" that has been created for you to dedicate to me for him.
Demonstration 4, that circle, like a fan in Grandma's hand. On a hot summer night, the moon climbed up the treetops. In a small courtyard, a few stone tables, a sleeping chair, lying a small me, next to me sat a white-haired grandmother, holding a round fan in her hand, gently shaking beside me. Drove away the heat of the summer night and brought the coolness of the wind. The fan was so old, as old as Grandma's, with concave, convex lines on it, like Grandma's wrinkled face, and like Grandma's green hands that didn't know how much work they had done. It was late at night. The round fan was still shaking, shaking out my grandmother's deep love and strong affection for me.
Suxin Xugong store
(Southern Song Dynasty) Yang Wanli
The hedge is sparse and deep, and the flowers at the head of the tree have not yet become shaded.
Children rush to chase yellow butterflies, flying into cauliflower nowhere to be found.
Notes: 1). Xugong store in Suxin City: Xinshi: Place name. Present-day Xinshi Town, Deqing County, Zhejiang Province. Xinshi was also the winemaking center of the Song Dynasty, and the government set up a liquor tax officer in the new city, which was held by Zhu Xi's son Zhu Shu. Yang Wanli is obsessed with the wine lined with the West River estuary of the new city. Drunk. Retain the Xugong store in Xinshi. Xugongdian, the name of the hotel opened by the family of Xu. (Gong: An ancient honorific title for men). 2）． Hedge: Fence. 3）． Sparse: Sparse.
4）． Path: Trail. 5） ． Deep: Far-reaching. 6). Tree head: On the head of the branch. 7). No: No.
8）． Shade: The leaves are lush and dense. 9）． Rush: Run. 10). Yellow Butterfly: A beautiful yellow butterfly. 11). Seek: Find
8. The first two sentences of the poem are described, and the last two sentences of the poem are described. The whole poem combines movement and static, the characters and the scenery are integrated, and the overall picture is full of the breath of spring, especially in the last two sentences, the picture of children catching butterflies jumps on the paper, vivid, as if it is right in front of you. Talk about looking, what do you seem to see? What do you hear?
9. What scenes are written in this poem?
10. Fill in the blanks according to the text: ( ) fences, ( ) trails, ( ) children,
( ) of butterflies, ( ) of cauliflower, ( ) of trees.
11. Silently write two poems about describing the scenery:
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12. Complete a mind map or scene painting according to the content of "Xugongdian in Suxin City". 13. Read "Xugongdian in Suxin City" with emotion.
14, please use today's harvest in 30 minutes for sketch training (you can write multiple fragments, each fragment is empty a line), see who writes faster and more good, see who writes the most beautifully.