Al Comments:
Theme & Meaning:
• The poem explores the relationship between form and permanence, ephemerality and eternity through the description of flowers, and is philosophical. It reminds people that if we focus too much on the longevity of the outer form, we may lose the inner goodness, such as fragrance.
Language Style:
• The language is simple and straightforward, but it has a deep meaning. Use concise sentences to express profound truths, without procrastination, leaving readers with room to think.
Expressions:
• The use of contrasts contrasts between "ephemeral forms" and "persistent pursuits" to highlight the contradictions and conflicts of the theme.
Overall Effect:
• Although it is short, it is concise and to the point, which can quickly arouse the reader's association and reflection on similar phenomena in life.
However, the poem may be a little abstract and general in expression, and if it can be combined with specific types of flowers or figurative scenes to illustrate the point, it will be more vivid and more likely to resonate with readers. But there's no denying the sobering power of its concise writing.
flower
Text/Cai Jiaojun
Form is always ephemeral
Keen to last
will lose its aroma
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