The modification proposal of "the wind winds around the bamboo knee and plays the green leaves".
The Shanglian "Wind Around the Bamboo Knee Play Green Leaves" recommended in the platform's "Creative Inspiration" is, and its flat distribution is,
Ping Ping (old sound) / Ping Ping (new sound).
There are some shortcomings in this sentence:
First, it is not suitable to be closed as a link, which is inconsistent with the requirement of "the lower link is closed in Pingsheng" in the "General Principles of Lianlu";
The second is that there is a lack of rhythm in the three-character foot (tail three thousand), which is similar to the "General Principles of Lianlu" in the "Article 10 to avoid taboo issues (3) to avoid the end of the sentence as much as possible; ";
Third, if the old voice is labeled, there is also a lack of rhythm of six consecutive consecutive words, and the lack of non-alternating displacement of 2, 4, and 6 double positions (but when labeled according to the new voice, it is not replaced).
In order to avoid these shortcomings, it is recommended to modify this sentence to read:
★★★ 上联：风绕竹林添雅韵（平仄仄平平仄仄，旧声）★★★
In this way, the revised sentence fully conforms to the requirements of the prosodic norms of the upper couplet: the joint foot is closed, the 2nd, 4th, and 6th digits are alternately "仄平仄", there is no solitary flat, there is no solitary 仄, and there is no tail three 仄. It's just that the connection and meaning are different from the original sentence.
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#下联: The wind surrounds the bamboo knees and plays the green leaves, seeking the upper link#
