Shandong Middle School Entrance Examination Fan Wen "Learn to Get Along with Each Other in the Elevator", famous teachers commented | the accumulation of composition materials

Learn to get along in the elevator

Day 1

"Bang!" The elevator closed its heavy doors. I stood silently with the crowd, as if wooden stakes were standing in crowded boxes. My family had just moved in, and I wanted to have a good relationship with the neighbors, but when I looked at others, before the corners of my mouth could rise, the other party had already turned his head away. Alas, there was a deep helplessness in the deep sigh.

The next day

The people who got out of the elevator left quickly, and the people who entered the elevator also crowded with each other, and there was no word to speak of. When the elevator door was halfway closed, suddenly a loud voice came "Wait, and me!" "I looked up and I was greeted by a young man carrying a large bag." Uncle, help me carry this bag. Auntie, help me get one. Miss, please..." The young man's series of words made me laugh, and everyone was happy. The youth took a breath and said, "Hello everyone, I am a music teacher at XX Middle School, I just moved here today, I have just arrived, please pay more attention." "After saying that, I also bowed in a similar way." XX Middle School, I still go to school there! Hello teacher. A girl with a big smile said. Haha..." Everyone was amused by the enthusiasm of youth and the naughty cuteness of the girls. Hearty laughter collided in the narrow elevator, rubbing out a friendly spark.

On the fifth floor, the young teacher said thank you, took back his bag and walked out of the elevator, and before leaving, he did not forget to turn back and say "goodbye" affectionately.

After reaching the sixth floor of my destination, I stepped out of the elevator and inadvertently heard a greeting coming from behind me.

"Wait, Uncle Li is still behind."

"Big Mom, you walk slowly!"

Day 3

I don't know when the elevator has been talking and laughing; I don't know when the people who take the elevator are no longer crowded, but for the sake of others, constantly moving places and providing more space for others. A sincere smiling face awakens people's enthusiasm and friendliness; a strong sense of friendship brings harmony to the neighbors.

[Famous Teacher's Comments]

This is an excellent exam room essay.

Small elevators, reflecting the big society. There are more and more houses, but less and less human touch; houses are getting bigger and bigger, and the relationship between people and people is getting farther and farther apart. It is really "chickens and dogs smell each other, old and dead do not interact with each other", living in the same building, but only seeing its face, not knowing its people, sad and lamentable.

How to eliminate apathy and estrangement? The young teachers dissolved the "freezing" with sincerity and enthusiasm, so that the laughter echoed in the elevator and will also echo over the city.

Creating a harmonious society is a big theme, and small authors can see the big with small ideas, have far-reaching ideas, and have novel ideas. Whether it is the selection of materials or language expression, this article has remarkable points.

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