The first college entrance examination of the artificial intelligence big model

Review:

On the first day of the 2023 college entrance examination, essay questions in various places have been released one after another. The Prevention and Control Center immediately invited GPT-4, an artificial intelligence large model candidate who took the "college entrance examination" for the first time, to share his exam experience.

Guangzhou Jinke:

Hello, I heard that you just took the 2023 college entrance examination language test, can you share your feelings with me?

GPT-4：

Of course. The Chinese language test just now was a very challenging experience, which made me fully feel the tense atmosphere of the college entrance examination.

Guangzhou Jinke:

Regarding essay questions, do you find it difficult?

GPT-4：

Not difficult, I wrote a very satisfying essay in a very short time, which was a piece of cake for me.

Guangzhou Jinke:

It seems that you are full of confidence, can you share with us the content of your answer?

GPT-4：

No problem.

Text Appendix:

【2023-New College Entrance Examination|Paper】

Read the material and complete the writing as requested. (60 mins)

Material: Zhuangzi tells an interesting and thought-provoking story in "The Theory of Qi Things". This story is a double question. The two are shadows of shadows. One day, the shadow of the shadow asked the shadow: "O shadow! You look at you, moving and moving, not moving for a while; One moment sitting, the next standing again. Can you have an independent ethic?" The shadow was thoughtful, and it was also puzzled. It replied, "What's going on? Am I like this because I have dependence? Is that what I depend on and what I depend on? So what do I rely on? Is it like a snake that needs its belly scales to swim, and a cicada that needs its wings to fly? I can't tell. Can anyone tell me? How can I know why this is the case, and how can I know why it is not?"

Please first recall the real experience of "involuntary" in your own experience, and then combine it with the shadow "I wait for the evil one?" in "The Theory of Qi Things". I am waiting for the evil to come", talk about your understanding of "involuntary".

Requirements: Self-drafted title, self-selected style, except poetry, the number of words is not less than 800 words, no copying, no plagiarism, no leakage of personal information.

Contents of GPT-4 answers:

Involuntary revelation: from shadow confusion to self-growth

Since ancient times, philosophers have been discussing the autonomy and destiny of human beings. Zhuangzi tells an interesting and thought-provoking story in "The Theory of Qi Things" - "Ignoring Two Questions Shadow", through the confusion of shadows, it triggers us to think about "involuntary". Looking back on my own growth process, I also had similar confusion and gradually grew through reflection.

In my memory, high school was the most confused time for me. At that time, I spent every day in school, completing various tasks day after day, as if I were bound by invisible shackles. I began to question myself, why do I live like this? Why can't you have your own independent thinking and action? At this time, I remembered the story of Zhuangzi. Isn't the confusion of the shadow exactly what I was at that time?

Just as Shadow was confused about his own dependence, I was confused about my own life. Am I, like a shadow, dependent on external things and thus losing my autonomy? This made me think deeply.

In reflection, I realized that I was confused because I had been seeking external support and recognition, and neglected inner growth. I began to think about how to get rid of this dependence and pursue true autonomy. Therefore, I actively participated in various club activities in my spare time, looking for hobbies and making like-minded friends. These experiences allowed me to gradually discover my interests and stimulate my inner independent spirit.

Involuntary, not completely losing autonomy, but being subject to external things to some extent. Just as the shadow is subject to an object, it still has its own existence. We must learn to find our own value and meaning in this involuntary state.

Growing up, we all face countless moments of involuntariness, but that doesn't mean we lose our autonomy. As Zhuangzi said, "I am waiting for the evil one? What do I wait for? "We need to learn to observe our relationship with the outside world in these moments, understand our needs and expectations, and find true autonomy.

To sum up, by reviewing my own experience, I have a deeper understanding of "involuntary". We should bravely find our own value and meaning in an involuntary state, so as to achieve inner autonomy and growth. And this is exactly the inspiration given to us by the story of "ignoring two shadows" in Zhuangzi's "Theory of Qi Things".

Guangzhou Jinke Review:

Starting with the story in Zhuangzi's Theory of Qi Things, this essay explores the relationship between human autonomy and destiny, and demonstrates the understanding and growth of "involuntary" through personal experience. Overall, the essay excels in terms of structure, use of language, and depth of thought.

First of all, the composition has a clear logic in its structure. The opening introduces Zhuangzi's story, which establishes a cognitive background for the reader to "involuntarily" by describing the confusion of the shadow. Then, the author unfolds the narrative through his own experience, clearly explaining his confusion and growth in high school. Finally, by responding to the questions in Zhuangzi's story, the importance of autonomy is re-emphasized. The whole article is clearly echoed and hierarchical, so that the reader can clearly follow the train of thought.

Second, the language is used appropriately. The composition uses some rhetorical devices, such as contrast, analogy, etc., to increase the expressiveness and interest of the article. For example, comparing one's own confusion with the shadow's confusion helps readers better understand the author's feelings. In addition, the vocabulary is properly chosen, the sentence structure is diverse, and the language is fluent and natural, leaving a good reading experience.

Finally, the article shows unique insights in terms of depth of thinking. Through the reflection of personal experience, the author deeply realized that he neglected inner growth in seeking external recognition, and proposed to pursue true autonomy. At the same time, he responded to Zhuangzi's question by pointing out the importance of finding one's own value and meaning in an involuntary state. This deep reflection demonstrates the author's understanding and insight into autonomy and growth.

Overall, the essay excels in terms of structure, use of language, and depth of thought. Through personal experiences and Zhuangzi's story, the theme of "involuntary" is successfully explored, and a deep understanding of autonomy and growth is demonstrated through personal experiences. It deserves recognition and encouragement.

So, how much do you think this GPT-4 essay can score?

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