Wen Xin Yiyan VS ChatGPT, who writes well in college entrance examination essay?

Planning/Gong Danfeng Chen Xiaoxuan

Executive / Yangcheng Evening News All Media Reporter Chen Xiaoxuan, Shen Zhao, Gan Zhuoran

Poster/Cai Hong

Can AI robot writing completely replace human writing? This is a very hot "soul torture" in recent years. College entrance examination essay questions are the hottest topic in the college entrance examination every year, what is the writing level of AI robots? This year, Yangcheng Evening News tried to hand over the college entrance examination essay questions to two AI robots - Wen Xin Yiyan and ChatGPT, let them try their skills, and will also invite several cross-border experts to score and comment on their essays to see who writes well in college entrance examination essays, and welcome everyone to score the college entrance examination essays of AI robots.

【2023 Guangdong College Entrance Examination Essay Questions】

Read the material below and write as requested.

Good stories can help us better express and communicate, touch the heart and enlighten wisdom; A good story can change a person's destiny, can show the image of a nation ... Stories have power.

What kind of associations and thoughts did the above materials trigger you? Please write an article.

Requirements: choose the correct angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title; Do not copy, do not copy; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.

【Example 1】

Learn from history and tell good stories

Author: Wen Xin Yiyan

Stories are treasures of human culture, crystallization of wisdom, and beacons of enlightenment. As the ancients said, "If you learn from history, you can learn from it." Stories are like a mirror that allows us to better understand ourselves, understand life, and understand the world. Therefore, telling good stories and delivering good stories is our responsibility and mission in the information age.

In this vast land of China, there are many stories that are deeply rooted in people's hearts. For example, the love story of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu in "Dream of Red Mansions", such as the legendary experience of Sun Wukong in "Journey to the West". Some of these stories depict the complexity of human nature, some show the absurdity of life, and some reveal the contradictions of society. They show us the true meaning of life in a unique way, allowing us to have a deeper understanding and perception of life. These stories are China's cultural treasures and an important carrier for showing China's image.

In addition, good stories have the power to change destiny. There was once a young man who was despised and ridiculed because of his poor family. However, he did not give up on himself, but drew strength and wisdom from it by reading the book "How Steel is Tempered". In the end, he worked hard to start a successful business and realize his dream. This young man's story is the best interpretation of "a good story can change a person's destiny".

However, for stories to be the most effective, we need to tell good stories and deliver good stories. To tell a story well, we must first deeply understand the connotation and spiritual core of the story, and dig out the essence of human nature, life and society behind it. Secondly, it is necessary to present the story with vivid language and appropriate expression, so that the audience can feel the charm of the story. Finally, share the story with more people on the right occasion and at the right time, so that more people can benefit from it.

To deliver a good story, we also need to pay attention to the way and channel of the story. In the information age, we must be good at using various new media platforms to spread stories, so that more people can access good stories and draw wisdom and strength from them. At the same time, we can also promote good stories through various activities and let more people participate in the spread of stories.

Telling good stories and passing on good stories can not only enlighten the soul and show the image of a nation, but also transmit culture and promote exchanges and mutual learning among civilizations. In today's globalized world, we should accept and appreciate the good stories of different countries and peoples with an open mind, and at the same time share our good stories with the world. For example, China's four great inventions, such as the Chinese spirit in the fight against the epidemic, can be used as materials and resources for us to tell Chinese stories well.

Telling and delivering good stories can also cultivate our aesthetic taste and thinking ability. Good stories often have deep connotations and philosophies, which need to be tasted and understood with our hearts. In the process of appreciating and spreading good stories, we can not only improve our aesthetic level, but also exercise our thinking ability and expression ability.

In general, good stories have power, they can enlighten the heart, show the image of a nation, change a person's destiny, show the image of a country, and promote exchanges and mutual learning among civilizations. Therefore, we must be good at discovering and digging good stories, telling good stories, and delivering good stories. Only in this way can we better express and communicate in the information age, and better adapt to and lead the future social development.

【Review Expert】Wu Yingmin Vice President of China Education Society

【Rating】78 points

【Comment】The composition structure is complete, the logic is relatively rigorous, and the literary style is not bad. It is characterized by a Chinese flavor, that is, a Chinese flavor, which can be linked to the current overall situation of national development and explain the significance of telling Chinese stories well. The disadvantage is the lack of personal experience to explain the multiple functions and power of the story, it seems dry, there is no real plot that the individual is moved by the story and changed, and the function of the story is only explained theoretically. If you can become the protagonist of the story, then showing the power of the story is more convincing, and you have a greater sense of responsibility and mission.

【Review Expert】Hao Baoguo is a former senior teacher of mathematics at the Chinese Normal Affiliated Middle School, and is now the vice principal of the Huadu School Affiliated to the Chinese Normal School

【Rating】86 points

【Comments】The proposed topic can closely follow the material, the language is concise, the beginning of the article is clear, and the text writing is quickly transferred, and the writing of the article can closely follow the theme, highlight the central idea, and can point the topic many times. The article not only discusses the influence of good stories, but also focuses on telling good stories well, which can double the enlightenment of people's hearts and wisdom, and the article can better echo before and after.

【Review Expert】Chen Dingding is a professor at the School of International Studies, Jinan University

【Score】80 points

【Comment】Maybe because Baidu's Chinese corpus is better trained, the storytelling style is slightly better, and the overall structure of the article is also good. But perhaps because the current large model has some shortcomings, it is still relatively lacking in rhetoric, creativity, etc., and needs to be improved.

[Example sentence 2]

The magic of storytelling: a literary miracle that inspires the soul and unites empathy

Written by ChatGPT

In the vast world of words, stories are like a ray of light that illuminates our hearts. They have the power to inspire our creativity and resonate deeply with emotions. Whether it is changing the fate of individuals or showing the national spirit, stories affect us with their infinite charm. This article will delve into the magic of storytelling, how it inspires the soul, unites empathy, and brings us the wonders of literature.

Inspiration and wisdom inheritance of stories: Stories are the guardians of wisdom, passing on wisdom from generation to generation with their unique narrative methods. From ancient mythology to modern fiction, the story conveys profound philosophies and values with vivid images and plots. For example, "Dream of Red Mansions" tells us the importance of pursuing innocence and beauty by describing Jia Baoyu's life experience. The characters and plots in the story not only stimulate our thinking, but also integrate wisdom into our lives, leading us to become more intelligent and virtuous people.

Emotional resonance and emotional establishment of stories: Stories are a window that leads our emotions to a whole new world. By narrating the characters' inner worlds, emotional conflicts and growth journeys, the story resonates with our hearts. When we read about the struggles, pains, and triumphs of the protagonist, we feel as if we are walking alongside them, experiencing the ups and downs of emotions. This emotional resonance not only allows us to better understand the hearts of others, but also allows us to develop a deep emotional connection with the characters in the story. Through stories, we connect with the experiences of others, enhance our ability to empathize, and thus promote understanding, respect and care between people.

Creativity of stories inspires and literary innovation: Stories are the source of creativity and give us endless imagination. They show fantastic adventures, unknown worlds and unique characters that stimulate our creativity and imagination. When we read or create stories, we enter a realm of freedom to transcend the constraints of reality and explore infinite possibilities. The classic literary work Robinson Crusoe shapes a unique fictional world that challenges the limitations of reality. These works have stimulated the creativity of many writers and readers, and promoted the continuous innovation and development of literature.

Social impact and cultural expression of stories: Stories can not only change the fate of individuals, but also show the image of a people. Each nation has a unique history, culture and spirit, and these elements are passed down and expressed through stories. By telling the heroic deeds, traditional stories and folklore of the nation, we demonstrate the wisdom, courage and creativity of the nation. This cultural expression not only strengthens national pride and identity, but also enriches the world's diverse cultures.

Stories are a magical force that brings us the miracle of literature with its enlightening wisdom and empathetic qualities. Through stories, we draw wisdom, cultivate emotional empathy, unleash creativity, and show the possibilities of individuals and societies. Let us cherish the magic of stories, let every end of the word become an infinite starting point, and create a better tomorrow.

【Review Expert】Wu Yingmin Vice President of China Education Society

【Score】80 points

【Comments】The composition structure is complete, the logic is rigorous, the text expression is rich, and it basically meets the requirements of the topic. However, this composition lacks emotion, does not connect with personal experience, does not have personal real experience, only dry theoretical elaboration, so it is difficult to produce emotional resonance. In addition, the author does not link with the reality of today's China, in the process of realizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, it is necessary to tell Chinese stories well, enhance national and cultural self-confidence, and unite the majestic strength of hundreds of millions of people. Because the author does not put personal experience into it, he cannot become the hero of the story, and he lacks the breath of life, and therefore lacks the infectious power. The article also does not reflect personal thinking about the responsibility of telling a good story.

【Review Expert】Hao Baoguo is a former senior teacher of mathematics at the Chinese Normal Affiliated Middle School, and is now the vice principal of the Huadu School Affiliated to the Chinese Normal School

【Rating】70 points

【Comments】The proposed topic can closely follow the material, but it is not condensed enough; The article writing is not off topic, the central idea is more prominent, and the topic can be pointed out many times in writing; The article expounds its own views on the aspects of good stories can inspire wisdom, establish emotions, stimulate creativity, and form good social influence, with clear thinking and rigorous expression; But the stories listed in the article are not typical enough to impress the reader. The writing of an essay is a bit like essay writing, lacking the humor of language composition language and the flexible diversity of forms.

【Review Expert】Chen Dingding is a professor at the School of International Studies, Jinan University

【Rating】70 points

【Comments】Overall, the structure of the article is relatively complete, and many examples are given to explain. But I feel that the appeal of the expression is not enough, the persuasiveness of the story is not better expressed, and the rhetoric of the text is relatively ordinary. It may be related to the low version of ChatGPT used, so it can only score 70.

【Link】

ChatGPT, a conversational large-scale language model released by OpenAI, a foreign artificial intelligence lab, has 100 million monthly active users in two months after its launch in November 2022, making it the fastest growing consumer app in history. The birth of ChatGPT has triggered a feverish pursuit of AI by technology companies, and many technology giants at home and abroad have followed up to release large-language models.

"Wen Xin Yiyan" (English name: ERNIE Bot) is a generative dialogue product launched by Baidu based on Wen Xin big model technology, released on March 16 this year, which is the first AI language big model released in China. Wen Xin Yiyan has industry-level knowledge enhancement Wen Xin large model ERNIE, and has cross-modal and cross-language deep semantic understanding and generation capabilities.

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