Three-five hoe "Children vs Famous Artists' Creative Dialogue"
It has always been a child who reads the works of famous artists, but this time, it is different!
Elementary school students write stories, and famous artists come to read them!
Support the children's reading and writing growth of the three or five hoes, invite well-known creators, editors, writers, etc. as special tutors to dialogue with children: read children's works, encourage children psychologically and creatively, and provide children with a richer reading and writing perspective, and enhance children's motivation to read and write.
Before sharing the children's works, I would like to share with you a widely circulated story: the famous French literary giant Balzac, once had an interesting incident. An old lady took a worn-out homework notebook and asked him, "Great writer, can you help me see if this boy has talent and whether he will be the material for the house in the future?" After Balzac took the homework book, he looked at it seriously and said, "Well, this boy is not very talented, he doesn't have much spirit, and it is difficult to be a writer with this." ”
Good fellow, this homework book is actually a manuscript written by Balzac himself 30 years ago, and he did not recognize it, and this old lady is his teacher. Before becoming famous, Balzac's works were often returned, but he firmly believed that diligence could make up for it, he read desperately, widely exposed to society and understood life, and after several years of hard work, his novels finally resonated in France.
It can be seen that creation is not an easy task, and it requires continuous accumulation and continuous training in order to achieve a qualitative leap. In the online creation and writing class of "Guardian of the Gods of Dreams and Flowers" created by three or five hoes, many children have completed a stunning fantasy story after a period of reading and creative practice.
The work we want to appreciate today is the story "Xiaomei and the Forest Kingdom" created by the second-grade Li Shuyu children, and Su Xiaolao, a specially invited writer and screenwriter of the three-five hoe, commented on the children's works, and she praised them one after another: "Don't underestimate the creativity, imagination and adventurous spirit of the children, once they enter smoothly, they will become the kings in their castles." "Check it out!
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Writer, screenwriter, former editor-in-chief of the original edition of "Reader", representative work "Whole World Love" series, "Boyfriend Who Doesn't Understand Romance", "Encounters Through Existence", etc., will soon launch the latest novel "Ear DustLess Trouble".
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Li Shuyu
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A girl who loves to read and write stories.
PART1: Excerpts from children's works
Xiaomei and the Forest Kingdom
Shuyu Li Second grade Beijing
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The tree elf said, "Come with me!" "They came to a cave with a table and two chairs, a vase of flowers on the table, and a painting hanging from the stone wall.
The tree elf asked Xiaomei to sit down, and Xiaomei asked, "Why did I come here?" ”
The tree elf said, "You drank a bottle of milk before you came here, didn't you?" ”
Xiaomei said, "How do you know?" ”
The tree elf said, "When the forest kingdom needs human help, it will make a special bottle of milk to be shipped to the human world, and the people who drink the milk will come here." ”
Xiaomei asked again, "What's going on here?" ”
The tree elf said: "A year ago, monsters kept breaking into the forest kingdom, and the calm of the past was broken. They polluted the sea, cut down large woods, planted seeds of black thorns, killed many animals, and encroached on the forests north of the kingdom. ”
Xiaomei asked again, "Why did I meet a strange bird and a two-tailed witch as soon as I came here?" ”
The tree elves replied, "Because they knew that there were humans coming, they waited for you there and killed you." ”
Xiaomei continued to ask, "When I met the strange bird, the white cat elf saved me, and when the two-tailed witch attacked me, why didn't she come again?" ”
The tree elf said, "The first time maybe the white cat elf met you by chance, only by learning summoning can you let her help you when you need it." ”
Xiaomei asked, "Then when will we start learning?" ”
The tree spirit said, "Tomorrow morning, today I will eat something to rest." ”
The next morning, Xiaomei came to the outside of the cave, where the tree spirit was already there, and the tree elf said, "If you want to successfully summon the guardian spirit, you must be able to do the tiptoe of your right foot, hold the sword and cross your hands, and concentrate on thinking about the cat elf." ”
Xiaomei began to practice, and she was extremely nervous.
For the first time, Xiaomei just stretched out her toes, her body was shaking, she didn't stand still and fell, she failed.
The second time, Xiaomei was even more nervous, her palms were sweating, and she accidentally slipped the sword from her hand and failed again.
The third time, Xiaomei tried to stand firm, clutching the hilt of her sword tightly, thinking of the cat elf. At this time, a white light suddenly appeared, but disappeared again a few seconds later. Xiaomei was very disappointed! The tree elf walked over to Xiaomei and comforted her, "Don't be nervous, you will be able to succeed by practicing a few more times." ”
Xiaomei continued to practice, once again with her right foot on the ground, her hands crossed, holding the handle of the sword steadily, concentrating her mind on trying to recall the white cat elf, at this time, a blinding white light flashed, and the white cat elf wearing a white skirt and holding a long knife finally appeared!
Xiaomei said excitedly, "It's a pleasure to see you again!" ”
The White Cat Elf said, "I will protect you with all my might!" ”
At this time, the tree elf came over and handed Xiaomei the bead that had been picked out of the mouth of the two-tailed witch and said, "Congratulations on successfully summoning the guardian spirit." Keep this bead, and then it's up to you. The tree elf flew into the air and disappeared.
At this time, a scream came from a distance, Xiaomei and the white cat elf ran together, only to see a girl riding a horse being surrounded by two black deer, they used that long horn to attack continuously, only to see the horse hissing, raising its front hooves to kick the black deer hard, Xiaomei and the white cat elf rushed up, Xiaomei jumped on the back of a black deer and pierced his throat with a sword, the white cat elf cut off the head of the other black deer with a long sword, and the little girl was saved.
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PART2: Tutor's comments
Repeatedly confirm with the staff of the three or five hoes: is it really written by a second-grade elementary school student? After getting a reply, I had a momentary lapse of concentration.
What was I doing in my second grade?
Not to mention the creation, even being bullied by children, angry and sad, do not know how to use simple, direct, logical language to restore things.
Looking at the little friend who beat me first, "the evil man sues first", and rightly and boldly tells the part that is most beneficial to me, I only have to cry.
To learn to express freely, adequately, and logically, you must start with the doll.
(Just kidding)
Language expression and creative ability, in addition to the student era of the big and small exams occupy a very important score, but also in the countless important thresholds and nodes in life, play a vital role.
Li Meiyu's "Xiaomei and the Forest Kingdom" is composed of six parts: "Special Milk", "Two-Tailed Witch", "Successful Summoning of the Guardian Spirit", "Magic Garden", "Lark", and "Final Battle", just this clear and huge story structure, and I can't help but want to wear a diamond crown with the most dazzling light on the little author.
Not to mention her wild imagination, the constantly changing layers of in-depth psychological descriptions, the scene descriptions with a strong sense of picture, the ups and downs of the plot... I can't help but marvel.
This magical castle of language expression and creative ability has many entrances, but not all roads lead to Rome, and sometimes all roads may not work.
Sometimes, after many twists and turns, they will find their way. Don't underestimate the creativity, imagination and adventurous spirit of the children, once they get in, they will become the kings of their castle.
PART3: Appreciation of the full version of children's works
◇Special milk
One morning, Xiaomei came to the store that sold milk and casually selected milk, and she saw a bottle of milk that read: Special milk. Xiaomei was very curious and bought it.
When she got home to find that it was time for breakfast, she took the bread from the cupboard, opened the newly bought milk, and began to eat breakfast. Xiaomei was a little sleepy again, so she fell asleep on the table.
When she woke up, she was surprised to find herself smaller, and lying in the forest, the sun was shining, full of huge flowers and grasses, and colorful mushrooms, very beautiful! She found herself still holding the label she had torn from the milk bottle, and on closer inspection, it read: From the Forest Kingdom (smaller).
Suddenly, three strange big birds flew over viciously, and Xiaomei felt extremely frightened and thought: I am bound to die! At this time, a white light flashed around her, and a white cat instantly turned into a cute elf in a white dress, holding a long knife, slashing randomly, killing the strange bird and taking away Xiaomei.
◇ Two-tailed witch
They stopped under a tree with many purple flowers and red fruits. She was just about to talk to the White Cat Elf when suddenly the White Cat Elf disappeared. Xiaomei was frightened, and she wanted to see if the white cat elf was around, but she looked around, but she only saw endless, colorful flowers and fruits. She was so nervous that she thought: Where is this? Why did the White Cat Elf bring me here? So where did she go again? I want to go home, I am so hungry, Xiaomei decided to solve the problem of hunger first, and then find a way to go home.
Xiaomei passed through a large thick wood and came to a small stream, the fish in the stream were strange and colorful, and in the middle of these fish there was a black thing that attracted Xiaomei, suddenly, the blob of things continued to grow larger, a monster emerged from the water, Xiaomei retreated in panic, the monster climbed up from the water, approached Xiaomei, made a "hissing" sound, her green scaly tail flew behind her, sliding all the way leaving black slime, her hair dragged all the way to the ground, The crown made of horns on her head glittered in the sun, and her claws were sharp and long, as if they could instantly slit the throat of their prey and feast on it.
Now that the monster is only a dozen steps away from Xiaomei, Xiaomei thinks to herself: I don't want to be eaten by that monster! What should I do? A voice answered her: "Escape! ”。 She ran desperately along the creek, but the monster also became faster, Xiaomei did not dare to look back, just kept running and running, all the way to the end of the stream, found that below was the waterfall, the monster slowed down, step by step approaching Xiaomei, only five steps, Xiaomei began to think again: What now? Will that white cat elf still save me last time? It was only three steps away, but no matter how she shouted, the white cat elf did not come, Xiaomei suddenly stepped on the air, fell down the waterfall, only heard a "whoosh" sound, and then she could not hear anything, only felt the cold torrent rolling towards her.
At this time, I saw a tree elf flapping a pair of golden wings, wearing a skirt made of leaves, holding two long swords, long hair tied into a ponytail with a vine, and her turquoise eyes stared at Xiaomei and said, "Hurry! The two-tailed witch is coming! Take the beads out of her mouth and kill her! Xiaomei stood up and took the long sword handed by the tree elf, only to see that the monster had rushed up, Xiaomei saw that the monster closed its eyes and slashed hard, one of the monster's tails was cut off, which annoyed the monster, she stretched out her sharp and long claws and waved at Xiaomei, Xiaomei quickly dodged and stabbed at the monster with her sword, at this time the tree elf jumped up and jumped on the monster's back and stabbed hard, the monster immediately roared, Xiaomei took the opportunity to use the sword to pick hard, the beads flew out of the monster's mouth and rolled to Xiaomei's feet. Immediately the monster fell to the ground with a surprised expression and died.
◇ Successfully summoned the Patron saint
The tree elf said, "Come with me!" "They came to a cave with a table and two chairs, a vase of flowers on the table, and a painting hanging from the stone wall. The tree elf asked Xiaomei to sit down, and Xiaomei asked, "Why did I come here?" The tree elf said, "You drank a bottle of milk before you came here, didn't you?" Xiaomei said, "How do you know?" The tree elf said, "When the forest kingdom needs human help, it will make a special bottle of milk and ship it to the human world, and the people who drink the milk will come here." Xiaomei asked again, "What happened here?" The tree elf said, "A year ago, monsters kept breaking into the forest kingdom, and the calm of the past was broken. They polluted the sea, cut down large woods, planted seeds of black thorns, killed many animals, and encroached on the forests north of the kingdom. Xiaomei asked again, "Why did I meet a strange bird and a two-tailed witch as soon as I came here?" The tree elves replied, "Because they knew that a human was coming, they waited for you there and killed you." Xiaomei continued to ask, "When I met the strange bird, the white cat elf saved me, and when the two-tailed witch attacked me, why didn't she come again?" The tree elf said, "The first time maybe the white cat elf met you by chance, only by learning summoning can you let her help you when you need it." Xiaomei asked, "Then when will we start learning?" The tree elf said, "Tomorrow morning, today I will eat something to rest." ”
Xiaomei began to practice, and she was extremely nervous. The first time, Xiaomei just stretched out her toes, her body shook, she didn't stand still and fell, she failed. The second time, Xiaomei was even more nervous, her palms were sweating, and she accidentally slipped the sword from her hand and failed again. The third time, Xiaomei tried to stand firm, clutching the hilt of her sword tightly, thinking of the cat elf. At this time, a white light suddenly appeared, but disappeared again a few seconds later. Xiaomei was very disappointed! The tree elf walked over to Xiaomei and comforted her, "Don't be nervous, you will be able to succeed by practicing a few more times." Xiaomei continued to practice, once again with her right foot on the ground, her hands crossed, holding the handle of the sword steadily, concentrating her mind on trying to recall the white cat elf, at this time, a blinding white light flashed, and the white cat elf wearing a white skirt and holding a long knife finally appeared! Xiaomei said excitedly, "It's a pleasure to see you again!" The White Cat Elf said, "I will protect you with all my might!" At this time, the tree elf came over and handed the bead that had been picked out of the mouth of the two-tailed witch to Xiaomei and said, "Congratulations on successfully summoning the guardian spirit." Keep this bead, and then it's up to you. "The tree elf flew into the air and disappeared.
At this time, a scream came from a distance, Xiaomei and the white cat elf ran over together, only to see a girl riding a horse being surrounded by two black deer, they used that long horn to attack continuously, only to see the horse hissing, raising its front hooves to kick the black deer hard, Xiaomei and the white cat elf rushed up, Xiaomei jumped on the back of a black deer and pierced his throat with a sword, the white cat elf cut off the head of the other black deer with a long sword, and the little girl was saved.
◇ Magic Garden
The little girl said, "Thank you for saving me!" I'm the princess of the Forest Kingdom, I've been looking for you for a long time, and I'll have to take you to the Enchanted Garden and come with me. "They rode together and walked through the woods, full of beautiful flowers and mushrooms along the way. They came to the top of the mountain, and Xiaomei saw that there was a garden on the top of the mountain, which was full of colorful flowers, and there was a log cabin in the middle of the garden, and there was a fountain in front of the wooden house. They entered the house, which was covered with a red carpet, and a little girl in a blue dress was sitting on the carpet arranging flowers. The princess said, "I've found her!" The girl turned her head, and Xiaomei was surprised to find: Isn't this my friend Xiao Huang! Xiaomei asked, "Xiao Huang, why are you here?" Xiao Huang recognized Xiao Mei and smiled happily: "Xiao Mei, it was you!" I also drank milk to come here, and it turned out that the youkai was too powerful, I couldn't figure it out alone, but the youkai wanted to catch me, and the princess called you again. "Do you have a patron saint?" Xiaomei asked. Xiao Huang said, "My patron saint is a fox elf." The princess said, "You'll talk here first, and I'll go outside and find something to eat." ”
They were chatting happily, when they suddenly heard a rustling sound outside, and they ran out in a hurry, and saw a fierce wolf, his eyes glowing white, and a large head surrounded by small heads, his whole body was gray, and he was flicking several tails, and his sharp teeth were grinding and crunching, ready to attack. Xiaomei shouted, "Hurry up and summon the Patron saint!" The two of them summoned the patron saint at the same time, and the white cat elf said, "This is not an easy task, and it is a wise choice for you to come to me." The fox elf handed one of the bows and arrows in her hand to Xiao Huang and held the other one tightly in her hand. The wolf rushed up, Xiaomei stabbed at the wolf with her sword, he dodged, Xiaomei did not stab, the white cat elf jumped on the back of the wolf, several small wolf heads turned, grinned at her and grinned out their teeth, the white cat elf was trying to cut off a small head, but was thrown down by the wolf. Xiao Huang and the fox elf pulled out their bows and arrows, and before Xiao Huang could shoot the arrow out, the wolf pounced on her, and the bow and arrow flew out of Xiao Huang's hand, and the fox elf immediately drew an arrow from the arrow barrel and directly inserted it into the mouth of a small wolf's head, Xiao Mei swung his sword and slashed at the wolf, his small head was cut off, the wolf roared and grabbed Xiao Mei with his blade-like claws, Xiao Mei dodged, and the white cat elf took the opportunity to slash with a long knife and cut off one of his legs. At this moment, the fox elf kept shooting arrows at the wolf, and the wolf pressed Xiao Huang again and was about to bite her throat, when Xiao Mei quickly split the wolf in half with her long sword.
The three of them quickly ran to Xiao Huang's side, and they found that Xiao Huang's shoulder had been cut by the wolf's sharp claws, and it was bleeding non-stop, and Xiao Huang fainted. Xiaomei calmly wrapped Xiao Huang's wound with a piece of cloth. Then, Xiaomei and the white cat elf carried Xiaohuang to the house. Xiaomei began to be anxious, not knowing if the princess was safe and sound, when she would be able to come back? The fox elf thundered and said, "How did that damn wolf find this?" Xiaomei said, "It's all over, it's all right, and me!" ”
◇ Lark
Xiaomei returned to the house again and saw that Xiaohuang's face was pale, and Xiaomei was worried, afraid that Xiaohuang would die. Just then, the princess rushed through the door and asked, "What happened?" Xiaomei told the princess everything that had just happened. The princess looked at Xiao Huang's wound and said, "That wolf's claws are poisonous, and you need to find a white herb called "lark" to detoxify it." There is only one bunch in the world, with five flowers on it, each with five petals, and it grows in a garden in the Valley of The Floating Clouds. To get to The Floating Cloud Valley, you must pass through Crocodile Lake and Bat Forest. Xiaomei asked, "How about crocodile lakes and bat forests?" The princess replied: "You walk down the mountain and turn left, and if you keep walking, you will see crocodile lake, there is a canoe bridge on the lake, the wind is very strong, you must be careful!" After passing the crocodile lake, you can continue to walk straight, you can come to the bat forest, the bat forest fog is very large, do not go in the wrong direction, and must not provoke those bats, you must go all the way north to go out, go out and turn right all the way to the valley of floating clouds, the valley is the garden. Xiaomei said, "I should go!" The princess handed a compass to Xiaomei and said, "Good luck!" ”
Xiaomei walked out of the cabin and walked to the crocodile lake according to the route said by the princess, Xiaomei thought: It is really worthy of the crocodile lake! There was a crocodile in the middle of the lake staring at Xiaomei, it opened its blood basin mouth, its teeth glowed cold under the sunlight, Xiaomei trembled a little, and stepped onto the canoe bridge in fear, she just stretched out her feet, almost fell, she stretched out her arms to maintain balance, carefully continued to walk forward, a gust of wind blew, Xiaomei's feet slipped and fell off the canoe bridge, fortunately she grabbed the wooden bridge in time with her hands. By this time, the crocodile had swum below her, and the crocodile opened its mouth wide and stared at the little beautiful tiger. Xiaomei firmly hugged the wooden bridge, hanging on the wooden bridge, another gust of wind blew, Xiaomei Lingji moved to use the strong wind to go forward, hooked the wooden bridge with her feet and climbed up, Xiaomei lay on the wooden bridge, looking at the crocodile below was staring at her, her mouth opened wider, it was really thrilling! Xiaomei hurriedly crawled forward with her hands and feet, and when she reached the middle of the canoe bridge, the canoe bridge became thinner, Xiaomei was more nervous, her hands and feet were trembling, and she kept silently thinking in her heart: Calm... Stabilization...... Undisturbed by the strong wind and crocodiles, and continuing to climb forward, Xiaomei finally came to the other side and breathed a sigh of relief. Xiaomei continued to walk, came to the bat forest, indeed as the princess said, the fog here is very large, Xiaomei took out a compass into the forest, walking Xiaomei began to be afraid, the surrounding trees seemed to be ghosts waving their claws to Xiaomei, Xiaomei plucked up the courage to continue to walk forward, walked for a while, the sound of flapping wings broke the calm, Xiaomei took a closer look, found that there were a pair of bright yellow eyes all around, Xiaomei thought this is what the princess said about bats, I can't alarm them! She crept and looked at the compass to ensure that she was going north, walking and walking, time seemed to slow down, just when Xiaomei was about to give up, she saw a glimmer of light, Xiaomei ran to the bright light, the bright light became stronger, and suddenly Xiaomei reached the top of the mountain.
wow! Below is the Valley of Floating Clouds. Xiaomei was looking down, her feet slid down, and the ground, the sky, flowers, and mushrooms merged into one, turning into a colorful palette. Xiaomei climbed up and shook her clothes, thinking: Huh, fortunately not hurt, she rubbed her eyes, looked up, found that she was already in front of the garden door, Xiaomei hurried to twist the doorknob, found that the screw could not be moved, she immediately bypassed the door, decided to turn over the fence to enter, turned over to see, a blank, nothing. When Xiaomei turned it out, she saw a sign on the door that said: The door is only open for the good people, not for the greedy people! Xiaomei stood in front of the door and shook her head, the door magically opened, Xiaomei walked into the garden, saw that there were many white flowers blooming there, Xiaomei began to look for larks, she kept finding the sun setting, and finally found it! She was about to walk out of the garden when a sign appeared on the door that read: Pick for others to go out. XiaoMei thought: I am for Xiao Huangcai! At this time, the door opened, and Xiaomei walked out, happily running with the lark to the way back to the cabin.
In the night, Xiaomei finally arrived at the cabin, Xiaomei pushed open the door, rushed in, and breathlessly said: "Got it!" Xiaomei handed the lark to the princess, and the princess mashed the petals of the lark into medicinal mud and smeared it on Xiaohuang's wound, the wound healed immediately, Xiaohuang woke up, Xiaomei excitedly hugged Xiaohuang and said: "Scared me to death, fortunately you are okay!" ”
◇ Final Battle
The princess said, "Xiaomei, please help me save the Forest Kingdom!" Xiaomei asked, "Can I do it?" The princess said: "You are a brave girl, you have overcome so many difficulties along the way, learned so many skills, you are already very powerful, you must be able to do it!" Xiaomei said, "Let's try it together!" Go now, Princess, you lead the way! They walked out of the cabin, to the foot of the mountain, all the way north, they finally came to a forest with a thick black fog, along the way there were fewer and fewer trees, more and more black thorns, the sky was covered with dark clouds, as if it was going to rain, the air around them was very humid, they walked, walked to a clearing, there was a pine tree in the middle of the clearing, the pine trees were all green squirrels and birds, Xiaomei felt very strange, why are they all green? The princess seemed to see through Xiaomei's thoughts and said, "They were cast by the Black Sea Witch, and the Black Sea Witch did all the evil things, only by killing her can the magic be lifted and the Forest Kingdom return to normal!" ”
At night, they came to a sandy beach, and in front of them was a black sea, and the sea was rough, as if it could swallow everything. They saw a bridge in front of them that led all the way to the castle, and they walked forward together. The princess said, "The Black Sea Witch lives in that castle, so be more careful!" Suddenly, bubbles bubbled up on the surface of the black sea, the cracking sound of snap, snap, snap was deafening, a bare, round and large head emerged from the surface of the water, with a pair of dark green eyes on it, emitting a terrible light, he grinned widely, revealing his sharp teeth, roaring, and then his body was also exposed, like snake-like tentacles slapping the surface of the sea, splashing black waves, and the smell of fishy smell suddenly came to his nose, this was a huge octopus monster that was changing color, at this time, The octopus monster's eight long tentacles flew towards the bridge deck, covering the sky, the bridge broke in an instant, the princess did not have time to dodge, as the destroyed suspension bridge fell, fortunately she grabbed a rope in time, Xiaomei and Xiaohuang rushed to pull the rope together, trying to pull upwards. The octopus monster swam towards them and threw the tentacles over again, Xiao Huang grasped the rope tightly, xiao Mei took the opportunity to jump on one of the tentacles, stabbed hard with her sword, and red blood spurted out. The octopus monster roared angrily and grabbed Xiaomei with another tentacle. Suddenly, a beam of golden light flashed, and the tree elf fell from the sky with a long sword in his hand, cutting off one of the octopus monster's tentacles, and just when Xiaomei was about to fall into the Black Sea, the tree elf grabbed Xiaomei and flew to the castle. The octopus monster was furious, and its body turned fiery red. The tree elves picked up the princess again and led her to the castle gate. They immediately summoned the patron saints, Xiao Huang and the fox elves to aim at the octopus monster and kept shooting arrows. The tree elf flew to the head of the octopus monster, looking for an opportunity to stab the sword into his heart, and the octopus monster threw its tentacles in the sky so that the tree elf could not stab him. When the angry octopus monster roared wildly, Xiaomei took the opportunity to throw the long sword out, the sword stabbed into the octopus monster's mouth, the tree elf quickly flew to the octopus monster's mouth, grasped the handle of the sword, and pressed hard, the sword pierced the octopus monster's heart, the octopus monster turned black and fell into the sea, dead!
At this moment, the door of the castle "slammed" open, the Black Sea Witch rode a three-eyed black dragon and appeared at the door in an instant, the sky swept through the lightning, dark clouds rolled, the wind roared, and the sea set off huge waves, which made people creepy! Monsters such as three-tailed snakes, flying fish spirits, tiger-headed wolf beasts, and fire-breathing lizards flocked to them, densely packed with black pressure. I saw the Black Sea Witch's brown hair wrapped around her head like weeds, wearing a tattered black robe, holding a spear, her dirty fingernails were pointed and long, her eyes were dark purple, and she was particularly terrifying in the moonlight, and her pale face had an evil smile on her face, and she shouted in her hoarse voice: "Kill them!" She seemed determined to dominate the entire forest kingdom.
Immediately after, the monsters rampaged and killed, the princess rode on the back of the deer elf, shot several fire-breathing lizards with a bow and arrow, the deer elf stepped forward, a beam of golden light flashed, and a dozen small demons fell to the ground in an instant. Xiao Huang and the fox elf bent their bows and arrows to target the monster and attack. Xiaomei, the tree elf, and the fox elf wielded their swords and fought with the monsters, and there was a scuffle!
When the princess aimed at the eye of the black dragon and fired a fatal arrow, the black dragon suddenly turned into a black mist and disappeared. The white cat elf slashed at the Black Sea Witch with a knife from the side like lightning, the Black Sea Witch used that spear to block the long knife, and stabbed back with the spear, the White Cat Elf flashed past, Xiaomei immediately swung the sword to the neck of the Black Sea Witch, she dodged backwards, Xiaomei did not cut, the Black Sea Witch stabbed at Xiaomei with a spear, Xiaomei quickly dodged. The tree elves hovering in the air rushed and stabbed at the Black Sea Witch with their swords, they fought fiercely with a sword and a spear, Xiaomei and the White Cat Elves kept pushing forward in the process, forcing the Black Sea Witch to the edge of the cliff, the Tree Elves took advantage of the Black Sea Witch and Xiaomei to fight fiercely, quickly descended to the ground and tripped her with their swords, the spear flew out of the Hands of the Black Sea Witch, Xiaomei pointed her sword directly at her throat, and the Black Sea Witch said, "Let me go!" I will leave the Forest Kingdom. The princess said, "Don't believe her!" Xiaomei stabbed her sword into her heart, and then kicked her off the cliff, and the Black Sea Witch fell into the Black Sea, and the sea suddenly turned blue.
Xiao Huang ran over and said, "Those monsters are dead, and the Black Castle is gone." The Forest Kingdom was back to normal, and they smiled happily. Xiaomei said, "The war is finally over!" The princess said, "Thank you for saving the Forest Kingdom!" Xiao Huang asked, "What about the black thorns?" The tree elf replied, "The Forest Kingdom needs to take care of itself and replant the trees." ”
They made their way back to the cabin, and the tree elf said, "The two-tailed witch's beads are still there, right?" Xiaomei said, "Yes." The tree elf said, "You need to eat this bead in order to grow bigger and return to the human world." The princess gave two necklaces to Xiaomei and Xiaohuang and said, "Thank you!" The tree elf cut the beads in half, and Xiaomei and Xiaohuang ate the beads.
When Xiaomei opened her eyes again and found herself at home, Xiaomei suspected that all this was just a dream, but the necklace given by the princess was still in her hand! Xiaomei decided to tell her mother about this wonderful experience.
Children swim in their own world with childlike fantasies, weave more and more vivid and wonderful stories, and believe that each of them is a creator with great potential.
Continue to pay attention to the new column of "Children vs Famous Artists' Creative Dialogue", we will share more children's unique charm works, and will also invite more famous teachers and famous artists to comment on children's works together, at the same time, welcome everyone to provide valuable advice to children's works through messages.
Selected from previous periods
Senior Editor Sasha Comments on Elementary School Students' Essays: Language is as vivid and vivid as a book review! 》
"The second grade of primary school is so good to write!" Book critic Xie Mai marveled at how talented he was.
"Famous Teacher Shang Ailan Comments on Primary School Students' Essay: Creation should be confident in the story! 》
PART4: Introduction to the Online Course
The "Dream Pen And Flowers" course has always been loved by parents and children, and the series of courses includes "Guardian of the Gods", "Luobi Shan He Layout Chapter", "Luobi Shan River Dialogue Chapter" and "Family History" Line classes based on reading and writing.
The curriculum supports the long-term and systematic improvement of children's literacy skills:
● Let children not be afraid of creation, and build creative confidence and interest;
● "Reading with writing", let the child talk with the master and write the true feelings;
● Help children to practice systematically and establish a global view of reading and writing thinking;
● Let the child's literacy ability be self-iteration.
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