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Writing is like being a human being,
It's easy to see others, but it's hard to see yourself.
It's easy to describe others, but it's not easy to write "me" well.
The original intention of this essay topic is to prevent students from plagiarizing each other.
Moreover, there are too many excellent essays for students published online today, and many students will borrow the name of "reference" to download them to cope.
If this is the case, it will not serve the purpose of essay practice.
Therefore, this topic is to hope that students will find their own advantages well, write their own personality, and write about the distinctive "I" in the sea of people.
Describe my composition, a different way of writing, excellent composition appreciation: "I love fantasy", I hope to give you different ideas and methods.
<h1 class="pgc-h-arrow-right" data-track="11" > Fan Wen Appreciation: "I Love Fantasy"</h1>
Childhood, belongs to the age of dreams, love fantasy is every child has. When I was a child, I often fantasized: the clear night sky, the stars often blinked, is it because I can't find my mother, I have to open my eyes to find my mother; the moon bends because the jade rabbit sits in the boat and shakes; the apple's red face is not because she is a very shy little girl------ later, I grew up, all these problems, I found the answer from the ocean of knowledge.
However, I love fantasy, and I still love fantasy.
No, one day, a new idea flashed in my mind: If I dressed up as a mother, would I look like an adult?
Adults, in my little mind, have a high status: adults can make their own money to spend, you can use money to buy their favorite delicious, fun, good-looking things, more different is that you don't have to listen to dad's criticism, mom's nagging, you can do your own things, that's a happy thing!
The more I fantasized, the happier I became, and I laughed like a flower there. How eager I am to become an adult as soon as possible, so that I can throw away the nagging and endless words of adults, and throw away the nasty books. Unexpectedly, today my parents have something to do, and I am at home alone. This is a great time for me to act! I can imagine my future, let go of myself, and enjoy the final result of this free fantasy.
So, I quickly ran to my mother's bedroom, rummaged through the boxes in my mother's closet, and found my mother's dress and high heels. Hey, this dress was worn on me and dragged to the ground, looking like a bride at a wedding ceremony. Putting on my mother's high heels again, I felt as if I was standing on a high ground, and my height was immediately much taller, no wonder my mother often loved to wear high heels. I was so happy! Look left and right in front of the mirror and keep looking. But I always feel that something is missing? Look at my face again, a childish breath, and a kind of milk in the milk, not at all like an adult! So, I opened my mother's makeup box, learned to draw eyebrows, smear some powder, put on some lipstick------ and the operation was as fierce as a tiger, and dressed myself like a little goblin.
"Squeak ------" is the sound of doors opening. "That's it! Mom and Dad are back! "I was very nervous, uneasy, and didn't know what to do, so I just sat in a daze, waiting for them to fall and let them dispose of it.
As soon as my mother came in, she found me, and she was so surprised that she could not speak for half a day as soon as she came in. Then he couldn't help but laugh------
I quickly explained to my mother: I just want to become an adult!
Mom and Dad laughed enough, covered their stomachs and asked me, "Why do you want to become an adult?" I said solemnly, "How nice it is to be an adult!" Buy whatever you want with the money you earn, do whatever you want, and don't have to listen to your nagging or write so much heavy homework! ”
Mom gently took me into her arms, stroked my little head and said, "It's not like you think!" Part of the money we earn is used to educate you and your sister to grow up, part of the living expenses of our family of four, part of it is used to honor grandparents, grandparents, and save a part for urgent needs. How can you do whatever you want? Who can spend money willfully, and buy what you want? Only by being diligent and thrifty can we enjoy the happiness of a well-off life. Besides, parents nag children are also for the good of children, everyone must learn, sisters are learning, parents have to keep learning when they go to work. As the saying goes, 'Live to be old, learn to be old'" Listening to my mother's words, I seemed to understand and nodded, but there were still many fantasies in my heart.
This is me, a fantasy-loving me.
<h1 class="pgc-h-arrow-right" data-track="21" >[General Appreciation].</h1>
The little author describes "I", both form and spirit, vivid and lively, but also very interesting, love fantasy is the nature of every child. In the author's pen, a naïve, romantic, fantasy-loving "I" vividly appears in front of the reader, with a vivid plot and intriguing taste.
<h1 class="pgc-h-arrow-right" data-track="23" > [method reference].</h1>
1. Description of psychological activities
The most important feature of this essay is to pay attention to the description of psychological activities, and to vividly display a naïve, romantic, and fantasy-loving little girl through psychological activities.
2. Different way of writing
When it comes to writing people's essays, the average student will try their best to describe the appearance of the characters, and this essay does not have a single word about the appearance of the characters, but we can also feel the image of "me".
3. True feelings
This essay is sincere and truly reproduces a fantasy-loving "me", and at the same time is full of our own true feelings, we feel so appropriate and natural.
There is no law in the text, but it is important to get the law.
Only if it is reasonable, interesting, and affectionate, your composition is a good composition.
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