A masterpiece that has been passed down for a long time must have its own unique features, either the beginning is fascinating, or the ending is intriguing. In fact, in the process of creation, poets cannot predict whether their works will be liked by readers, but as long as they carefully select materials, conceive, and integrate true feelings, they must be infectious.
In the creation of poetry, there is often an emphasis on refining words, although sometimes without a word, it can also be done well; but a thousand words are fished and immovable, which requires greater efforts. The following is a five-law poem by the Talents of the Tang Dynasty, with exquisite words, light strokes, and full of leisurely and calm fun.
Que title
Tang Dynasty: Liu Yunxuan
The road ends with white clouds, and spring and green streams grow.
From time to time, there are falling flowers, far away with the fragrance of running water.
Idle door to the mountain road, deep willow reading hall.
Reflecting every day, the light shines on the clothes.
The so-called "que title" refers to the title of the original work that later generations did not see when sorting and proofreading, so they replaced it with these two words, which is equivalent to untitled poems. From the title to the verse, this five laws do not directly express the poet's feelings. The author narrates the daily mountain scenery with a light tone, but it is refreshing.
Liu Yunxuan was a poet of the Sheng Tang Dynasty, he was a jinshi at the age of 20, and after entering the shi, he only served as a minor official of Jiupin. Because there was no way to advance, the poet resigned from his post and went into hiding after middle age, and since then he has sent love to the landscape and the poetry. His poems are mostly lyrical to the joy of seclusion and express the friendship between friends.
The author travels frequently, and his footprints have been left behind by famous mountains and rivers everywhere. The first link describes the author's journey through the mountains, the mountains are steep, the roads are rugged, and the winding path seems to extend to the end of the white clouds.
The stream is clear and full of wildflowers, and the spring in the mountains, although it comes later, is more springy. A "exhaustive" word, the dot dyes the height of the mountain settlement, and the distance of the mountain road.
Next, continue to depict the scenery along the way, the poet walks and looks at it, the mood is relaxed, so the observation is also more detailed. In the mountain forest, the breeze is blowing, and from time to time there are falling flowers falling from the branches, and then they are carried away by the flowing water, and the fragrance of flowers is overflowing and intoxicating.
A "time" word that expresses the loose interest of nature. The flowing water is flowing and pleasant to the ear, which is not only written in motion, but also makes people think infinitely. Along the riverbank, the poet may find more surprises, which also pave the way for the following.
Writing this, the poet suddenly turned his pen sharply, no longer depicting the scene in the mountains and forests, but began to directly portray the hermit's residence. In front of you is a turquoise willow forest, the reading hall is hidden in it, and the chai gate is facing the quiet mountain road, showing the leisure and tranquility of the hermit. A "leisure" word, writing out the seclusion of the world, can not be moved.
Although people can't know the specific situation of this Coats, it does not prevent everyone from imagining. As the saying goes, idle in the mountains and moons, quietly reading desk books. Play the guqin in the forest and catch swimming fish by the stream.
In the spring, you can enjoy the brilliant flowers, and in the summer, you can taste the delicious wild fruits. In autumn, there are the most beautiful autumn leaves, and in the cold winter, there is even more snow.
The ending is more distant, the turquoise of the grass and trees, the clear glow of the sun, are printed on the clothes, which immediately sets off the plain and leisurely mood of the reclusive reader, and is also filled with leisurely and calm fun.
The author is like a photographer, trekking all the way and shooting all the way, which not only makes the reader feel immersed, but also vividly depicts various scenes in the mountains and forests, and also expresses the leisure and leisure of the hermit. The whole poem is exquisitely refined, the tone is brisk, natural and not abrupt, and it is very poetic.
A drop of water can speculate about the sea, the author uses the technique of seeing the big in the small, condensing the feelings of life into a few words, so as to guide the reader to make associations, and caizi is worthy of being a poet of the Tang Dynasty!