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Author ID: Noisy Phase
Release date: 2022.2.10
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Big Mama was officially defeated, and finally was able to look back at this battle in its entirety
First look at the damage taken by each party (the move with the skill name hits the red, the ripple and the blue, the figure is arranged horizontally in order and then wrapped):
Kidd:
1) Battle music Scrubbing Chop
2) Battle of the Ascent
3) Fireballs in the sky
4) Bad wind (magnetic demon man is the main target)
5) The heavens are full of great freedom gods
6) Tornado (contagious, no separate close-up)
7) Tornado Bad Wind (Magnetic Demon Man as the main target)
8) Battle on top (process omitted)
9) Big Mom hits the face directly
10) Earthquake Imperial Thunder (Affected)
11) vs Big Mama (process omitted)
12) The abdomen was injured by Hawkins Transfer
13) vs Big Mama (process omitted)
14) Head damaged by Hawkins Transfer + vs Big Mama (process omitted)
15) Mom rushes
16) Weiguo (Magnetic Demon Man as the main target) + vs Big Mama (until transferred to the event venue, the process is omitted)
17) vs Big Mama (process omitted)
18) Mother Visit Cannon Three thousand miles
19) At the end of the curtain
A total of 10 attacks were made by named moves, of which 5 were affected, 5 were directly hit, and Hawkins deflected the incision and head concussion wounds in the abdomen, and was directly hit in the face by Big Mama's fist.
Luo
1) Battle of the Ascent
2) Fireballs in the sky
3) The heavens are full of great freedom gods
4) Battle on top (process omitted)
5) Kaido swings the stick directly (antibacterial armed buffer)
6) Thunderous gossip
7) Injuries suffered while rushing to the front of the aunt
8) vs Big Mama (process omitted)
9) Stealing fire
10) vs Big Mama (until transferred to the event venue, the process is omitted)
12) Big Mama armed color fist combo
13) Three thousand miles
14) At the end of the curtain
In total, he was hit 5 times by a named move, and was hit once by Kaido Stick in the case of defensive buffering, and was hit by a combo by Big Mama's armed color fist.
Big Mom:
1) Wrist Dragon tank shelling
2) Black Rhino FR-U rear wheel riding face
3) Vortex a book of back fall & thousand purple ten thousand red big flying swallow grass
4) vs Marko
5) Defibrillation
6) Battle on top (process omitted)
7) Fall (Hormiz is separated by Sauron & Kira)
8) Magnetic pistol
9) Mutually exclusive & baton
10) Magnetic Air String + vs Kidd (Omitted before Rowe's involvement)
11) vs Guillo (process omitted)
12) Defibrillation
13) Shock fluctuations
14) Magnetic gas excitation
15) vs Guillo (process omitted)
16) Shock fluctuations
17) Magnetic Magic Bull
18) Give S N
19) Baton
20) Puncture fluctuations
21) Electromagnetic gun
22) Electromagnetic cannon
23) Bombs
24) Bomb *n (defeat, no picture)
A total of 15 attacks were made by named moves, including 3 controlling moves and 12 offensive moves, and suffered bomb combos with explosions larger than Huadu.
The following are all personal subjective evaluations (because of laziness, there are no pictures)
This is not so much a battle back as a closing back.
I'm actually very happy with Luo's tribute to Corazon, Big Mama's exit words, full of card narration frames, smooth island perspective switching, spectacular but silent explosion scenes, etc., but I have to say that I am still not satisfied with the whole battle...
My expectation is that this war between the new generation and the four emperors can be coherent and shocking.
Focusing on this work, both have actually been fully expressed. "Coherent" mainly refers to Luffy's battle, and the more coherent one can refer to "Wine Dragon Bagua" in the recent past, and Luffy's action of dodging thunderous gossip and staring after following the trend is very "coherent", which is an important feature of Luffy's decisive battle scene, or the treatment of the protagonist. In addition, Luo in PH Island and Tokushima, using the fruit of surgery, whether it is a solo or with Luffy, one move and one style are frozen more beautifully, contributing to a lot of wonderful scenes after 2 years.
Casually find a picture that has been sent before, which is Yamaji's combo technique, lamb Shot, which is also a smooth and coherent embodiment.
If "coherence" is the "text" of martial arts, then "shock" is the "punctuation" of martial arts setbacks, from the handsome flat freeze frame of the action, to the top of the war eagle eye splitting mountain, Tokushima Luffy four debut shows full visual effects after the freeze frame, they give the reader the rhythm of reading, but also the basic elements of the character's combat strength. The indicator of "shock" should be subjective factors such as impact and sense of strength.
The surgical fruit and the magnetic fruit can be called the existence of "coherence" and "shock" - the surgical fruit has both the elements of teleportation/displacement, object operation and other elements that support "coherence" and energy operation, large-scale attacks (cut- off, baton...). ), terrain changes and other support "shocking" periods, battle choices are varied; magnetic fruits have both attraction/repulsion, metal operation, endowment and other elements that support "coherence" and large-volume creations, large-scale destruction, terrain changes, energy attacks and other elements that support "shock", excellent electrical/magnetic abilities in other works are always in sight, and readers' expectations must rise.
Imagine this: Big Mama raised the black knife Napoleon and rushed to Roe and Kidd, and the two dodged to the left and right, while Hera and Prometheus were already waiting on their respective trajectories. Kidd's fist gathered the iron filings around him, and Prometheus grinned and taunted, and the tongue of fire approached. On the other side Hera was waiting to be discharged, Luo held a knife in his right hand, and his left hand was fixed: slaughterhouse (in fact, it should be turned into a "mess" or something, I had long wanted to spit it out), Kidd replaced the stone on the ground, and when he reached the right side of the big mother's waist, Prometheus pounced. Kidd's "Magnetic String" in the upper right corner of the spread page hit Big Mom hard, and Big Mom laughed while taking the attack, and the longer Napoleon attacked Kidd at high speed. At this time, Luo's right hand in the air split, and a "cut" in the upper left corner of the span cut Hera in half, looking like he was going to cut off Big Mama's left arm, Big Mom's left fist hardened, and with a gentle stroke, the bullet flew and slashed, but Prometheus was also cut in half. Luo smiled and made another "slaughterhouse" and exchanged positions with Kidd - the left hand deftly turned over Napoleon's knife body, and the right hand knife came to the right arm of the big mother and gave an "injection". Kidd, who had been cut in half, sucked on the tower, made a cage out of steel bones, grabbed Hera, flew up again, and used "repulsion" to accelerate the cage and kick her in the head.
Doesn't it feel like the operability is not bad...? This is just using Luo, not much use of Kidd's "endowment". If they are willing to design, the two can play a dazzling cooperation, and Kidd can also experience a transformation from guard to full trust in Luo, so that the tacit understanding between the two reaches a climax and continue to enrich the growth of the character.
Although the big mother's side is less mobile, it can play more impactful visual effects, such as giganticism, strengthening hormiz after playing the earthquake thunder, prometheus at sea and other skills that make the whole island shake, the power of the four emperors can not shake the island, but rely on the explosives in the arsenal, I think this arrangement is some problems.
As for the problem of hegemony, it is entirely possible to arrange big mom melee bully boxing, but kilo's cooperation showed that he did not hit a move and ate a whole set in vain (was given to the magnetic pole by Kidd to repulse, Luo teleported away or the baton changed the terrain to block, etc.), and can also focus on the operability of Kidd's awakening skill (giving the magnetic pole can completely shape a battlefield suitable for the level of wisdom fighting, of course, this is not quite in line with the op's style, but the appropriate fluency can still be) So don't use it, concentrate on attacking with Homiz, It is also possible to punch a punch or two in the right place.
Requiring readers to interpret "because it's not easy to use, don't use it" is completely different from showing it directly in the plot, after all, not all readers are willing to interpret w
In summary, I think that the skills used by the enemy and us in this battle are not rich enough, neither "coherent" (the enemy and us taking the baton is most easily considered to be turn-based) nor "shocking" (the visual impact of skills such as three thousand miles, the great magic bull, and the excitement is not enough), and the most important thing is that it does not meet the expectations of some readers, so for me the look and feel is average (except for the ending, this ending is indeed luxurious).
Of course, wt also has the pain of wt, if you want to draw a justice island level play, then the Peace Country chapter must be serialized for at least 5 years, and the physical and mental energy may not support an elderly author to continue like this, so it is helpless to have a debt in the battle part. I actually tried to adjust my mentality when the sixth son was defeated, and basically adjusted by the end of the Mountain Q Battle.
So although this battle is not satisfied, but the good villains do not dare to look forward to the result of w it is unexpectedly quite interesting, so it will suddenly pick up, and say such a lot of it