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Contents
The will | scavenging
All things love me | Malan
Farewell to | Li Dong
To miss yourself is to forgive all things| Li Jin
Sing 丨 Sink River
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Scavenging
Father told us
Take good care of your mother
Tell your mother to eat well
Unlike my father's will
After the mother was bedridden
It was conceived again and again
The funeral scene
And the cups and plates after the funeral
Tell us over and over again
Things to be aware of
People who should be wary
Tell us
Those empty cartons, those empty bottles
Be sure to store it in a timely manner
Mother said, after the funeral
The next day, there must be someone
Door-to-door recycling
One sentence comment: As Luke said, simplicity is one of the important qualities of poetry. Truth, goodness, and beauty are precious foundations for any literary or artistic work, and poetry is no exception. This poem is different from many previous themes that praise mothers, and the work uses dying words that ordinary people cannot imagine, sketching the last kindness of poor mothers who work for their families, which makes people feel shocked. Good works often don't need rhetoric, and the poem does.
<h1 class="pgc-h-center-line" data-track="50" > All things love me</h1>
Malan
I said, "The earth loves me." The river cried
I said: The sky loves me. Drizzle fell
Early in the morning, darkness gives us a new day
As an early riser
I have a part more than anyone else
All things love me
I live like a child
One sentence comment: This is an easy-to-understand poem, this is a poem that is straight to the chest. Love is the reason for the beauty of the world. The author uses just a few lines of simple words to write the love of nature clean and transparent; after reading it, there is a sense of freedom and suddenness; it can't help but remind people of Haizi's work "Living in the Precious Human World".
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Li Dong
Saying goodbye is a person from the body
Remove excess
For example, missing is one of them
Rejection is another
It may also be like an unintended pregnancy of a child
Had to terminate the pregnancy and had severe pain
Right now
The snow was getting heavier
A line of footprints is still coming
The other line is gone
One-sentence comment: We have read too many poems about the subject of farewell, such as Xu Zhimo's "Shayan Nana", Li Bai's "Gift to Wang Lun", etc.; this poem is more of an analysis of the heart, describing a mental journey; the image of snow is very good, so that people can breathe in the pain of farewell.
<h1 class="pgc-h-center-line" data-track="87" > to miss oneself is to forgive all things</h1>
Li Jin
Today's heavy snow, the white that the earth needs has not yet come
The moisture needed by the human world did not come, me and all things
Stand in the depths of their respectives
Each bears the lonely part
At this time, it seems that only one bird is forgiven
It flew quietly across the skyline and would be a pair of golden ones
Wings stay before dawn
How pathetic all things are
We have no wings, but we have more than a sparrow
feather. This morning came so suddenly, I saw
He was slowly illuminated, and he was pressed into the dust
One sentence comment: The work presents the living state and inner state of most contemporary people; the author wants to detach himself from all things ("I stand in the depths of all things" and has to be in the midst of all things, still "pressed into the dust"; what we have to do is not to forgive all things, but to have a forgiveness heart.
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Sink river
The couple has reached middle age
The husband one day held the hand of the wife
Walk through the downtown area
Shyness is like the dim light of yellow
Shine on the two men
Through the clothes, it shone on the skin of the two men's whole body
The husband began to sing, singing the Heart Sutra.
The Sutra in the name of the heart
Just like when he used to walk alone
After singing it again, I have the urge to sing it again
The wife's sticker is attached to the husband's body
Very light
She can't sing, just listen
One-sentence comment: When people reach middle age, it is rare for husband and wife to get along with each other; the author captures the small details of life, a fragment of life, so that the fireworks of the human world are instantly vivid; the work should sing not only the love and tacit understanding between husband and wife, but also the loyalty of hand in hand to old age; this is an attitude that life should have.
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