I don't know why, recently I have seen the news of the Seventh Poetry Festival in Wuhan, do the platform regard me as a poet, or a poetry critic? Machines are machines, more rigid. However, seeing these news, the "harvest" is really quite a lot. In particular, the comments of some "famous critics" on "famous poets" are very eye-opening.
Zou Jianjun Yang Ke (picture disk from the network)
This poetry festival, there is a highlight, that is, the "famous poets" Ji Di Maga, Li Shaojun and Yang Ke's new book sharing meeting. The new book sharing meeting, the author is definitely going to arrive, and the comment guests are definitely going to arrive. The people who sell books can't arrive, and how many people have arrived, then I don't know. "Powerful Poet" Yang Ke's new book sharing meeting, the sharing guest is Professor Zou Jianjun of Central China Normal University.
Professor Zou Jianjun praised how good Yang Ke's poem was, and then specifically mentioned Yang Ke's "Great East Lake". "I hope that this poem can be carved on a large stone on the edge of the East Lake and become an important cultural landscape." This is Professor Zou Jianjun's final conclusion. I wasn't there, and I don't know how Jank responded at the time.
Yang Ke (Image from the Internet)
This proposal made me "overjoyed" to be able to carve it in stone and become a poem of landscape, which is indeed very rare. Yan Ke's "Great East Lake" is so good? That's something you have to read. Fortunately, a search on the Internet found this poem, which came from Yang Ke's blog.
Image from Janker's blog
The poem is a bit long, but not a "long poem" yet. The poet said that east lake is a blank piece of paper, without falling ink. It lists some famous poets in history, Cui Hao, Li Bai, Qu Yuan, as well as Yu Boya, Zhong Ziqi, Chu Zhuang Wang, liu Bei, all of whom have forgotten Donghu. Therefore, the poet said that the East Lake was reserved for modern poetry.
This poem is actually not bad, at least a bit like modern poetry. However, if you have to say that it is poetry, it seems to be a little reluctant, and those who cannot be divided into lines are called poetry, right? List a bunch of celebrities, list some allusions, it is called "tradition", it is called "profound cultural heritage"? It shouldn't be that simple.
Zou Jianjun (Image from the Internet)
In order to describe the "big" of The East Lake, the poet did rack his brains, and all kinds of words to describe "big" were used. "Huge", "smoke and waves", "infinite", "endless", "great lake", "magnificent", "ten thousand miles", "vast", "big water", these words do show the theme "Dadong Lake", that is really big.
There are two words in this, which are debatable. The first is that "infinite water is endless", is this "infinity" "boundless"? Although "infinity" reflects more, and "infinity" reflects more, "infinity" is somewhat exaggerated after all. And to describe the width of the water, there is already a good word, that is, "boundless".
Is it true that writing "infinity" as "infinite" is innovation and the embodiment of "strength"? Well, if "famous people" think so, I'll have to just leave it at that. Another is "a flock of plum wives and lotus concubines", which is the meaning of describing plum blossoms and lotus flowers, but it is appropriate to borrow "a group of wives and concubines"?
Originally a symbol of high purity, the plum blossom lotus flower is a bit vulgar in this poem, stained with fat powder. The high cold of the plum blossoms, the mud of the lotus flowers without staining, has changed in this poem. Become left and right, cuddle and cuddle, and "grounded". Of course, if this is also "innovation" and "breakthrough", then I have to admit it.
But if such a poem, or text, were really carved on a large stone, would it become a landscape? I think that people who play in East Lake will definitely stop and watch when they see this pile of words. But after reading it for half a day, you may finally wonder: Why do you want to carve these things on the stone?