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Text | Wu Yuan
Have you ever noticed the scenery outside your window? Maybe it's the busy road, maybe it's the lush garden, maybe it's the place where the little friends play... Take "Outside the Window" as the title, write an essay, no less than 600 words.
The picture | panoramic vision
prompt:
1. Pay attention to the choice of description scope. You can use the window as a "picture frame", only depicting the scenery in the "picture frame", you can also expand the field of view to all the scenes that can be seen outside the window; you can select a part of the scene outside the window for detailed depiction, or you can outline the whole and grasp the overall situation.
2. According to the height of the window, a main viewing angle can be selected, supplemented by other angles. Attention should also be paid to mobilizing multiple senses to make the depiction of the scene more vivid.
3. You can set a tone for the description of the scenery around the most important characteristics of the scenery outside the window, such as beauty, joy, busyness, etc., and pay attention to integrating your emotions when describing.
This is the composition topic in the second language textbook of the first grade, if you only write the scene simply, it is easy to fall into the cliché and it is difficult to write a new idea. In order to make the composition superior, stand out, you have to find another way, among the many strange tricks, one of them is the easiest to grasp, that is, the use of anthropomorphic techniques, to write the scenery outside the window from another perspective, and then reveal the theme from it, so that the bland scenery is no longer bland, so that the article is more profound.
Outside the window
Every year, Meow crouched on the windowsill again, staring blankly out the window.
(The beginning of the scenario, quickly enter the topic, attract the reader.) ）
Below the window is a small leisure square, next to the Meow Nian Family, planted with a row of willow trees, the thick trunk has exceeded the balcony on the second floor, and the branches are full of emerald green vitality, stretching at different angles towards the blue sky dome, and then bending into a graceful arc to fall to the earth.
Under the cover of young leaves, the birds forage, jump and sing, light and cheerful. In the summer afternoon, you can still hear the clamor of "hot, hot".
At the other end of the square, there are also several flower beds, which are full of purple and red flowers. However, for Meow Nian Nian, the most attractive thing is these willow trees and the birds that inhabit the branches and the knowledge of living. Every year, Meow has not really had close contact with the birds and knows them, and their names are also spoken by the little master.
(Closely following the theme of describing the beautiful scenery outside the window, it paves the way for the escape of Meow every year below.) ）
One day, the wind pushed the screen window open a slit, and Meow Nian soon discovered the secret, and it tried to stick its head out of that slit, once, twice... Finally succeeded, The young Meow Nian slipped out lightly, and the window sill was only a dozen centimeters wide, but for Meow Nian, it was already a spacious road. Without the barrier of the screens, the willow trees seemed to be greener, and the birds were clearer, only to know that they hid in the green leaves and refused to show their faces.
"Year after year, year after year!" The little master found Nian Nian who had slipped out of the window, and shouted nervously, afraid of being startled by it, and carefully reached out a hand, "Nian Nian, obedient, come in." ”
Meow "meows" every year, telling the owner to rest assured that it will not be stupid enough to jump from here - although the willow trees are really full of temptations - all say that cats have nine lives, ahem, that is, nine lives, but also fate to cherish. Helplessly, the little master can not care what he thinks every year, enough to reach the year, grasp it, drag it back, and close the screen window again.
"It's so good outside." When the day comes, throw you outside, you will know how hard it is to be outside..." The little master hugged Nian Nian and kept teaching.
(Slipping to the window sill, it is obvious that the temptation of meows outside the window is great, and the lesson of the little master also makes a full preparation for the highlighting theme at the end, making it reasonable and not obtrusive.) ）
Every year, Meow still caught the opportunity to sneak outside.
That day, the little master went downstairs to get milk and did not lock the door. Meow ran to the door of the building every year, and with his head, the door opened. Meow Nian was both excited and nervous, and slipped out.
The air outside is noisy and restless. Meow carefully surveyed the route along the corner of the wall every year, and after a long time, his stomach began to grumble, not to mention the birds, not even the shadow of the willow tree.
A little boy spotted Meow Nian nian and shouted excitedly: "Cat, cat! There's a cat here. "Also trying to get close to The Year of The Year. Every year, Meow fled in a panic, into a small black house, hiding in an abandoned broken cardboard box every year, never daring to move again.
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"Every year, every year!" It was as if after a century, Meow finally heard a familiar voice. It hurriedly "meows" in response. After a while, the little master appeared, and after meow confirmed his safety every year, he came out of the broken cardboard box.
"Every year! Don't be afraid, well, let's go home. The little master also found Nian Nian, and while gently comforting it, he carefully went forward to pick up Nian Nian.
(Meow successfully escapes year after year, and his yearning for the window is struck by reality.) ）
Back in the warm and familiar home, Meow still likes to crouch on the windowsill and look out the window, but he no longer has the idea of escaping. Because Every year, Meow finally understood the words that the little master often nagged in his ear: temptation and danger often coexist, and knowing how to cherish will make you happy.
(End the text with the words of the little master, not only taking care of the previous text, but also pointing out the main idea, and it is reasonable and reasonable.) ）
Comments:
The scenery outside the window may be bland for most students, and if you make it up, it is difficult to write a sense of truth. This article takes a different path, using the vision of a cat to write the scenery outside the window, so that the plain scene is full of flexible vitality and beautiful temptation, novel and unique. Through real experience, I deeply feel the danger of the outside world, and finally end the whole text with the thinking of the cat, cleverly point out the main idea, so that the article is highly intentional and stands out in many simple scene compositions.
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Wu Yongli, pen name: Wu Yuan. A native of Yangyuan County, Hebei Province, he is a member of the Zhangjiakou Writers Association and the secretary general of the Wanquan Writers Association. From teaching for more than twenty years, a red heart and two sleeves of the breeze to cultivate talents; adhere to most of their lives, three-foot pulpit four square peach and plum to see the original heart. To this day, I am still on the front line of teaching, with a little free time, I swim in literature, I like to use my clumsy pen to express the truest and most beautiful feelings, and it is a fortunate thing in life to meet Zhiyin.
Responsible editor 丨 Zhang Ziqing
Intern Editor 丨 Zhang Qiong
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