"You are a clever boy", "Deep dimples are your most handsome business card", "I especially like the way you look when you are studying", "The teacher expects your surprise"... It's the semi-annual final review "competition", and the teachers are searching for intestines and scraping their stomachs these days to repeatedly deliberate on the "customized" comments.
Praise should be specific Feelings should be sincere
Some teachers will take the same class for several years in a row, and they have to "confess" to the children in a different pattern every semester. A primary school homeroom teacher said that writing comments should not vaguely praise the child for "good performance" and "very hard work", but should be specific and subtle, so that the child knows that the teacher is really paying attention to him. Usually pay more attention to the child's words and deeds, find more shining points on the child, even if it is a small thing, written in the final review, it is possible to warm the child's heart.
Gao Tianqi, a Chinese teacher at Nanjing Fangcaoyuan Primary School Phoenix Branch, told reporters: "Some students accidentally broke their hands and took the initiative to help others deal with it, and such a good thing will also be mentioned in the comments." ”
Although every teacher has an account for the child in his heart, if the memory is not very good, it is not shameful to turn to the pen or office software. Wang Le, an English teacher in the International Department of Jinling Middle School Hexi Branch, said that he has several spreadsheets in his computer, various test scores, various performance records of students, late arrivals, class speeches are all subtractions, and being conscientious on duty, helping classmates, and actively participating in collective activities are all plus points.
Criticism Depends on The Style of Writing Should Be Changeable
When parents know that the final review is seven points of praise, three points of criticism, the focus is always on the "but" after. The words after this "but" can be several times more difficult to write than the previous praise. Teachers need to give suggestions according to the child's age level, personality characteristics, and development direction, with encouragement and suggestions, "hope you", "expect you", "believe in you" will be how, is a commonly used style, written to children in the lower grades of primary school, but also more than a "childlike" requirement.
Gao Tianqi said that some children are very sloppy in writing homework, and the class is not careful enough, and the teacher will say to him, I hope you say goodbye to Xiao Mahu, and I hope that you and Carefully be friends.
For children with large nerves, you can criticize in the form of "storm"; for sensitive and fragile children, you must encourage them in the form of "gentle wind and drizzle". If a child has more "shortcomings" and the writing becomes a full criticism, what if the child goes back to eat the board? Some teachers told reporters that there are no children who cannot boast, only teachers who cannot boast, in fact, it is a matter of angle, as long as you do not always stand in the perspective of test scores, many "shortcomings" can also be exaggerated, so that children and parents have a good year.
For example, if you like to talk in class, you can write "I like to express myself"; if I can't concentrate, I can write "I have a wide range of interests"... Each teacher has some special "penmanship" that needs to be analyzed on a case-by-case basis.
Cao Ting, an English teacher at Jinling Middle School Hexi Branch, told reporters that if you say "you are a very potential student", it means that your current efforts are far from enough, "you are particularly active in sports", indicating that you may be mischievous, play football when you have nothing to do, and do not study well.
Famous teachers' views
Yin Fei, Deputy Director of the Child Development and Family Education Research Center of Nanjing Normal University
Yin Fei, deputy director of the Child Development and Family Education Research Center of Nanjing Normal University, said: The comments are a comprehensive evaluation of the students' learning and life process in school for a period of time, with the purpose of summarizing the past and inspiring the future. Emotionally, both students and parents want to see the teacher's good evaluation of the child; intellectually, they also want to see the specific aspects of the child's progress and the specific direction of the effort. Therefore, the comments need to be specific and objective to reflect the sincere concern for individual students; the words should be earnest and inspiring to reflect the enthusiasm and confidence in the growth of students; and the requirements should be precise and operable to ensure that future efforts have direction.
Principal of Nanjing Central Road Primary School Lin Hong
Lin Hong, principal of Nanjing Central Road Primary School, believes that when writing teachers' comments, we must grasp the five points of comprehensiveness, motivation, personality, easy to understand and effective. Teachers should evaluate the development of students as comprehensively as possible, and be able to fully encourage students' efforts, achievements, and progress this semester, and evaluate students' problems and deficiencies in a targeted manner, but also pay attention to the way of motivation, and also have personality.
Sample text example
There are also many writing tips for the final review, such as using "the student" but "you" to narrow the distance with the students; borrowing some poems, famous quotes, Internet buzzwords to make the text more vivid, and so on.
Comments for Lower Primary School Students:
Boy, you know what? Your carefully written homework teacher loves to watch, and your loud voice teacher loves to listen. If you can learn to control yourself, seize the time, and play less, then your academic performance will be better than others. May you be the master of time and a diligent and studious child. Teacher Gao pays attention to your every move all the time, worries about your mistakes, and rejoices at your little achievements. Take your step forward, a better tomorrow belongs to you!
You are sensible and well-behaved, and you are rarely heard speaking loudly. In class, you will sometimes raise your hand to express your thoughts, and you can get along well with your classmates after class. The new semester recommends that you read more literature books, make friends with new words, try to know more words, write slower, and write more neatly. Come on, little girl!
Comments for high school students:
My dearest "Director of the Logistics Department", this semester, the teacher owes you too much thanks! Meticulous, down-to-earth, and responsible, you are always the first to appear in front of me when I want to ask for help. At the beginning of the semester, your detailed class decoration plan made me remember you at once, and the word "reliable" has been with you since then. Class affairs, faculty activities, and school arrangements are all without your supervision and help. Thank you for having you! Learning, I hope to continue to maintain a good momentum, the teacher wishes you to complete the three great dreams in 2019! Come on!
In the eyes of the classmates, you are a full-fledged "female man", and in the eyes of the teacher, you are a good girl who is diligent and careful. You know that the teacher loves to eat egg cakes and meat buns, you will sincerely accept when the teacher criticizes you, you will joke with the teacher but always know the measure, you will have some greed but it will not affect the academic performance, you can "stand up" eight projects at the sports meeting, you can make the whole class quiet as soon as you stand on the podium, you can let me rest assured that the whole class will be handed over to you, and the important tasks will be entrusted to you, and you will complete them on time and in quality and quantity. I like your "girly" personality, and I also appreciate your informal personality, which is satisfied with your academic performance. In the new semester, I hope that you can follow the example of Zendia and Zhou Tanqian, continue to work hard, and sprint towards the top 50 of the grade, I believe you will be able to do it!
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