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Luo Yonghao commented on Redmi Note 11 promotional copywriting: it is recommended to dismiss employees

【Mobile China News】On the evening of October 28, the Redmi Note 11 series was officially released, and many new machines such as Note 11, Note 11 Pro, Note 11 Pro+ were officially unveiled. After the new machine configuration and price of the series were announced, it was well received by many consumers because of its high cost performance. However, on October 29, Luo Yonghao "criticized" the phone by name, but the reason was not the product itself, but the promotional copy of the phone.

Luo Yonghao commented on Redmi Note 11 promotional copywriting: it is recommended to dismiss employees

Screenshot of Luo Yonghao's Weibo

The Redmi Note 11 series adopts a right-angle border design, and the sense of line is obvious. When introducing this phone, Redmi officially wrote that "if the design of the small vertical edge will become a trend, start with the Redmi Note 11 Pro series in your hand." The unique sense of edge and angle is also a sharp attitude to this sleek world. ”

Seeing such a copywriter, Luo Yonghao tweeted: .... Expulsion is recommended. The marketing department of the brand manufacturer, if it allows the existence of such employees and behaviors to be tolerated for a long time, will lead people to think that the brand is low, for reference.

Luo Yonghao commented on Redmi Note 11 promotional copywriting: it is recommended to dismiss employees

If you don't pay much attention to the mobile phone circle, you may feel that "the second monk is confused". It is reported that "sleek and sharp outlier" is the product slogan of hammer technology before.

Luo Yonghao commented on Redmi Note 11 promotional copywriting: it is recommended to dismiss employees

Xiaomi Marketplace Redmi Note 11 Pro series details page

At present, mobile phone China entered the Xiaomi mall Redmi Note 11 Pro series product page and found that "there is a sense of uniqueness with edges and angles, and it is also a sharp attitude to this sleek world." The sentence is no longer displayed, probably deleted.

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