【Yan Shuoning's Excellent Composition Display】Creation Story - The Promise of happy birds (5)
My name is Yan Shuoning, I am ten years old and I am in the fifth grade of Fenghua Primary School. I am a girl who especially likes to draw, with watery eyes and a small mouth. All day long with a high ponytail, walking up and down, he is also tall.
I followed the rules and regulations in school and took good care of public property. I have a good mental character and a good heart. And I don't litter and take care of the environment. Anyone who knows me about this habit knows it. I was also very helpful.
This week in class I led the children to create a story with me, I gave some pictures, briefly explained the picture book story, the children wrote a lot of good works, I repeatedly revised with them, and finally presented a good work.
Today I would like to share a creative essay by Yan Shuoning. This child's recent progress is particularly great, her each essay is written very carefully, this work of 1548 words, the article is very meticulously conceived, the writing is beautiful, beyond the level of the fifth grade child, it seems that she is in love with Teacher Tang's language class, but also in love with writing. Come on kids, your future will be better.
I like to have fun with children in texts, share kindness with my pen, and feel things in the world with emotion. Students' outstanding works are published on my public platform, welcome to read and follow. May our words heal your heart, and may the days be pure and your eyes be full of tenderness.
Kids, pick up a pen, join our creative composition class, and start creating!
The promise of the happy bird
Fenghua Elementary School Grade 5 Yan Shuoning
Once upon a time, in the middle of the vast desert, there was a lonely mountain, because the slopes of the desert, there was no grass. There is no life here, no insects or birds would want to stay in this deserted place for a long time, so this mountain has never seen anything that shows signs of life. He stood here alone every day and night. He had seen the various changes in the clouds during the day, he had also seen the lonely stars in the night sky, and he had long known the moon's clouds and clouds. He didn't like this kind of life, but what could he do?
Time flies, and tens of millions of years have passed, and one day, he was looking at the sky in a daze, and a small life like a flame fell at the foot of this big mountain. Look, ah, it's a little bird that is full of red and red, she is so beautiful! The bright red, like a passionate flame. The bird's red feathers, the emerald-green eyes, the delicate little beak, everything is perfect. She was falling on a ridge, combing her beautiful feathers. Dashan was stunned at first, relieved and then surprised, he had never had this cute elf before, he felt that this little bird landed like an angel, she seemed to have come to save him.
"What's your name?" Oyama asked. "I'm a bird, my name is Happy Bird. I came from a place called the Great Forest, which is nice and beautiful. Every spring, I look for a good place to nest and raise my children. I'm tired of flying after a long journey, I just stopped at you and I'll fly away right away. ”
Oyama was disappointed to hear that he had never seen a single bird. He said, "Do you have to fly away?" Can't you really stay? ”
The happy bird shook his head: "I am a life, I must eat and drink water, but there is no grass here, stay here, I can't survive." he said. Dashan said sadly, "Since you can't stay, will you come to see me again?" The Happy Bird thought for a moment, sang a song to the mountain, and said, "I promise that I will come here to see you next spring." "After saying that, the happy bird flew away. Dashan looked in the direction she was going, a long time...
Every spring, happy birds would come to visit the mountain as promised, and each time she sang a song, although the mountain had never heard any other songs, but he thought that the happy bird's song was the best song he had ever heard in his life.
This time, Dashan asked the Happy Bird again, "Can't you really stay?" "No, I am alive, and if it were not for me in a certain year, it would be my daughter, and I named her Happy Bird, and my children and grandchildren will come here every spring to visit you... Either way, I will keep my promise to come to see you. With that, she flew away again. Although dashan was sad, he couldn't do anything about it, and once again looked at her back and watched it fly away alone...
Year after year, in the blink of an eye, 999 years passed, and the Happy Bird came here again, "Hello, Dashan, I am the Happy Bird." I've come to bring you joy! "When you're done, you'll sing." You still can't stay this time, right? "Yes, but I will come back next year!" After saying the mountain, I watched a bird slowly fly away. This time, the mountain couldn't help it, after the happy bird flew away. He began to cry, and that was his really sad cry. His heart was about to break, and in an instant, tears welled up from within the mountain...
I don't know how long later, one happy bird after another flew over, and the mountain also kept crying. The difference is that this happy bird has a seed in its mouth. It planted seeds in a relatively moist place deep in the mountains.
With the help of water in the mountains. The seeds sprouted quickly. The seed grew and grew until it grew into a tall, straight tree, and the mountain still wept every day, not feeling the changes around it. After a long time, every happy bird will carry a seed in its mouth when it comes, and the seeds planted by each happy bird will grow very well, very strong, and gradually many creatures will be willing to survive here. More and more creatures came here, and the mountain eased up, and he suddenly felt that wonderful feeling reappear. He looked down. At the foot of his mountain is a forest with babbling water, beautiful little flowers, dense trees, all kinds of insects... He couldn't believe everything here.
Until the next happy bird came, she also sang a song to Dashan, and Dashan listened attentively. "Can you stay this time?" Oyama asked expectantly. "No, but I'll be back next year." Happy Bird replied the same thing.
Cold and summer, there are many creatures have come here to settle down, hares, goats, antelopes... It has become a zoo loved by animals.
Dashan was happy, he was no longer alone. But he still has in his heart the angel who has come to awaken him for the first time, and he hopes that the happy bird will be with him forever for generations to come. The mountains wait, wait, wait...
Writing is fun
Teacher Tang's words
The world is most afraid of you serious, serious you win. There are many things in this world that there are no shortcuts, and the shortcuts you think of may be the farthest detours.
A person who is accustomed to doing everything to the extreme will not be satisfied with living a life of steadfastness. Your persistence will eventually verify the power of quantitative change to qualitative change.
The harder you work, the luckier you get, and there are no shortcuts to success.
Really want to achieve something, not depends on how much enthusiasm you have, but on how long you can persist, don't expect to be able to achieve your wishes just with enthusiasm.
Dripping water through the stone, not the power of water, but the power of persistence!
Self-discipline is not achieved overnight, but a gradual process.
After careful statistical comparisons, they gave an exact number: Nobel Prize-winning scientists have 20 times better writing and expression skills than ordinary scientists!
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