A picture of tea union deliberation? Or is it pretentious? Look
Author Chen Weiqun
Autumn is here! A kind of bitter joy, perhaps advocating the pursuit of natural life, whether at home or in the office, I do not turn on the air conditioning; as long as there is an air conditioning environment the next day will drink ginger jujube tea; therefore, my office chair is added a gel cushion and a bamboo cool cushion, but the sitting is still "burning ass". Therefore, I really hope to establish autumn. In the autumn of this year, I had a tea joint to remember.
As soon as the mind moved, there was a sentence: Linquan sipping tea and listening to the autumn sound. This sentence is exactly this scene: boil mineral water, brew a bowl of tea, look out the window at the wind, let go of the reverie of autumn...
Liqiu, "Li" is the beginning, "Liqiu" means the beginning of autumn. And I can't help but look back on this whole summer: in order to complete the double task of reviewing manuscripts and writing manuscripts, it is really a practice, every day must go to the office, there is no holiday, almost refuse all activities, and are willing to be silent. Then there is the first union:
Unwinding the pen shou xia jing,
Linquan sipping tea listens to the sound of autumn.
I pursue poetry more in a mood, but the joint sentence must talk about the law, so I changed it to ping shu to:
(Hints)
Broken scrolls of ploughing pens live in the summer silence
(Ping Ping Ping Ping
Linquan sipping tea recorded autumn sounds
It feels like this change is flat, but the poetry is weaker. Scrutiny, scrutiny... I focused on the word "listen." "Listening to the sound of autumn" is definitely better than "recording the sound of autumn", but the listening of "smelling" is the flat sound. What to do? That's right! I remember "listening" and reading (tìng) (文言) to examine; to decide; to govern; to listen to government; to listen to lawsuits; to listen to them; to listen to them, to let them go. "Xunzi Wangba": "Xiang, on the length of the hundred officials, we must listen to Pepsi." In fact, the listening of "Listening to the Autumn Sound of Linquan Sipping Tea" that I blurted out in the first draft is the listening of "listening to it, letting it go", which is a kind of colorful "symphony" that looks forward to the free release and color of autumn! "Listen to the sound of autumn" should be read (tìng). So, the final draft:
Broken scroll ploughing pen diligent summer silence,
I remember Mr. Wen Yiduo said that poetry should have a rhythm, like "dancing with shackles." When I first came into contact with poetry, I felt the same way, but after studying it more deeply, I could no longer identify with this metaphor. In the pre-Qin era, the highest form of poetry was music and dance, and poetry danced according to the beat of music. Music and poetry do not bind poetry, but make poetry more moving. This time, the deliberation and correction of a tea union made me more advocating the poetic rhythm.
This also reminds me of the requirement of "wearing a mask", in the past, I did not wear a mask in sand and fog, and now I wear a mask every day. Wearing a mask because of epidemic prevention is a bondage, but it is the "law" commonly needed by the community of human life, and the freedom of the individual, only by obeying all the public requirements and constraints of epidemic prevention, will everyone (including individual) be free.
