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Preface
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【Five Words】
Listen to Wu Yu Yangqin's "Vitality" (Part 2)
Ding Weiping (Hefei)
Fiber fingers waved, the string on the machine.
Lao Tzu also read it, and the big sound was enlightened.
The end of the year
Hu Yongxin (Hangzhou)
The township is thousands of miles away, and the twilight dreams are returned.
Happy in the first month of childhood, new shoes shuttlecock flying.
Lakeside pick-up sentences
Huang Yunquan (Hubei)
Catch the waves and catch the level, listen to the waves and try to suppress the yang.
Natural rhymes elegantly, willow fishing poetry line.
Before August 1st, I heard that the students downstairs had military training and thoughts
Tang Tiyi (Beijing)
Military songs and military music are played, and the hot summer drills are busy.
Night dreams are on the side, and youth is far away.
Over beacon hill viewing platform
Wang Zhengning (Chongqing)
The clouds descended one by one, hovering over a bay of water.
People are intoxicated, take the brush to draw green mountains.
Qinghe Temple ancient laurel tree
Chen Yong (Guizhou)
Fertile soil with a crown cap.
Watch over the Qinghe Temple, shelter the Yinjin ferry.
Habitually overturned rain, idle green cold smoke.
Years meet the west wind, more incense full of river.
Weeds in the mountains
Guo Dingqian (Chengdu)
The house is based on the green ridge, and the kaixuan faces Akagi.
A thousand peaks are bright and bright, and a waterfall is thunderous.
Good to borrow the wind and clouds to chase Han Moying.
Jiangshan can help me, not let The Taihu Spirit.
Xuehua Mountain Pond
Li Mingke (Anhui)
At the corner of the mountain, there is a natural basin of water.
Surrounded by bluestone walls, a thousand blue waves.
The wind is delicate and the flowers are light, and the snow is warm.
If you take a fairy bath, the moon is the most soul-destroying.
Hot summer
Liang Zhikang (Guangdong)
The east window also saw green, and I felt lazy and soft.
When the rain washed three volts, the poetry was at peace and the building was alone.
I haven't heard of it, so why bother talking about it.
Dangerous leaves who urge old age, Lin Zhong gradually towards autumn.
In the mountains after the rain
Meng Xiangrong (Guangdong)
Fresh rain returns, and the afterglow breaks through the twilight clouds.
Seven colors of condensation, not inferior to fire three points.
There are fewer people in the late Bo, and they are self-congratulatory.
Although the hill is close to the city, it is also far away from the dust atmosphere.
East Pavilion Fishing
Wang Yi (Hubei)
Yi Yi Dong Ting water, Huan Rui summer clear.
Lotus idle wind, Hagi Yan Yu hissed,
Butterflies and flowers laugh and listen to the cicada leaves.
The fishing hammer has not been obtained, and the wave roll is light.
On May 11, friends pier reunion has a feeling
Wang Yingchun (Zhejiang)
The scenery is still the same, and the wind fills the small building.
A note of elegance, a few years of blue eyes.
Dealing with the world is the same as the liver and gallbladder, and the floating life has its own joys and sorrows.
Raise a cup of tea instead of wine, dripping in your heart.
Go to the Triangle Dam to escape the heat
Wang Dunfu (Hubei)
Long Dragon Flying Shu Road, green rushing carriages.
Welcome guests as before, and the dust washing meal is more fragrant.
In front of the bottle, follow the custom, and the pillow under the moon is cool.
In the middle of the night, listen to the rain, open the curtain to receive the light.
Note: It often rains and days here.
In the summer, climb Mt. Zhongzhong to watch a thunderstorm
Zhang Yulin (Hunan)
Suddenly it rained outside the sky, washing out the Mijiatu.
The mist gathered and dispersed, and the layers of mountains disappeared.
Take the cloud as this moment, and sigh slightly.
I love thunder and thunder, and the mountains and rivers are different.
Listen to the rain
Zhong Xiaohong (Guangdong)
The sound of the partitions is asphalt, and the wet fog is blowing.
Blocks are dissipated and accumulated, and poems and books are hanging down.
The flood is flooded, and the worry is that Yuzhou is in danger.
Intermittently, for whom is the sky crying?
【VII】
Nocturnal slogans
Safety East (Sichuan)
Avoiding the epidemic and avoiding the heat has not yet been achieved, and I am marching towards the mountain at night.
Let it not open its eyes, and its own headlights are clear.
Lunch occasionally felt the price of meat plummet
Chi Jian (Zhejiang)
Yesterday in the restaurant occasionally looked, many diners happy and leisurely.
Who knows a piece of fragrant meat, hiding a few pieces of sorrow from the pig farmer.
On the eve of August 1st, weChat avatar changed into a military uniform photo
Cao Xiange (Liaoning)
The hat emblem is dazzling collar badge red, and the grass and green military uniform is the most stylish.
Xie Hui Qiu sighed and did not regret pulling the longbow in this life.
Early spring
Chen Qingfeng (Xuzhou)
The noodles are smoked in the wind, and the wasps are hidden into the cauliflower yellow.
Xinxin is the most cultivating spring guest, sweating on the field and wearing incense.
Shaving
Fan Dongxue (Hunan)
Always have a razor on your body, so as to drive away the sloppiness.
Hugh smiled hairlessly on his lips and looked at the old man's spirit.
The last foreign debt was paid off
Gao Haisheng (Shanxi)
How to reduce the red is afraid of suffering, the green character in front of the screen comforts the cheeks.
The enter key was very happy, and Lao Tzu calmly got off the debt table.
Farmhouse Vegetable Garden (New Rhyme)
Guo Tonghai (Beijing)
A bunch of beans filled the garden with flowers, and xiao saw the fence knotting the colorful Xia.
If you ask the family what to accompany the wine, pick a plate of fresh dew and mix with cucumbers.
The question is short-lived
Hu Xinling (Shandong)
Stealing the dust under the night, a good white jade body.
Riches and glory are not loved, and Ice Heart is only allowed to have lovers.
Magpie chirping
Huang Xu (Shanghai)
The herbs are like the outer embankment of Yintang, and the spring breeze is slightly blowing.
Once the sea was shipwrecked as water, except for the plum trees, I did not have a tree.
Nostalgia is sent occasionally
Jiangnong (Tianjin)
The cannon flashed and the gun fell to the pass, and the white colt and the dog promoted the decline of the face.
Jiashan has no hope of returning, but he is jealous of the floating clouds coming and going.
Dujiangyan South Bridge leans into the night
Jiangheyou (Hebei)
The jade belt in front of Yulei Mountain is long, and the distant light is yellow by the railing.
The river is negative and snowy, and the waves and winds are lost to the eternal coolness.
"Fireworks" brand typhoon
Li Shuxi (Beijing)
—— This typhoon is called fireworks, and the name does not match it!
"Fireworks" are suitable for the tide, and the rapid rain and wind sweep the hemisphere.
Fortunately, Kyushu is often short of water, and it is only mild to come and go.
New Year's Day climbs the Yongguan Great Wall
Li Chunyan (Beijing)
The long wind of hunting passed through the Sai Pass, and Xiao Xiao's war horse was still beautiful.
In the previous dynasty, there were many ups and downs, and it fell into the Guangou WanlingShan.
Xin Ugly went into ambush to send friends back to their hometowns and relatives in the province
Li Lizhong (Zhejiang)
Like a firefly a little glow, the mud returned to the old nest.
The long pity bird has good feelings and does not fly with idle gulls.
The scene of the reservoir after the rain (rhyme)
Li Xiangqing (Zhejiang)
Smoke light water clouds light, light ink a trace who painted.
The first letter of heaven is a lot of magic, only should be simple and not increased.
Chess watching
Li Zhengsheng (Hunan)
Sunset shot lightly, not until it won or lost.
Every time the general was at the key point, several disputes began again.
Guan Zhou Zu Square kite flying photos and feelings of the gift
Lü Zhongguo (Gansu)
Paper kites cover the sky, slowly pulling and playing with the wind.
Hateful Optimus Puller actually blocked me from going to the Immortal Palace.
Occasionally by the lake
Lu Xiande (Qinghai)
The water pavilion sends guests drunk and returns to the bird forest to recognize themselves as home.
Two or three wild ducks have been hunched over for a long time, begging people to learn food.
Cross Dawn Lake
Luo Chunying (Zhejiang)
The lake waves and winds are lightly marked, and the water has warm fish and roots.
Come and go Yunxia knows the appropriateness, mushan pastoral water pastoral dusk.
Mountain village solar street lights
Pan Wenliang (Jiangxi)
The road lights race moonlight, and the neighbors gather quickly to cool off.
Jin Wushan made the Demon God Law and transformed into a dragon into the house.
Cross the river
Pan Zhenhua (Heilongjiang)
A drizzle of rain lingers on its own, and the green willow side under the umbrella.
I am alone in love with the temple, and I paint my body into the water and clouds.
Summer
Pan Yuezhong (Hunan)
God went to the end of the world with ink, watering the garden and making flowers.
Watching the Olympics in front of the TV set, I made a pot of tea.
Send Dengfeng trapped poets
Sun Yin (Beijing)
The wind and rain of Song Mountain are no longer harmful, and the hustle and bustle of the inn is still there.
Twisting the egg must be delayed for a long time, and the distant prayer is good for the heavens to return home.
Bitter rain
Wang Huiwei (Shandong)
Even the wild flooded one level, and the crops were half inclined.
The sound of frogs soaked in the sound of rain should be the bitter waterlogging of the people.
Weightlifting Champion Shi Zhiyong (Xinyun)
Wang Zhiwei (Shandong)
Centennial Olympic poem, several tears fly in front of the screen.
China's billion backbones, a roar of jun is more straight.
June Gangnam Morning Market
Wang Jianqiang (Hebei)
Bamboo bearers were picked to take advantage of the breeze, and Grandma called to sell Xiao Loudong.
Wild bees with flowers and wild vegetables are frequently fluttering, and fireworks are in the middle of a city.
Dragon Canggou
Wen Yadong (Sichuan)
Thousands of trees are covered with green moss, and the shallow water of the stream is rushing.
Dragon Flying Phoenix is hidden, and countless tourists come back.
Fan groan
Xiao Henan (Guangdong)
Origami can be gently shaken to borrow the wind, once laughed and had a slight skill.
In the old days, the deep palace objects were used for ceremonies, and they were gradually neglected among thousands of households.
Dream back to the mountain village of childhood
Xiao Fangzhu (Fujian)
The road is full of wind and rain, and the vicissitudes are easy to get involved.
Yun Shan Qing dreamed of childhood and retired to his hometown for thirty years.
Junti-an
Yu Wenqing (Zhenjiang)
The Dzunti Bodhisattva dwells in the heart, not in the Thousand Mountains and Ten Thousand Mountains.
I am ashamed that I am still in the dust, and it is sometimes difficult for flowers to see Buddhas.
Overlooking
Ye Yongxin (Guangdong)
Futu towered calmly and calmly, showing off the Copper Mountain Pine.
Alone on the West Building Shu yuanmu, one day wind and rain to see the flag peak.
Absolutely
Zhang Mingxin (Shandong)
The rivers and waves are high and the water is gone, and the fame and weight are also floating clouds.
There were thousands of buildings before his death, and he was buried in no two graves after his death.
Night dreams
Zhang Heping (Guangdong)
Man grinds Acacia carefully and grinds it into a spring color into Nanke.
The wind lifted three feet of tender willows, stirring the east window dream nest.
Prevent "fireworks" from feeling
Zhao Jiande (Zhejiang)
Suddenly, the sirens sounded and sounded, and it was the sound of fireworks.
The ghosts drifted unsteadily, causing torrential rain to fall like a river.
Note: Sirens refer to alarms that sound when major natural disasters are about to be temporary, reminding people to avoid danger.
With the Longnan Matsushita Yixian poetry wine exchange has been written and presented online things like smoke
Zhao Baohai (Heilongjiang)
I was in Longshajun in Qin, and I gave Du Kang alcohol to each other.
Xing'an Ridge looks at Qingni Ridge, and they all do Optimus Prime.
Natsugure Komura
Zheng Dengping (Hubei)
Qing Yang Lian Guo smeared XiaHui, and the white mandarin fluttered into the shadows.
The small courtyard who roared, the willow pond geese and ducks sang back.
【Seven Laws】
Cloud Mountain Night Chant
Cui Dehuang (Jiangxi)
Open to the purple smoke, several lights to Que Ming.
The clouds covered the mountains into the darkness, and the wind stopped the birds from flying.
Monk Guiyuan Temple bell urged late, moon washing deep forest dew drops light.
Should wait for Chenglan to float and dawn, idly peeping at the stars and turning to the stars.
Sword Dust Fifty First Degree Second Rhyme Two
Huang Yonghui (Jiangxi)
Self-titled lay people are naïve, and want to be less affectionate and spare no effort.
People are full of wind and currents, and who pity Han Mo is new every time.
The plain clothes were still dark, and the sword groan was even more pure.
It has been proved that the white lotus is a thousand hundred degrees, and the water moon is the antecedent.
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Fooled by the Star Age descends Kun Wei, half a hundred career touch machine.
The earthly world has hidden footprints several times, so the friendship is still in the heart.
The poem is long after drinking, and the flower hair is violated in front of the eyes.
Riding the literary field does not fail, knowing that jun is not thinking about right and wrong.
Self-conditioning
Jiang Changdian (Hunan)
Borrow a corner of the city to idle, cover the door and go to the deep mountain.
Lanfa is fragrant and green sleeves, and the ink is poured on the face.
The exhibition paper is issued every time because of Jia Xing, knocking on the poem to stay and appreciate the sound to see.
In his lifetime, he did not escape Zen intentions, but he was like a cold monk who closed himself.
Sick years
Li Yongren (Gansu)
Since the year of illness, the heart has been covered with dust, and the spring flowers and autumn moon have reduced their spirits.
With the window swallow language slush hard, near the water wave to drive frost leaf pro.
The veteran Dan Xin hao shang rice, fragrant dreams evil and morning.
Xinyu thoughts came and went, so he became a free writer.
Instantly
Yulin Li (Chengdu)
Wind and rain are difficult to settle down at home, and the order of the ten parties is chaotic.
The epidemic has captured the cities of China and foreign countries, and the waterlogging has made the heavenly people dream of hanging flowers.
The rescue plan needs to be truly reflected, and it is not blind to track down on weekdays.
Who can dispel the wrath of the gods and make me laugh all the time?
Note: Ten directions, Buddhism says southeast, northwest and four dimensions up and down.
Untitled (new rhyme)
Qi Ruixia (Hebei)
Hongxing Erke jumped out, and the night daimyo sucked his eyeballs.
The business community has no reputation but rammed quality, and it is difficult for the country to dare to cut it.
If you can give up your life to show true love, I will clear the cupboard with my heart.
The old decay view was deeply moved, and there were tears in his cheeks.
Look at the Yellow Sea
Ren Fu (Heilongjiang)
Step on the edge of the clouds and look at the sea tower, and there are flying gulls in the distance.
The sunset tide receded and the beach was completely naked, and the blue water fish came to fish endlessly.
A thousand years of sinking light Japanese Kou, a hundred years of rise heavy Wu hook.
The ocean rolls up and the waves are surging and the sound of peace is not forgotten.
Xiao Lou micro-journal reads the miscellaneous group poems of Tianxu Restaurant
Sun Linqing (Liaoning)
Sour, sweet and spicy taste Qi Chen, busy Linqiao wearing calves.
It may not be hand-to-body, and it can be used to reward guests with chickens and dolphins.
Let go of the lake, the sea and the sky can be promised, and the wind and earth can survive.
I read the good chapter like a good wine, and the flag pavilion wants to taste the three bottles.
Yong Ho
Shi Jimin (Shanghai)
Leisurely good dreams round several times, summer pond free day.
The lotus blossoms are red and the fire is better, and the lotus leaves in the field are as blue as smoke.
No vulgar worries can be floating white, even if there is a style, it is not mysterious.
Ren is late autumn and withered, and the silver hook iron stroke is also Xiao Ran.
Fifty years of the first degree, when accompanied by the construction team in the countryside
Wan Dewu (Jiangxi)
Things are like dreams like dreams, little who is fifty springs.
Although the poetry wine is left behind, the wind and dust are more white and new.
It is not necessary to pour thin on the human condition, and the remaining insect is pure.
The Ten Directions of Buddhism are admired, and the amorous Judas are the causes of later.
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Only to lower the dimension in front of people, just like the ancient yin gradually forgot the machine.
Towards the sand bank of the egret, twilight saw the green cow return to the bamboo door.
Three or two winds and days are in conflict.
The lone cup is raised against the barren moon, and the long throwing of the dust is right and wrong.
Salute to the flag
Xue Weimin (Xinjiang)
The first shot of the stone broke the sky, and the red flag was raised everywhere.
The thunder shook the ground with courage and courage, and the bloody company was strong in thousands of battles.
The Marvel Army's Wei Shu Sword Qi frequently destroyed the enemy's flames as a dragon.
It should be known that the security of the family and the country are in danger, and the hunting is clear and the nine frontiers are guarded.
Revisit Moutai Garden
Yang Yiming (Shanghai)
Revisiting Moutai Building No. 7, the community reminisced from the beginning.
Since the relocation of the pavilion is newly built, and then the search for the time is more quiet.
The old eyes were several times born of phantoms, and the streamers of light were floating together.
Passing by the mother's fence, I can't bear to look at it and stay for a long time.
Note: Lived in Moutai Garden for 25 years. It's been three years since I moved out!
Brother Junlong's family feasted and talked about it
Yang Ziyi (Huizhou)
The Pavilion is high on the far cen, and the pine welcomes the guests deeply.
The grasshopper state affairs tea is in the middle of the product, and the fungus is poured in the wine.
It is really advisable to break the vows of good friendship, and the Mountain of Pengduo is far from living in the forest.
Idle chanting is both fearful and whispering, and the true meaning is only in the search of the flower moon.
Note: Brother Junlong's living room has a huge welcome pine picture.
Bayi Wish (New Rhyme)
Zhang Fengjun (Beijing)
I also saw Ye Cheng under Jing's banner, with tears in my eyes.
Every thought of the weak crown Qing FeiYan, still remember the frost silk penmanship.
Pan old clothes and broken wine, Shang Wen old blood asked to go out.
How many colorful things are on the pillow, they all fall into the ice river dream.
Written on the 60th anniversary of enlistment
Zhang Guixing (Beijing)
Last night, in a dream, the military trumpet sounded, and I hurriedly searched for the rope wrapped.
Rush a hundred miles to grind bubbles, camping three more snow lights.
The field duty gun is shining, and the landlord's story is tearful.
Sixty years had passed since I woke up, and I was still the soldier of that year.
Note: Enlisted on July 11, 1961.
Xu Ling paid homage to zhu shubei's tomb
Zhang Yilian (Anhui)
For the order of the South Mountain wind full of buildings, pear blossom dock under the birds chirping.
Yasau was robbed of a thousand windows, and the handsome man dipped his hands in the flute autumn.
The moon is desolate and the road is hurt, and the dream moves with the lone boat.
The pages of the line-bound book leave a mysterious smell, and the tomb roof is illuminated to shoot bullfighting.
Ning people
He Zhiyong (Zhejiang)
Mr. Mister's poems are not meticulous, and the carvings of tigers and leopards are wrong.
White clouds continue to chang'an, green shoes who old forest valley.
There was a cold frost in the xuan qi, and the earth was high and hurt.
At the same time, I was extremely depressed, and the wind and dust in jiangbei and jiangnan were evil.
Yin Shin-kuken Kudome, Tagori Riki death is the first.
The mighty and heroic spirit is not returned, and the wine is soaring in the west.
【Word · Music】
Little Heavy Mountain Cold Autumn
Cao Jin (Chongqing)
Knead the flowers and worry a little. The fog is cold and the mountains are cold, pressing Zhu Lou. A curtain of dreams broke the boat. Pouring wine, speechless tears.
When will this hate rest? Deep love is shallow and always sad. I want to pay my heart to the silver hook. Whether the king knows it or not, the sick bones can't help but fall.
Bu Operator, Neighbor Girl Tu Rong
Lone Carnivore (Wuhan)
I'm a child, you're the girl next door. The Twin Towers are high on the opening windows, ticking the overpass rain.
There is no basis for growth, and it is the master of it. The sound of rain is empty and cool at night, can you hear, childhood?
Ru Mengling read "Zhapu Jiyong" at night, when typhoon "fireworks" made landfall in Hangzhou Bay
Fang Jianfei (Zhejiang)
The rain outside the window was fierce, and the lights were at dusk. Open the book about the sages, come and talk about the old mountain. Eaves slip, eaves slip. Drip that year is more leaky.
Happy Happy and Yuan Hongsun Fang Lei Ah Mo Wang Poetry Friends Gathering has a feeling
Li Gongzhen (Shanghai)
The heavy building remained after the rain. A basket of clear air, a few wisps of cicadas accompanied by wine. The lights are confused, the shadows are shuttled, and there are still full of willows. Looking back in the cup, wanting to be at ease, should wash feelings, and dusted for too long. It is the old man who stays with each other.
Drunken asks who can be immortal. The heart is far higher than the Big Dipper. At that time, the moon was like a mirror, driving away the dark night and distinguishing the day. No one remembers anymore, only the infiltration of sorrow. Difficult to harvest, foreign land and wrong way, the east wind to write.
Partridge Day, Title Xin Ugly Henan Dashui
Li Bao (Hebei)
The Milky Way poured out for nine days, flooding the Central Plains day and night. The vastness of urban and rural areas overturned the mud waves, and Li Shu floated and sank to recognize turtle meals.
At this time, I forgot what year it was, and I had no intention of waiting for King Yu to return. However, the period of creation pities the dog, and the cloud removes the rain early and moves early.
Butterfly Loves Flowers and then to The Judges College of Immortal Island
Special (Liaoning)
The career of escaping the epidemic is the same as the cocoon. Peach blossoms, blooming and falling unattended. The summer blue pile is full as usual, and it is only a lot of green moss to start again.
People are sad and happy in middle age. Evening light flowing clouds, always blown away by the wind. A flat sand returns slowly, and the sea and sky are far away from the stars.
Partridge Sky Jade River Ancient Road Line
Haina Wang (Beijing)
Walk through the circle door Igusong, this year is not the same as last year. The Jade River flows with fine strings, and the flowers and grasses are clear and the insects are whispered.
Happy rain, happy mountain. The fallen shoe butterfly asked for whereabouts. When he returned, he felt that the sun was fierce, and an umbrella held open the July wind.
Congratulations to the groom
——Surprised to learn that hongnian, an old friend who went to the countryside, unfortunately passed away, and mourned! You can't sleep at night to celebrate the groom's sacrifice.
Wuyang (Tianjin)
The Ji Canal knows whether it is known or not, recalling the year, knowing that the youth has fallen, and several people have stayed with each other. Jun rewards Long Mu with Dan Heart. Hands clasped together. Hot sweat exhaustion, still difficult to make ends meet. The ups and downs of the journey do not change. Seeking pleasure in the midst of suffering is strong and affectionate. Solid roots, long road.
After ten years of hard work, sigh back to the city and start from scratch. Ge Yilu is ugly. Chai rice oil and salt lifelong affairs, keep the road to poverty. Happy late age, childlike heart is still the same. The old illness eventually became a thousand years of hatred, and he shed tears and sent his brother to go first. Volunteer, rely on fellow villagers.
He Groom celebrates his first birthday
Xiao Yuhan (Gansu)
Drink in a glass. Floating in vain, in vain lakes and seas, waiting for idle running. Counting the years can be laughed at, I am afraid that it is ugly. Just like the abandonment of the bell ringing. The troubled area of the world is chengping or long-term ignorance. From the dagger, ask the dog.
Diamond Flower Treasure Book has no decay. Look at the idle, the pot side wind and moon, the temperament of the friend. Every time I hate the original light parting, Mo longer pavilion climbing willow. Also sigh, nine times out of ten. Straight words beckoned blank eyes at any time, but it was better to close the hanging river mouth. Also sleeves, chopper.
Typhoon "Fireworks" made landfall the day after it was made
Yang Yunzhong (Zhejiang)
The wind breaks the wood, and the rain destroys the windows. Sorrow poured out across the North River. Suddenly thinking of the mysterious thousand mountains, the old people are still good at morning makeup?
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