01 Assignment guidance
This article has only two sentences, telling the story of the baby girl who became a jingwei after drowning and was determined to fill the sea. How to write a vivid and concrete story without departing from the main content? Students are invited to fully develop their imaginations. Outline before writing, and then write the story in detail in the order in which things develop.
1. The cause of the matter: Introduction to the female doll, because no one to play with her, came to the beach to play by herself. (Abbreviated)
This part can write about the girl's love for the sea, paving the way for the following to write about drowning in the sea.
2. The course of events: Talk about the drowning process and reclamation process of the baby girl. (Details)
(1) Coming to the beach and accidentally drowning.
How did you drown? What was the environment like? (You can describe the scene on the sea, such as dark clouds rolling, heavy rain pouring, huge waves) How does the baby girl do? The result?
(2) Drowning and dying, transformed into a jingwei bird.
After becoming a Jingwei bird, what does the bird look like?
What does Jingwei think? (I didn't expect my young life to be swallowed up by the sea, and I was full of resentment towards the sea.) In order not to be swallowed up by the sea in the future, it was decided to fill the sea. ）
(3) In order to fill the sea, how jingwei does it.
Go to the West Mountain to reclaim the branches and stones. What difficulties were encountered in this process, such as bad weather, rough waves, and so on. Write a conversation between the sea (or something else) and Jingwei, and when writing a conversation, try to use modifiers that indicate mood or demeanor.
In order to show the persistence of Jingwei, the process of Jingwei reclamation can also be described in the form of a set of rankings in the order of spring, summer, autumn and winter. ）
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3. The result of the matter: the sea is still turbulent, but jingwei is still persevering in reclaiming the sea. (Abbreviated)
02 Works display
Jingwei reclamation Yang Zhenyu
Once upon a time, in the ancient lands of China, there was a man named Yandi who was the leader of the southern tribes. Emperor Yan had a beautiful daughter named Nuwa.
One day, the lively and lovely baby girl begged her father to go out and play, and Emperor Yan agreed. The baby girl came to the east coast to play, jumping and giggling, only to step on the wet mud and drown, and the baby girl shouted: "Help! Help me! Except for the roar of the waves, no one heard, and the baby girl was taken away by the sea. When Emperor Yan learned of this, he rushed to see that it was too late. The female baby's body had transformed into a jingwei bird, but the flesh could not come back.
Jingwei thought hatefully: The hateful sea, I took my life so young, what if someone else died too? that...... Then I'll fill you in!
Spring, with its birds singing and flowers, is the season when all things grow. At this time butterflies are flying and bugs are walking. Jingwei was bathed in golden sunlight and flew towards the sea with his mouth in his mouth. In the summer, the birds sing in the trees, the sun shines on the earth, and Jingwei is tired but she is still reclaiming the sea. In autumn, the wind blows leaves in the sky, and the weather is cool. Jingwei still flew towards the sea. In winter, it snowed in the sky, and the trees were covered with a lot of snow, heavy, and Jingwei accidentally flew cold to the sea, constantly throwing branches and stones at the sea.
The sea asked Jingwei one day, "Why did you fill me in?" Jingwei said angrily, "I don't want to see more lives lost because of you!" The sea roared, "Haha... You can't fill me in! ”
"Even if I can't fill you up, I'll stick to it!"
Day after day, year after year, the guards took wood and stones from the mountains, flew to the sea, and threw them into the sea...
03 Works display
Jingwei reclamation Jiang Haodong
In a large steppe in the east, there was a tribe, and the leader of that tribe was very kind to the villagers, and this leader was Yandi. Emperor Yan had a lovely daughter named Nuwa. The baby girl likes to go out to play very much, one day, the baby girl found a boat to play in the East Sea, but the sea suddenly rolled up the wind and waves, the baby girl did not even shout "help", and sank into the East Sea with the boat. Since that day, the baby girl has never returned.
It is also strange to say that after the death of the baby girl, her soul floated out of the sea. Anger rose from her head, and the baby girl felt unwilling and turned into a bird. Because she is always "jingwei! Jingwei" cried out, so she was called "Jingwei". Jingwei is shaped like a crow, with a pattern on its head, a white mouth, fiery red feet, and its wings are colorful, and its tail is like two silks, which is very beautiful like a female doll.
"The sea, I hate you! I can't let you harm anyone else anymore! I'm going to fill you in! "The Jingwei bird flew to the western mountain, grabbed the wood and stones, and threw them into the sea.
In the spring, everything revived, the beasts woke up from hunger, although Jingwei flew fast enough, there would still be beasts to attack her, but she was not afraid, still flying to the East Sea with the wood and stones; in the summer, when the sun was hot, Jingwei was not afraid of the heat, insisted on throwing stones to the East Sea, but the sea was still rough; the autumn wind blew, the cool struck, and the sea still did not change at all. The other birds laughed at her, but as if she hadn't heard, she still flew on the sea and threw wood and stones; in winter, the cold wind was biting, and the guards rushed into the East China Sea where the wind and snow formed a thin ice, and continued to throw branches and stones...
Day after day, year after year. The sea is still so wide, the waves are still so rough. But above the sea, that stubborn little bird, Jingwei, is still busy...
(By rewriting, children's thinking space is improved and their thinking becomes more agile.) ）
