Literature and art should be done conscientiously, there must be no errors or flaws, and the editors and reviewers of articles that are also textbooks must not enter wrong chapters and sentences, or when facing multiple chaotic versions, they must enter them in the most correct and perfect version of the psalms, otherwise there will be the dissemination of incorrect or imperfect knowledge. One of the poems is wrong in the compilation, that is, a poem written by Yang Wanli about Xugongdian in Suxin City.
The poems compiled in the attached textbook are as follows:
Suxin Xugong store Song Yang Wanli
The hedge is sparse and deep, and the new green at the head of the tree is not shaded.
Children rush to chase yellow butterflies, flying into cauliflower nowhere to be found.
There are errors in this version, the second sentence "new green", is not poetic, the correct version should be "flowers fall". Why? This is an analysis.
I. Characteristics of Poetry
Song poetry is more reasoned, compared to Tang poetry, it is less profound, emotional and interesting, but Yang Wanli, with his unique achievements, wears embroidery needles, carves talents, and carefully presents some interesting poems.
The poem of Xugongdian in Suxin City is one of his masterpieces of interesting poems. Poetry and rhyme are good, but also to meet the tastes of men, women and children, and singing is everywhere in the streets.
2. Appreciation of poetry
Our appreciation of it has the following aspects:
1 Creative background
Yang Wanli's poem is included in the Jiangdong Collection, and from 1190 to 1192, he was the deputy envoy of Jiangdong Transit (Ren Wasjian, which is now Nanjing), and this poem should have been written during this period. As for the address of Xugongdian in Xinshi, the textbook is compiled as Xinshi Town, Deqing City, Huzhou, Zhejiang, and another one that has won more credibility is Xinshi Town, Dangtu County, Anhui (that is, the new town in Bowang District, Ma'anshan City). Because the poem has place names and customs figures such as Zenjiafang, Yejiaqiao, Taipingzhou, Liuzhi Customs, and Xue ChengXiang, all of which are in line with the historical scenery of Dangtu County, Taiping Prefecture. Therefore, I think the latter statement is the most appropriate.
2 Ideas
Yang Wanli spent his life running around the official scene of the Southern Song Dynasty, although there was a voice of vibration, but the shortcomings of the national government were already deep. Then, seeing the ups and downs of the dynasty, and at this time the age is high, the heart of retreat is gradually born, so he often chants poems of historical scenery on the way to cultivate temperament. This poem also expresses the pleasant scenery of the mountain village in the form of fun.
3 Content
"Hedge" is a fence, and "sparse" means sparse. The fence is sparsely enclosed, and there is a deep path leading to it. It was March, and the trees on both sides of the trail were occasionally covered with flowers, and the branches were not as dense and flourishing as in summer, and they did not appear to be deep.
At this time, several children were seen chasing yellow butterflies and frolicking, and suddenly, yellow butterflies flew into the rape flowers. The children were overwhelmed when they chased the rape flowers, because they couldn't tell which one was the yellow butterfly. Which is the yellow canola flower?
4 Artistic techniques
"A path deep" and "flower fall", static combination, so that the picture does not dry up. "Children chase" and "yellow butterflies fly in", one chase and one run, lively and cute. Originally, a picture of an ordinary rural fence scenery and children playing, in the hands of Yang Wanli, with his unique artistic techniques, presented a lively and beating picture. Poetry also! Paint also! Fun also!
3. "New Green" applies improper judgment basis
The head of the tree "new green", in addition to the general description and special environment, generally speaking in the early spring, the new shoots and the first growth of fine branches and leaves on the tree, green and new, full of spring, called "new green".
For example, a poem:
1 Generally in early spring, the use of "new green":
a Chang'an Early Spring Brigade Huai Tang Bai Juyi
Xuan Che Sang to The Capital, and one of them stood towards Sui.
In the middle of the night, the bright moon rolls the curtains, and the sunset green mountains look at the countryside and cry.
The wind blows the new green grass buds, and the rain sprinkles light yellow willow wet.
In this life, I know that I am a young man, and I do not show my sorrow for thirty years.
b Exploring spring on the second day of the first month of the Northern Song Dynasty
When youth comes, the snow has not yet subsided.
In the vast expanse of old roots, the new green has been reflected.
It can be seen that the new green of trees under normal conditions is said to be in early spring.
2 "After the rain" special conditions, the use of "new green":
a Xichanyuan Bamboo Northern Song Dynasty Mei Yaochen
The ancient temple is covered with a green onion and a thousand rods of jade.
The spring shoots are long and old forests, and the summer rain is wet and new green.
b Touch the fish Northern Song Dynasty Ouyang Xiu
Rolled embroidered curtains, sycamore autumn courtyard, a flash of rain adds new green.
Note that "after the rain", "after the rain" relative to the "before the rain", the branches are absorbing the essence of the rain dew, of course, it looks fresher and greener, so you can use "new green" at this time.
In summary, when the rape flowers are in full bloom in the third month of the lunar calendar and sunny days, it is not appropriate to say that the tree head is "new green". Therefore, it is suggested that the wrong version of the textbook be revised to the correct version, that is, "new green" is changed to "flower fall".