Introduction: The rhyme of poetry should pay attention to nature, and it must not be at the cost of "harmful intentions", but it cannot be used as a shield for "non-rhyme"
Let's look at the previous issue of The Flying Mountain Poem to 1473:
The frog sitting in the well is too small
See which friends have a good sentence:
Maybe it's a little harder, the requirements may be higher, for the time being, I haven't found a suitable lower link, and then look at the picture proposition poem "Ambition of the Burrow":
@123 Old Mei Wu Lin Fu
Seven Absolutes of burrow ambition
Only the dark room is sent to the heart, and the cold window facing the wall dreams.
Who knows the lofty ambitions of the birds, and eventually becomes a great cause and an ambition.
Personally, I think that the last two sentences are a little less connected, can it be like this: who knows the honghu high ambition, not for the great cause in the ambition; note: hu, into the sound, two wo rhyme department.
@Leisurely elegant 61482192175
Ambition in the Burrow
Zhu Men has its own salivating meat, and there is no dreamer in the hut.
Chiseling the wall steals light diligently, and he is worried about the cold and not in the spring.
Ha, salivating meat, although there is no big problem, but it always feels uncomfortable to read, can it be relaxed: Erlang God; thatched house, house, generally refers to the larger house, house, it is much smaller, worthy of a Mao character, suggest: hut.
@Jianping 249504053 Liu Jianping
The Burrow attacked the book as an official, and chiseled the wall to steal the light and accompany the cold of the night.
Rushing to Beijing to eat and sleep, I was happy with myself.
Ha, what an outspoken word! Some things are very unpleasant to say, and it is always necessary to cover them up with high-sounding reasons; in the eighties, there was a very high slogan: Read for the rise of China! I appreciate this sentence and do the same, but now that China has risen, I am lying flat. Ha, don't laugh, it's true.
@淙淙5
With a frank heart and a strong heart, Yu Xi's heart is like a moon,
The treacherous and shameless forces each other to achieve the ancient "Buried Room Ming".
Adjust it a little, and it will be in line with the law:
With a frank and proud heart, Yu Xi's heart is like a moon;
Shameless adultery and evil are pressed together, and Fang Cheng is a hundred family names.
Tin, forced, into the sound of the word, belongs to the sound of the voice.
Well, it's time for me to make up the sentence, first of all, the sentence syntactic poem:
Sentence: The frog sitting in the well is too small, and the flat servant is flat
Pair of sentences: White Horse Huaichun hates long face. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Sentence: The rat's eyes have never looked at an inch, and the servants are flat and flat
Syndication: Ugly why complain about Daddy. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Long, niang, flat water rhymes under the ping qiyang.
White Horse Huaichun hates the face long, the picture comes from the Internet
Burrow, picture from the internet
Look again at the picture proposition poem "Ambition of the Burrow":
The Seven Deadly Chambers
The Burrow often chants the Burrow Inscription, and the Servants are Flat and Ping
Late life inevitably squeaks. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Shi Hao but understand the poor people's will, plain and flat
Do not praise Hongru praise Bai Ding. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
The "life" of the late birth is a real "squeeze rhyme" here, but any "rhyme" can not be at the cost of "harmful intentions", it is better to leave regrets, not to leave traces, everything should pay attention to nature; Ming, PingShui rhymes under Ping Jiuqing, the first rhyme can rhyme neighbor rhymes; sound, Ding, Xia Ping Ba Geng.
Ripple a little heart trembling, the picture comes from the network
Sunset, picture from the network
Well, take a look at today's outlink:
Uplink: Ripple a little heart trembling, ping ping ping ping
Lower link: 仄仄平平仄仄平
Look at the picture as a propositional poem "Sunset", the title can add words, no limit to rhyme, five and seven can be.
Looking forward to the wide participation of friends and friends!
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