●Lecture at the test center
【Test Center】
(1) Paragraph (3) (4) (5) is an interpolation, and the role of these paragraphs in content and structure is analyzed in combination with the full text. (Suqian City, Jiangsu Province) "Pull the Key"
(2) From the full text, what is the order of the natural paragraphs in the text (11) - (20)? What does it do? ("Interlude") (Yueyang City) "A Penny Difference"
【Lecture on test center】
"Shunshu", also known as positive narration, is one of the methods of narration. Sequential narration is a method of narration in chronological order of events and developments. Function: Make the narrated events from beginning to end, the order is orderly, the literary atmosphere is naturally through, and the article appears to be clear.
"Flashbacks" are a method of mentioning the outcome of an event or one of the most important and prominent fragments to the front of the article according to the needs of expression, and then narrating from the beginning of the event in the original order of development of the event. Function: It can enhance the vividness of the article, make the article suspenseful, more fascinating, and at the same time avoid the flat and direct narrative of the narrative and the monotony of the structure.
"Interlude" is a narrative method in which a narrative inserts a piece of content related to the main plot in order to help unfold the plot or portray the characters in the process of narrating the central event, temporarily interrupting the narrative thread. Function: Make necessary preparations, care for and supplement the main plot or central events, so that the plot is more complete, the structure is more rigorous, and the content is more substantial. Set off the central characters, enrich the plot, and deepen the theme of the article.
The role of supplementary narration: After the narrative, supplement the content such as the results of the narration of the event. The supplementary narrative only makes necessary supplementary explanations of the people and events in the plot.
The interlude is about two related things, and the flashback and the supplement are the same thing.
【Test Center Test】
I. Hebei Province Don't move the most beautiful flower in the world
(1) Winslet is a beautiful Little English girl. She has golden mane hair, a pair of large blue eyes on her pink face, and long eyelashes that flicker. Her voice is soft and sweet, very beautiful. She smiled like a flower had bloomed on her face. People in the neighborhood affectionately called her "Angel of Reading".
(2) The city of Reading is a jurisdiction of Berkshire, and there are often outsiders who settle here. That spring, a new woman, Mrs. Jennifer, moved in to the left neighbor of the Winslet family. She was a widow, childless, with only one nephew and no presence, so she seemed very lonely. The adults were busy, and no one wanted to stop in front of her house for a moment. The old woman attracted Winslet's attention because she was as lonely as the old woman. Winslet's parents were both professional actors, and busyness was the norm in their lives. Every day after school, Winslet would go to the old lady and play with her for a while. She told the old woman interesting stories about kindergarten, and the old woman told her nice fairy tales. Especially on weekends, young and old often share happy times together.
(3) This spring, Mrs. Jennifer felt unusually bright.
(4) Once, Mrs. Jennifer asked winsle what she most wanted to do when she was older. Winslet replied without hesitation, acting as an actor like Mom and Dad. However, she wants to become a big star and win an Oscar. Mrs. Jennifer brushed the little girl's hair and nodded approvingly.
(5) When the flowers and plants in early spring began to show off their style, unsatisfactory also quietly came. Winslet had a lump on his neck the size of a pigeon's egg. Her parents rushed her to the best hospital in Berkshire for treatment. The doctor said it was a benign tumor, still in its early stages, and that only one surgical problem was solved. However, the surgeon's surgery was too full, and Winslet's surgery was scheduled to take place the following week.
(6) Winslet returns home and becomes silent and autistic. She didn't want to go to kindergarten or Mrs. Jennifer anymore, and she was afraid of surgery. One evening, Mrs. Jennifer came to Winslet's house. She asked about the operation and touched Mowyns Wright's head to encourage her to be stronger. For the next two days, Mrs. Jennifer never came again. Winslet missed her a little. But the door to Mrs. Jennifer's house remained tightly closed.
(7) Winslet's surgery was a success. After a week of recuperation in the hospital, she returned to her home. However, she still did not see Mrs. Jennifer. Two days later, when Winslet came home from school, she was delighted to find the door to Mrs. Jennifer's house open! She took three steps and made two steps and ran in. However, she did not see Mrs. Jennifer. Busy packing things in the room was a man. Look closely, it is Dr. Matthew , the surgeon who was the chief surgeon at the time of her surgery! Winslet asked in amazement, "How did you get here?" "Dr. Equine said he was Mrs. Jennifer's nephew. Winslet then eagerly went with Mrs. Jennifer. Dr. Ma's eyes darkened, and he whispered, "She's dead!" ”
(8) It turned out that when Mrs. Jennifer learned that her nephew was the master of the knife for Winslet, she rushed to Berkshire and found Matthew. She made a suggestion to Matthew that she should make a lateral incision according to the lines of the skin of the neck. Because the lump on Winslet's neck was long and erect, Matthew's original plan was a longitudinal incision, so that the operation was the least difficult and the risk was minimal. So he looked embarrassed. But the aunt did not spare him, and he had to change the plan. She said: "If the knife edge is cut vertically, then there will be a striking scar in the future, and her dream of becoming a big star will be cut off by this knife." Dr. Matthew agreed. But the next day, Mrs. Jennifer was in a car accident on her way back to Reading.
(9) Winslet listened and cried into a tearful man...
(10) The pace of time never stops. In the blink of an eye, Winslet became a beautiful girl and successfully became an actor. With the role of Rose, the heroine of the century in titanic, she created a myth in the history of cinema and won the 81st Oscar crown.
1． Why does Mrs. Jennifer feel that this spring is "unusually bright"? (2 minutes)
Answer: Because of The Companionship of Wincessette, Mrs. Jennifer no longer feels lonely and feels particularly comfortable.
2． What is the description of the line-added sentence in paragraph (2) of the selected text? What does it do? (3 minutes)
Answer: Depiction of the natural environment (scenery); paving the way for Mrs. Jennifer's appearance and driving the storyline forward.
3． Combined with the specific context, the expression effect of the following emphasis (line) words and sentences is analyzed. (4 minutes)
(1) At the beginning of the flowers and plants in early spring, unsatisfactory also quietly descends.
Answer: Use anthropomorphism (or derogatory word to praise) to vividly describe the scene of flowers and plants showing off their posture.
(2) Winslet listens,......
Answer: The use of exaggeration highlights Wenslet's extremely sad emotions after hearing about Mrs. Jennifer's unfortunate encounter.
4． What does paragraph (8) interject? What does it do? (4 points) (Test Point 4 The Meaning or Function of Shunshu, Interlude, Supplementary Narration and Flashback)
Answer: It explains the process of Mrs. Jennifer's persuasion of the doctor to change the surgical plan and the unfortunate situation encountered; so that the article is rich in content, the plot is undulating, highlighting the theme idea, and enhancing the appeal.
5． Combined with the content of the selected essay, write a short acceptance speech for Winslet. (3 minutes)
Answer: Example: Standing on the podium, I am very touched! Here, I would like to thank Mrs. Jennifer, who has passed away! Without her selfless love and help, I would not be where I am today, and I will always miss her!
2. Dali, Yunnan Province, living well is love (Li Xiao)
(1) In the early morning of March 26, 21 years ago, a young man was lying on the railway tracks of Shanhaiguan, and a roaring train ran over the body of a Chinese pastoral poet. It was his 25th birthday.
(2) This man is Haizi, who wrote "Facing the Sea, Spring and Warm Flowers".
(3) A young life disappears in this season of spring. Spring is a beautiful season of vitality, but Haizi is gone, walking in this season of warm spring flowers.
(4) However, this child, whose original name was Cha Haisheng, he would not have known in another world, on the morning of his birthday, his mother had boiled a pot of red rice porridge in the cooking smoke of the countryside, and in such a traditional way, silently blessed her son in a foreign land.
(5) In March, in the rain-dripping village, the ashes of this man named Cha Haisheng were sent to chawan village, where his mother lived, and an earthen grave was built under the woods more than 300 meters in front of the door.
⑥。 In the wind and rain of the countryside for 21 years, the mother cried her son Haisheng and cried and broke her eyes.
(7) When Haisheng was 15 years old, he was admitted to Peking University, and a village boiled over, and a county town also became a sensation, and his mother went door to door to send her steamed white cakes late at night. After graduating, this son became a poet in Beijing. The first time I went to Beijing to see my son's hair growing so long, my mother just said, "Haisheng, go cut it!" On the day his mother left, the poor poet borrowed three hundred yuan from someone and insisted on carrying it into his mother's bag. The mother's bag contained fifty eggs from the family, and the mother raised a flock of chickens for her son in the countryside. After a few days and nights of bumps, when I arrived in Beijing, I didn't break a single one. The mother kept the cloth bag full of eggs in her arms, because she believed that every time her son ate an egg, the son named the poet, his pale face would be a little more rosy. (8) The three hundred yuan that the son stuffed into her, I heard, is still tucked in the arms of her 80-year-old mother. The mother said that after her death, it would be enough to use her son's three hundred yuan to send her on the road.
(9) After Haizi committed suicide, many people exclaimed that this was the fall of a comet; some people sighed that his poem was thunder. However, in the eyes of the mother, there was no comet at all, only a life connected to the atrium of her heart, and there was no thunder in the mother's ear, and only a child crying in the dream. A country can have no poets, and a mother cannot lose a child at all. Haizi, he wrote the most painful poem, not into the land he sang, but embedded in the painful veins and atrium of a mother.
(10) Therefore, I always feel that nostalgia for such a poet in the spring is actually a kind of cruelty to my mother. So, how does a child express the deepest love for his mother? I think there is only one answer, to live well, and that is love for mothers.
(This article is selected from "Readers", with deletions)
1． From the full text, what order of narration is used in paragraph (1)? Tell us what it does. (3 points) (Test Point 4 The Meaning or Function of Shunshu, Interlude, Supplementary Narration and Flashback)
Answer: The order of flashbacks (1 point) is used to explain the ending of the matter (1 point), creating suspense and attracting readers (1 point).
2． In context, talk about your reaction to "The first time I went to Beijing, I saw my son with so long hair, and the mother just said, 'Haisheng, go cut it!'" Add a little word to the understanding of the word "smiling and squinting". (2 minutes)
Answer: The mother admonishes her son in an amiable manner, from which we can see the mother's love and tolerance for her son.
3． From then on, the mother's gaze never left her son's grave for a day, and it was her soul that accompanied her son to sleep. What did you read in this sentence? (3 minutes)
Answer: The son is the mother's hope, the mother's whole, and the son's departure makes the mother miss and grieve incomparably. Although the mother is alive, her soul has gone with her son. It can be seen how important the son is to the mother, and how deeply the mother loves the son. (If the meaning is right, you can give points as appropriate)
4． The dashed sentence in paragraph (10) is briefly appreciated from both content and rhetorical terms. (4 minutes)
Answer: The content author uses the form of the sky to express love for the earth, telling us how children should care for and repay their own people (2 points). Rhetoric: The use of questioning and anthropomorphic rhetoric (one can be answered, 1 point) vividly emphasizes how children should return the love of their loved ones (1 point). (If the meaning is right, you can give points as appropriate)
5． Which detail in the text moved you the most, and why? (3 minutes)
Answer: Open questions. Find out the details (1 point) Answer the reason for the move. (2 minutes)
6． Combined with the title of the article and the reality of life, talk about your feelings after reading this article. (3 minutes)
Answer: Open questions. Closely follow the connotation of the title, connect with the reality of life, and answer your true feelings. (Fluent language, reasonable)