Original poem
rainwater
Text/Yu Xiuhua
The rain began to fall at nine o'clock in the morning, and the roses trembled
It was from eight o'clock
We talked for a while last night
Gardenias in the yard send a milky white aroma
"He didn't know I liked him"
His name smelled of mint and weighed on my lost teeth
on the dental plate
The rain began to fall at nine o'clock in the morning, and the fish were in turmoil
It started last night
We need a little brighter middle age
Let the green vine of the next year wake up and climb the windowsill again
I have a river full of pockets
Ushered in him
- The most dazzling wave
Whoever praises the rain will run in the rain
Our respective provinces slope down a hillside
The first to merge were the two rivers
The wind stopped, between one drop of rain and another
These are supplemented in parts
I'll take it out slowly
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赏析
Yu Xiuhua's poem "Rain" uses the scenery of rain to show the beauty of rain and the rhyme of life. Praise youth, praise love, praise nature, fully reveal the author's nostalgia, love and yearning for a better life, beautiful emotions, and a better life.
The author uses the image of rain to trigger a good life in the past, "the rain starts to fall at 9 a.m.", but from 8 a.m. the "aroma" of "rose" rain wafts in, and "the smell of mint presses on the tooth plate of the lost tooth." "From here, it can be seen that people are in their twilight years. The rosy years, the time when the "oak flower" was in full bloom, the time when the "mint" fragrance was exuding, had gradually moved away from me. Their beauty can only be a scenery in my heart.
How beautiful the scenery is, "it started to rain at 9 o'clock in the morning", but last night the water had become a river, and the "fish" were fat and swam around; What a beautiful time it is for youth and prime of life, with "bright" points of light shining everywhere; "Green vines climb on the windowsill"; The "river" water flows in the heart, sparkling "waves", such a beautiful scenery, can only be found in the time of "rain in the morning".
Let's find this happiness in the "running" of the rain, the rain of thousands of "slopes" rushes and gathers into the river of life, where I want to "pick out" the best time and present it to everyone.
In this poem, the author firmly grasps the image of "rain", and uses the image of "rain starts to fall at 9 o'clock in the morning" to connect the beautiful scenes of the past, and skillfully produce a contrast of time, to highlight the author's nostalgia for a better life, love and admiration, which is the characteristic of this poem.
author
Liu Shuren, a native of Ningjin County, Dezhou City, Shandong Province, is a retired teacher, a member of the City and County Writers Association, and a poet in his spare time. Poetry is discovery, creation, and every poem is a Ganoderma lucidum grass that grows in the soil of the poet's thoughts. Most of the poems have been published in the poetry magazine "Shandong Poetry" and "Poetry Magazine", "China Poetry Network", "Wenfeng Academy", "City Headlines", "Dezhou Recitation Art Troupe", "You Walk in My Landscape" and other literary network platforms at all levels. The poetry collection "Sunset Fun One" reproduces the time of morning and evening.
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