Recently, the "Green Pepper Plan" of the red network has completed the statistical analysis in March 2024. The Red Net Theory Review Center selected the preliminary works according to the procedure, and invited Lei Guiping, a professor at the School of Journalism and Communication of Shanxi University of Media and Communication, to select the winning works in March. Based on the winning works in March, the judges' comments, the participation of universities, the number of submissions and other information, the briefing is released as follows:
For this month's winning works, Teacher Lei Guiping commented in turn:
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1. Persuade "poor students" to give up the high school entrance examination: What is more terrible than losing fairness is the loss of hope
Author: Qi Chen (Jinggangshan University)
Lei Guiping: Being good at discovering the problems behind the seemingly ordinary news reports and the universality of the problems is a reflection of the commentator's ideological acuity, and it is also a manifestation of the value judgment of the commentary. Judging from the news, the problem of the school issuing voluntary waiver of the high school entrance examination application to poor students has been resolved, but the reflection and questioning of the school's practice cannot stop there. The commentary grasps the key points of the issue, and analyzes and argues in depth from the surface to the inside. Firstly, the contradictory practices of "school issuance" and "candidates voluntarily give up the application for the high school entrance examination" are pointed out, and then the explanation of the school's diversion to vocational schools is refuted, and the possible "cooperation" relationship behind it is revealed. He put forward the view that "persuading poor students to give up the high school entrance examination" is inevitably undesirable, and further demonstrated the viewpoint from the policy of safeguarding the legitimate rights and interests of students and educational fairness. At this point, it seems that a "logical closed loop" of argumentation has been formed. However, the profundity of this commentary lies precisely in adjusting the viewpoint, understanding the ascending dimension, and thinking from the perspective of judging things to the far-reaching. Focusing on the growth and future of students, the view that "what is more terrible than losing fairness is the loss of hope" goes straight to the root, and it is especially worthy of reflection for schools whose mission is to "cultivate people with virtue". Then use your own experience as an argument to argue your point of view positively. Finally, it is necessary to trace the root cause and trigger the appeal of the evaluation system of the admission rate behind the rectification and the malpractice of education based on merit. The commentary is broken, thought-provoking, well-argued, and powerful, saving "hope" from a voluntary letter of "persuasion", sounding a wake-up call in the field of education, and highlighting the value and significance of the commentary.
2. 3 junior high school students killed classmates and destroyed their bodies: the identity of minors should not be a "talisman"
Author: Chen Yiling (Hunan Normal University)
Lei Guiping: The power of commentary lies in shouting for fairness and justice and promoting social progress. The news that three junior high school students in Feixiang District, Handan City, bullied their classmates and killed them aroused widespread concern and great indignation in society, and public opinion was in an uproar, unanimously demanding that they be punished with capital crimes. How to grasp the hot spots of public opinion, target the pain points of society, correctly guide public opinion, and the rational voice of news comments beyond the emotions of the audience is very important. The brilliance of this review is precisely in response to the appalling and extreme school bullying incidents that have occurred, especially the huge gap between the juvenile protection law and the objective effect, the death of innocent victims, the protection of cruel perpetrators, and the fierce conflict between the rationality of the law and the sensibility of the human heart, the author clearly proposes the "Law on the Protection of Minors" It should be a safe haven for victims, not a protective umbrella for murderers, and in view of this case and the facts of many juvenile crimes that have emerged in recent years, conduct an in-depth analysis in combination with the social environment in which minors grow up, and further propose that the tolerance and protection of minors cannot be at the expense of victims, and that criminal acts of a heinous nature should be punished in accordance with the law, and should be punished severely. The commentary not only empathizes with the emotions of the society, but also demonstrates profound rationality, and puts forward constructive suggestions with reference to the British "malicious age rule", contributing the author's ideological wisdom. This voice, together with the positive voices of various media, has formed a torrent, which will surely promote a fair verdict on the incident and a more perfect law. If the second half of the title is amended to read: "The status of a minor should not be a 'talisman' for the perpetrator", the meaning would be more accurate.
3. Blocking the reporter's lens is covering the "window" for the public
Author: Lai Shiwei (China Institute of Labor Relations)
Lei Guiping: Blocking the reporter's lens is the "window" facing the public, the title of the commentary, and the point of view of the commentary, which is concise and incisive, and goes straight to the point. In response to a suspected gas leak in a shop in Yanjiao, Hebei Province, some people tried to block the camera, and even obstructed the reporter of China Central Radio and Television from doing live coverage of the incident. Sudden accidents or disasters are inherently moving, and the reporter's lens is the "window" for the public to understand the world, and the comments not only feel indignant about the reporter's experience, condemn the gross infringement of the public's right to know, give a very clear, profound and powerful criticism of the obstruction of news reporting, but also give an excellent interpretation and affirmation of the reporter's responsibility and mission, in a word, guide the audience to clearly understand the essence of right and wrong in the incident. Commenting on the obstruction of reporters' reporting from the Yanjiao gas deflagration accident in Hebei Province, and related to a number of incidents in which reporters were beaten or threatened for interviews, not only commented on the clear views, thorough analysis, and powerful arguments, but also conveyed the power of justice, and better grasped the balance between reason and emotion.
4. Goodbye, Girls' Day! Hello, Women's Day!
Author: Zhao Ruyi (Huazhong University of Science and Technology)
Lei Guiping: Important festivals and anniversaries are common types of news commentary topics, and it seems easy to write about praise or commemoration based on the connotation and significance of festivals, but it is not very easy to write about the times or make unique thinking. Taking the international "March 8" Women's Day as the theme, the commentary keenly captures some new changes in the expression of the festival, starting from the concepts of "Girls' Day", "Queen's Day" and "Goddess Day", and deeply analyzes the changes in women's concepts between the rise and disappearance of these concepts. This is a topic that is easy to entrain, but this article does not lose its rational calmness while maintaining the emotional temperature, which reflects the profundity of the author's thoughts and strong language control. In this paper, the concept of "male gaze" proposed by Laura Mulvey, a famous contemporary feminist film critic, in her article "Visual Pleasure and Narrative Film", analyzes the cultural context and commercial meaning behind some buzzwords, and helps readers and audiences understand the essential meaning of things, which is very instructive. On the occasion of Women's Day, the precise meaning of the term "woman" was re-emphasized, and women should not only accept it honestly and confidently, but also have their own independent spirit and personality. This comment on feminism, written on the occasion of Women's Day, has added a new connotation to Women's Day and also radiated the glory of the times. Although the commentary focuses on the analysis of abstract truths, the integration of network sense voice and theoretical discourse is both thought-provoking and quite readable.
5. Behind the "difficulty in finding the media" is the rights and interests protection mechanism of "getting sick".
Author: Liang Yufei (Hexi University)
Lei Guiping: It is not uncommon for public opinion to be hot spots caused by various large-scale concert ticketing issues, and it is also a topic that news commentators like to follow up. The comment was based on the problem of difficulty in refunding tickets on Damai.com caused by a help-seeking post of "I can't go to the concert because of my father's death, and Damai.com must provide a death certificate for ticket refund", and finally the lady in question chose to post the matter on the social platform to ask netizens for help to solve the incident, and did not stay at the conventional perspective of the platform's ineffective emergency response or inhumane enough, but found a unique way, focusing on the solution of "finding the media if it is difficult to find the media", and made a deep analysis of the reasons behind it, and found that the common "sickness" was widespread The rights and interests protection mechanism, that such a trivial matter as "refund" must seek help from the media, is essentially the imperfection of the consumer rights protection mechanism, and deeply analyzes the pros and cons of media rights protection and public governance, and clearly puts forward the fundamental strategy to solve the difficulty of rights protection, which should still be the improvement of the system and mechanism and the improvement of the level of public thought. The author has a keen mind, thinks calmly from the noise of the crowd, and explores the fundamental solution to the problem. The commentary is profound, novel, objective and rational in analysis and argumentation, and puts forward reasonable and constructive suggestions for promoting the solution of common problems, which has strong practical significance. The language is clean and neat, and it is necessary to speak without annoyance, showing good language skills.
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Green Pepper Comic Review | "High school" of university
Author: Huang Zhiwei (Southwest University of Science and Technology)
Lei Guiping: The comic review uses the hot topic of "college students' parents" as the reason, and the combination of cartoons and texts expresses the view that the parent group is gradually not a good phenomenon in college, and believes that this reflects the distrust of parents and schools in their children's autonomy and independence. As adults, college students should learn to take responsibility for their own decisions and behaviors, rather than relying too much on the "assistance" of their parents. The text on the outside of the picture briefly introduces the head and makes a point of view, as an important addition to the comic. As a carrier of commentary, the comic is composed of four consecutive pictures, which are concise, intuitive and vivid, and the expressive expressions of the characters and the eye-catching narration vividly express the views of the commentary, which gives full play to the advantages of comic commentary.
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Green Pepper Small Theater | "The First Time to "Cheat"
Authors: Jia Shendi, Wei Wenhui, Liang Shuang, Liu Dongbi, Lv Handa (Shenyang Normal University)
Lei Guiping: Expressing opinions in the form of small theater is a new exploration of new media video criticism. Small theater reviews are also a breakthrough or an important supplement to the current common anchor broadcast form, which highlights the characteristics of video reviews. The video commentary, using audio-visual language and drawing on the style of micro-drama, the students' performances are simple and true, the narrative logic is clear, the picture editing is natural, the narration is coordinated with the camera, and the image intuitively presents all kinds of chaos of fraud, which fully paves the way for the expression of opinions. If you can intersperse your views in the language of the characters, or express them through narration, and no longer use the form of "video + text", you can better reflect the independence of video reviews.
The judges of the "Green Pepper Plan" of the red network said Lei Guiping: "Practicing human feelings" is an extra-poetic effort to write a good review