After the article was written, it was polished with a word of Wenxin, and after careful inspection, it was too different from the original, so it had to be carefully screened, and then sent to today's headlines, and the result was judged to be suspected of Ai creation.
To tell you the truth, in general, the polished articles are not as good as the ones you wrote. It's just a little bit better at the beginning, but compared to what the author wants to express, it has a different meaning.
1: Original text by the author.
Lin Qinglang looked at the mobile phone in front of him, picked it up gently, clicked on it, looked at Lu Ming's mobile phone number, raised his thumb, and just seemed to want to touch the screen, but immediately moved away.
Thoughts go back to a year ago.
Lu Ming, a marketing staff of a Taiwanese-funded company in Kunshan, during the three-year epidemic, although he did not leave Kunshan in response to the call of the country, his sales performance ranked first for three consecutive years, resulting in a lot of time for the company to work overtime until 22:00 in the evening, and there was no Sunday. (Note: This kind of continuous overtime refers to the overtime that starts at 7 o'clock in the morning and gets off work at 19:15 in the evening, and the wages of workers are also rising, and the maximum amount of pre-tax can be 7500.00 yuan per month.)
Looking at the money he was making every day, Lin Qinglang felt like a light rain in March, floating in the spring.
But there is one thing, like a fish bone stuck in Lin Qinglang's throat, that is, the marketing champion Lu Ming continues to receive orders, and his income has reached an average of more than 20,000 yuan per month.
Because he was in a special period, Lin Qinglang didn't dare to rashly find an opportunity to talk to Lu Ming.
Before the Spring Festival last year, when the epidemic was lifted, Lin Qinglang immediately ordered Lu Ming to go on a business trip, and strictly ordered Lu Ming to bring back double orders, and at the same time reduced Lu Ming's commission, so that Lu Ming's income did not exceed 6000.00 yuan.
Lin Qinglang and Lu Ming were like mirrors in their hearts, one wanted Lu Ming to leave the company, and the other knew that the leader wanted him to leave the company.
Lu Ming had no mother-in-law, let alone other requirements, and immediately terminated the labor contract.
This made Lin Qinglang very happy in his heart, he didn't expect Lu Ming to be so happy, and he didn't even ask for any compensation.
Less than a month after Lu Ming left the company, orders were reduced rapidly and many production lines were unable to operate.
Lin Qinglang sent a number of marketing personnel, but he couldn't receive orders, which is really strange.
After three years of the epidemic, orders could not be eaten, and many large orders were refunded. The epidemic has passed, all walks of life are recovering, and theoretically there should be more orders in the factory, why is there a continuous decline in orders?
Three months later, that is, from April 2023, the company's production line was gradually shut down and began to lose money, which lasted until January 22, 2024, when the company had a holiday, and the unprecedented thing was that the company only opened on February 19, 2024, basically a one-month holiday, which was a phenomenon that had never been seen before.
What made Lin Qinglang even more depressed was that although he started construction nearly a month later, there were still no orders in his hands.
In the middle, although Lin Qinglang wanted to call Lu Ming many times, after all, during the three-year epidemic, Lu Ming had no less income at all, but thinking of everything he had done to Lu Ming after the epidemic ended, he couldn't help it.
However, after losing more than 20 million yuan in one year, Lin Qinglang was still a little distressed.
Finally, Lin Qinglang couldn't help but press Lu Ming's phone, and after a pleasant ringtone, the phone came: "I'm sorry, the phone you dialed is not answered for the time being." ”
Lin Qinglang reluctantly put down the phone, looked at the rain and snow outside, sighed deeply, and thought to himself, "When will the rain pass and the sky will be clear?"
Two: Articles that have not been revised after Ai polishing.
Lin Qinglang stared at the mobile phone in his hand, raised it slightly, unlocked the screen, and his eyes fell on Lu Ming's mobile phone number. His thumb hovers in the air, as if trying to touch the screen, but quickly moves away.
Thoughts drift back to a year ago.
Lu Ming, the marketing elite of a Taiwanese-funded company in Kunshan, ranked first in sales during the epidemic for three consecutive years. The company's busy overtime work has become the norm, from 7 a.m. to 22:00 p.m., and there are few days off on Sundays. This overtime culture has led to a rise in workers' wages, up to 7,500 yuan before tax.
Lin Qinglang saw Lu Ming making a lot of money, but his heart was like a March drizzle, floating in the spring.
However, a fish bone has always been stuck in Lin Qinglang's throat, that is, Lu Ming, as a marketing champion, has a monthly income of more than 20,000 yuan.
During the special period, Lin Qinglang did not rashly talk to Lu Ming.
On the eve of the Spring Festival, when the epidemic eased, Lin Qinglang decisively ordered Lu Ming to go on a business trip, and strictly ordered that he must bring back double orders, and at the same time reduce his commission so that his income does not exceed 6,000 yuan.
The two knew that Lin Qinglang wanted Lu Ming to leave, and Lu Ming also felt this intention.
Lu Ming did not delay, did not make any demands, and decisively terminated the labor contract.
Lin Qinglang was overjoyed in his heart, he didn't expect Lu Ming to be so cheerful, and he didn't even ask for a trace of compensation.
However, less than a month after Lu Ming's resignation, the number of orders fell sharply, and many production lines came to a standstill.
Lin Qinglang sent a number of marketing personnel, but it was difficult to recover the decline. After the epidemic, all walks of life should recover and orders should increase, but why is there a continuous decline?
Starting from April 2023, the company's production line will gradually stop, and the loss will become more and more serious. Until the holiday on January 22, 2024, the resumption of work was postponed until February 19 for the first time, a full month of vacation, which has never been done in the company's history.
What makes Lin Qinglang even more depressed is that even after resuming work for nearly a month, there are still no orders in his hands.
During this period, Lin Qinglang wanted to contact Lu Ming many times, after all, Lu Ming's income was not damaged during the epidemic. But thinking of what he had done to Lu Ming, he suppressed his impulse.
However, with a loss of more than 20 million yuan in one year, Lin Qinglang couldn't help but feel heartache.
Finally, he couldn't help but call Lu Ming's number. The ringtone is pleasant, but the response is, "I'm sorry, your call is currently unanswered." ”
Lin Qinglang hung up the phone helplessly, turned his eyes to the rain and snow falling outside the window, sighed deeply, and looked forward to it in his heart: "When will the rain pass and the sky will be clear?"
Note: The pictures in the article are from the Internet.