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Preface
"Yi Nian Guan Mountain" became famous because it was a costume drama that Liu Shishi re-participated in many years, and it attracted a lot of attention before it was broadcast, which made the audience look forward to it.
After the broadcast, "Yi Nian Guan Mountain" also lived up to expectations and won the first place on the long-standing popularity list of "Ning An Like a Dream", and the momentum was very good.
The group portrait and the setting of martial arts make the audience extremely uplifted.
Especially the 8th episode of "Yi Nian Guan Mountain" is a high-burning clip of the whole play.
Everyone attacked the enemy together, and the powerless princess made a move, and Du Changshi, who read "My Buddha is compassionate" in his mouth, also trembled and shot with a bow and arrow.
Each character in the play showed his abilities and specialties, making the audience who like group portraits scream and shout: ""Yi Nian Guan Mountain" is normally not like a TV series in 2023, it is a clear stream this year. ”
However, the subsequent plot development gave the audience a blow to the head.
The supporting characters lose their souls
"Yi Nian Guan Mountain" also followed the old path of "Camp with Love" and became a fraud drama in 2023.
Obviously, before the broadcast, it was a group portrait, but with the development of the plot, the audience gradually felt that the other supporting roles were flattened and reduced to the foil of the protagonist.
"Yi Nian Guan Mountain" mainly tells the story of two powerful countries in the country, namely Anguo and Wuguo.
The heroine Ren Xin is an agent of Anguo, and she is also an invincible top assassin who has never missed.
The male protagonist Ning Yuanzhou is the head of the intelligence agency of Wuguo, and he also has a group of brothers with comprehensive skills.
Because the emperor of Wuguo was kidnapped by An Guo in the process of personal conquest, the group led by Ning Yuanzhou took the princess pretending to be the prince and embarked on a journey to change back the emperor.
And the heroine died because of the death of Queen Anguo, who was very good to herself, and she had long since left Anguo's secret service.
Because he found out that the queen's death was strange, he joined the male protagonist's mission and went to Anguo to find the truth together.
Obviously, in the early stage of the battle, the brothers of the male protagonist also showed their own abilities, with gunpowder, bows, crossbows, and broadswords, and everyone worked hard for the mission.
But in the gradual development of the plot, these brothers only have one task left - to match the male and female protagonists to fall in love.
They seem to have transformed into emotionless NPCs, as long as they sense that the hero and heroine have differences and are making conflicts, they rack their brains to bring people together and watch them resolve misunderstandings.
The various character characteristics established in the early stage can be regarded as blind.
And in "Yi Nian Guan Mountain", there is another character that the audience is looking forward to - Li Tongguang.
Li Tongguang is the apprentice of the heroine Ren Xin when she was in Anguo, and she has some thoughts about her master.
Such a forbidden relationship between master and apprentice gave the audience great stimulation, and also shifted a lot of attention to the development of this relationship line.
However, Li Tongguang's character design can be regarded as one of the most collapsed characters in the play.
Obviously, I said in the early plot that Li Tongguang could win the heroine when he came out.
Then, for the male protagonist who is of the same level as the female protagonist, or even inferior to the female protagonist, he can beat Li Tongguang out with one palm!
When the audience saw this, they felt that their cerebellum was going to atrophy!
After that, there were serious contradictions in the plot, and it was simply a preamble that didn't match the afterword.
The male protagonist looked like he was teaching Li Tongguang a lesson, which also made the audience shout: "It's the same as underworld bullying." ”
Even the actor shouted to Li Tongguang: "I can help you sit in the highest position in Anguo step by step." I can also find any random person and help him sit in that position step by step. ”
Looking at the poor Li Tongguang, many viewers said: "Li Tongguang is Xie Wei who has no male protagonist's halo, it's so pitiful!"
In the face of this plot, the audience really wants to shake the water in the male protagonist's head.
Please, now the emperor of your country is in the hands of others, and you lost the last war, you are a defeated country, do you really want to be so arrogant to the generals of the enemy country?
Moreover, Li Tongguang's early setting is incompatible with his weakness in the face of the male protagonist, as if he is a different person.
Obviously, from a son of the head of the face, relying on his full calculation and strong forbearance, he has become the current Changqinghou of Anguo.
As a result, as soon as he met the male and female protagonists, his reason ran away from home and became a reckless man who fell down as soon as he hit and became angry.
The audience just wanted to shake the screenwriter's shoulders and shout: "Give me back my heroic little marquis!"
And on closer examination, the role of Li Tongguang is even more brilliant than the actor Ning Yuanzhou.
Although he was not from a good background, he had all the people in his heart, and wanted to use his ability to change the status quo of the country, treat loyal servants with affection, and treat the soldiers who died on the battlefield of the enemy country with righteousness.
But the later changes of the characters are too big, and the audience also perceives the unreasonableness.
However, it is not just a little Hou Ye who is forced to change, but also Ren Xin, the heroine of "Yi Nian Guan Mountain".
From a lone wolf to a wife
In the plot of "Yi Nian Guan Mountain" so far, Ren Xin, played by the heroine Liu Shishi, is the character who makes the audience feel the most uncomfortable.
Obviously, I said in the previous article that the heroine is an invincible assassin, and in the case of a complete loss of internal strength, flying flowers and leaves can kill.
But with the subsequent development of the plot, the heroine's force value has been inexplicably weakened, and the male protagonist is always needed to save her.
More viewers vividly expressed their mood change when watching the play: "The first half of the setting is a language diplomat who is proficient in six Chinese languages, and as a result, he relies on translation to communicate with anyone in the back." ”
The slot that appeared at the beginning of "Yi Nian Guan Mountain" was that the male protagonist's subordinates teamed up to deal with the female protagonist, and after the female protagonist was almost about to meet the king of Hades, she easily forgave the male protagonist's team.
hurt indiscriminately, lost most of his life, and actually forgave it lightly!
The screenwriter really has to understand that the audience is just an ordinary person, and they really don't have the same amount of strength as the heroine, and they will be angry to death if they watch such a plot!
After that, the two of them talked about the kind of 40-minute episode, and they could talk about love for more than 20 minutes, which made the audience tired to death.
The two of them had already made up their minds to each other, and then they were constantly quarreling, reconciling, quarreling again, and reconciling again, as if they had been in the water for a long time.
These meaningless love scenes not only do not help the shaping of the protagonist's character, but also make the audience so embarrassed that they fast forward.
When everyone first watched the drama, they all came to see it for the purpose of group portraits and big heroines, but the heroine became a little wife, which is really a major explosion!
Even the heroine's enemy, Zhu Yiwei, had to say before he died: "Why can you meet such a man!"
The screenwriter is really constantly brainwashing the audience, the male protagonist is really a good man, and the female protagonist is lucky to meet him.
And then in the plot that followed, after the female protagonist fell ill, he began to imitate King Guojun.
I froze it in an ice bucket, and then I went to hug the heroine to cool down.
Really, for such an intelligence-reducing plot, the audience really doesn't want to watch it, is there really no way to reduce fever?
King Guojun was helpless to find a doctor in Qingliangtai when the heavy snow closed the mountain.
But in "Yi Nian Guan Mountain", isn't Qian Zhao, who is good at medical skills, here? Why can't he be asked to prescribe some medicine?
Do you really have to use such a means to make the male protagonist suffer to move the audience?
It's a pity that the current audience is very sober and doesn't eat this set at all!
In stark contrast to the heroine, Xiao Yan, the queen in the same drama, is a queen who wants to be the queen mother who is in charge of the government and the opposition, and is not dependent on others.
epilogue
"Yi Nian Guan Mountain" was broadcast in the current situation, and the audience did not expect it.
Even many viewers said: "Recommending "Yi Nian Guan Mountain" to others made me lose face in front of my friends." ”
will trigger such a chain reaction, and the plot accounts for the vast majority of the reasons.
The audience is very welcome to a good script, and I hope that the main creative team can realize that the audience has the ability to distinguish between good and bad plots.
For example, real group portrait works such as "The Chronicles of the Song Dynasty" and "Youth Song Xing", even if they are not too popular, netizens can still see the Amway from the heart of passers-by.
On the contrary, the rest of this year's "some" film and television works focus on a moral kidnapping of the audience.
If the audience doesn't watch this drama, they just don't understand your deep feelings, and they are ruining your team's hard work.
If you are going to encounter moral kidnapping when watching dramas, when will a good drama appear?