An 8.9 on the front foot, a 5.7 on the back foot? Pan Yueming was wronged
Pan Yueming's suspense film is secretly online.
Sir was worried that he didn't eat the drama, so he clicked on it and watched it.
In one episode, the mind wandered several times and the kidneys went several times.
Netizens also said so:
A drama that Teacher Pan Yueming can't save
Maybe...... People just slow hot?
Sticking to 11 episodes, Sir felt it was time to stop:
Eleven floors that disappeared
01
Good story
It's a pity for a good story.
Many people commented on "The Disappearing Eleven Layers": water injection.
Sir also wondered, there are only 24 episodes in total, how can I fill the water?
The beginning is very efficient:
In 2007, Jinchuan Xinfa Mining suffered a water penetration and collapse accident.
Accident: All the miners on the eleventh floor of the underground drowned.
Press conference: All miners on the ten floors underground were safely lifted.
Well, I have to say that you know the breadth and depth of the Chinese language.
Six years later, a skull was dug up at the construction site.
And this place is Xinfa Mining, which had an accident six years ago.
What will you dig out if you continue to dig?
That's not just a skull.
Nor is it just a simple mining disaster.
Originally, the police were handling the case, and the deputy mayor of Jinchuan City also rushed to the scene, saying that this was a key project that he personally grasped and that he had to rush to work.
To seal it, it must be a meeting of the Standing Committee of the city.
It's clear: the water is deep.
The scene at this time.
Qu Jianghe (played by Pan Yueming), deputy director of the Municipal Public Security Bureau, directed the handling of the case.
As soon as the camera turned, someone in a black car was beckoning, and Qu Jianghe shouted: Brother.
Meng Chuansheng (played by Guo Jinglin), a real estate boss in Jinchuan City, this construction site is his project, he is also a witness of the Xinfa Mining water leakage accident that year, and a spokesman at the press conference.
This is unclear: he is the opposite.
The audience who came to Pan Yueming's crime drama is probably already clear.
This drama may not be too suspenseful.
On the contrary, the anti-corruption and anti-gang crime is more meaningful.
And two heads, one black and one white, exactly brothers.
Is such a setting, it is reasonable to say that it is quite worth looking forward to.
The TV series is adapted from Wu Heping's novel "Cover-up", with a Douban score of 7.1, and the story content involves many fields such as anti-gangster, detective, and anti-corruption.
As the director of the public security bureau of Kaifeng City, Wu Heping also directed the detection of the "918" major case in Kaifeng.
Wu Heping said: More than 90% of the details of this book are condensed from real cases.
In "The Disappearing Eleven Floors", there is a plot in which the fugitive becomes a ranger at a guard station under the operation of black and white forces.
Some netizens said that the plot of a fugitive becoming a police officer is also too far-fetched.
However, a search on the Internet really has a factual basis.
And that's not even an isolated case.
The pace of the first few chapters in the book is still very fast, and the first sentence directly refers to the shocking case that Qu Jianghe has been searching for six years ago, which was discovered by a poodle:
The green-haired dog licked and ate a small piece of twigs and fork-like things, and he raised his foot and kicked it, but unexpectedly the pointed object stung himself, leaned down to take a closer look, and was startled. That protrusion is a big toe of a man..."
If you shoot with such a narrative rhythm, maybe the entire TV series can always have a "hook" to hook you along.
However, the director put together many trivial character relationships and side judgment clues.
The police and the fugitive's twin brother are entangled for several episodes because they look too similar.
The audience, who was attracted by various gimmicks, found that the plot had been deliberately detouring, and the core point was not to advance at all.
It is quite doubtful that the director did it on purpose or carelessly:
And the adapted plot, some play in a second.
A deputy director of the Public Security Bureau did not shy away from working with his brother, who was seriously suspected, at the construction site;
Qu Jianghe did not evade when investigating his brother's murder on the construction site, which is not in line with the regulations in reality;
Suspects of squatting on crimes can blatantly "squat" in his home.
Qujianghe emotional line, Yan Ge (played by Chen Shu), the captain of the Inspector Squadron of the Provincial Public Security Department.
As the leader of Qujianghe, he could generously show him the letters from the masses reporting Qujianghe.
In order to investigate the case, Qu Jianghe pretended to "surrender" to his eldest brother Meng Shengchuan, but he actually "handed over" the only evidence in the case, the skull, to his brother.
Why is "White Night Chase" popular?
Although the twins swap roles, no one recognizes them, and this setting looks a bit.
But the screenwriter and director reasonably made "fake" into "real".
Make you feel convinced and shout for your brain.
And the Achilles heel of "Vanishing Eleven Floors" is that the plot is degraded, and there are too many nude fakes.
It is no wonder that some viewers feel insulted to their intelligence when they see the anger of the departure.
02
Sense of lens
It's a pity for the sense of lens.
It must be said that this drama is not shoddy, if you don't watch the plot in a row, you will feel that the camera is very particular and the acting skills are very tense.
Meng Chuansheng, played by Guo Jinglin, seems to be a peaceful businessman on the surface, and cooperates with his brother's seizure to stage a "good guy" drama in front of the police.
He is changeable and always available.
For example, this detail:
When a few words from his subordinates almost brought the police again, he laughed a second ago and blamed the other party for speaking problems.
However, as soon as the camera turned, a top-down look at the camera made his face sink, and the smile that had just hung on his face instantly turned into angry eyes.
The director makes good use of the actors' facial features to highlight the audiovisual senses.
For example, Qu Jianghe pretended to be "sincere", and when he chatted with his eldest brother after drinking, he felt that being a police officer was not interesting.
First sentence.
"I don't want to wear this leather again."
Meng Chuansheng suddenly glanced at his eyes: It means that at this time, this sentence attracted his attention and moved his mind, could it be that his younger brother really wanted to mix with the underworld?
Second sentence.
"If you want money, you don't have money, and if you want a future, you have no future."
The close-up to his ears: he is listening, indicating that he is distinguishing the meaning of Qujianghe's words, as a deputy director of the municipal public security bureau, how come there is no money map and no future?
It is clear that there are words in the words.
Just these two shots clearly capture the inner psychological undercurrent of the characters.
In this drama, the supporting role is sometimes more eye-catching than the protagonist.
Wang Zheng, in which one person plays the second role, in the first 11 episodes, is still twin brother Qiu Jianjian (the murderer Qiu Society has not yet appeared).
When Qu Jianghe deliberately arrested him, he asked if it was related to the "fake police".
In this paragraph, Wang Zheng's performance is also remarkable.
Qu Jianghe first "messed around" and asked him, "You twins all have psychic sensations, do you two brothers have them?" ”
Qiu Jianjian replied, no.
Qu Jianghe is "entangled" again, you help me sense where your brother is.
He first snorted, as if he really tried psychological induction according to Qu Jianghe's request, and then sneered, "Can't come."
Qiu Jianjian clearly knew that the police were teasing him, but the old fritters who were accustomed to going in and out of the police station naturally dared to tease the police.
Then, Qu Jianghe continued to "entangle", "When your brother killed someone, did you feel it?" "One shot down, one blood, one face of brain pulp."
He slowly fell into memories and began to meditate.
From the appearance of a hippie smiling face, he suddenly became exceptionally calm and terrifying.
Qu Jianghe watched him slowly "gradually get better" and continued to ask:
"Have you ever played with a gun?"
Look closely.
He just nodded, but suddenly shook his head again.
This series of micro-expressions vividly portrayed the complexity of this person.
One more one.
In addition to being good at expressing the state of the character with the five senses, the director also knows very well how to extend the semantics of the body.
What do you mean?
It's how to make body movements take on a deeper meaning.
Take an example.
Sha Jin (played by Sun Yan) uses Qiu Jianjian to play Qiu Society, wanting to test whether Qujiang River is really "anti-water".
However, after the matter was revealed, Meng Chuansheng knew about it, and kicked Sha Jin into the swimming pool.
At this point, the camera gives his hand a look up at the camera.
This is a simple beckoning, but it is expressed in this shot: it means that this action is actually greeting the dog.
The unequal status of the two people was "greeted" in this way.
Sha Jin paid Qiu Jianjian to tell him not to speak indiscriminately in front of the police.
From signaling Qiu Jianjian to open his mouth, to stuffing money into his mouth.
Sha Jin did not have too much expression on his face, and anger was transmitted by hand.
The last palm stuffed all the game coins into his mouth, angry, but not on his face.
Then, another punch hit Qiu Jianjian's face, like a slot machine spitting coins, and the money was scattered.
But this kind of "shooting" is not used in a smooth and reasonable plot.
Not only is it not outstanding.
Instead, it will make people more disgusted:
"Pretend", "Trick the mysteries", "fake big void".
03
Pan Yueming also oiled
It's a pity for Pan Yueming.
Since "White Night Chasing", Pan Yueming's career line has soared and become the representative of "alternative police".
However, after 2017, there is only one "Dragon Ridge Labyrinth" that can score 8 points so far.
And "The Disappearing Eleventh Floor" cannot continue his brilliance in "White Night Chasing".
Once, the media commented that Pan Yueming's acting skills in "White Night" were: "one person plays four corners": twin brothers, Guan Hongfeng, Guan Hongyu, and Guan Hongyu, who pretends to be Guan Hongfeng, and Guan Hongfeng, who pretends to be Guan Hongyu.
However, in "Eleventh Floor", in addition to playing a "deputy chief" who does not comply with the rules to solve the case, he no longer has a three-dimensional shaping of the character.
Drama eyes, in addition to "solving cases".
It should also be, the "anti-eyes" of brothers.
But how does Pan Yueming behave?
After deciding to choose another path and go undercover next to his eldest brother with "Infernal Affairs", he secretly made up his mind to rely on a children's book "Alice in Wonderland".
When he reads, "If you don't know where to go, it doesn't matter which way you go," he suddenly pauses thoughtfully.
What he knew was that he remembered the "gladiatorial fight" between himself and his brother.
I don't know, I thought I forgot to turn off the gas.
When he got the skull as evidence of the crime, he found his brother and asked him to take it.
The eldest brother Meng Chuansheng was greatly moved, and said to his younger brother, who risked gambling to help his future, "There is a real day, brother supports you." ”
Qu Jianghe turned his head and looked at his eldest brother.
No emotion, no entanglement, no expression.
The eldest brother said, even if the stars on your shoulders are taken off in the future, I will help you put them back one by one.
Qu Jianghe turned his head and looked at his eldest brother.
Still not moved, no entanglement, no expression.
When did Qu Jianghe want to "destroy his relatives with righteousness" to his brother?
I don't know.
What was his mood when he chose this path?
I don't know.
What is the textbook version of "brothers against eyes"?
An example, "Crazy".
An Xin and Gao Qiqiang sat shoulder to shoulder on the ground of the old long street for the last time, and the two of them pushed their hearts and stomachs, and even hung up the color with the same illness and were injured.
An Xin persuaded him for the last time that if they caught Xu Jiang, he would confess all the people and things he knew, and at that time, Gao Qiqiang really couldn't run.
However, Gao Qiqiang, who has come to this point, has no way back.
I can only fight with An Xin haha:
At this time, An Xin's face turned to another place and sighed, as if he was about to cry:
He said, "Old Gao, you are a good person, at least I think so now." ”
He also advised Gao Qiqiang to confess everything and not to live too tired.
Actor Zhang Songwen also caught the emotions Zhang Yi gave him at this time:
Looking down and frowning, I wanted to cry completely.
When he saw Zhang Yi staring at him with afterlight, he held back the "cry" abruptly, and then covered his face with his hands, and his emotions slowly calmed down.
Gao Qiqiang returned to his "shell".
At this time, the two of them were destined for this life and parted ways.
A tearful stretched out his hand, wanting to pull Anxin home for dinner; One is full of disappointment, half a step backwards, away from Gao Qiqiang.
Flowing clouds and flowing water, all in one go.
There are details everywhere, reluctance and sadness everywhere.
Therefore, it is not that Pan Yueming cannot save this drama, but this drama, Pan Yueming has no ability to save.
Over the years, Pan Yueming's drama path has always revolved in the characters of "unruly prodigal son" and "knowing and warming man", no matter any role, and he rarely finds a role that breaks through himself.
He seems to have walked into the "ghost hitting the wall", spinning around in tomb robbery and romance dramas.
Now, when he finally found a suspenseful anti-corruption drama that could return to the glory of "White Night", the character of this "unruly prodigal son" seemed to grow on his body like a hard shell, and finally, he also adapted to this acting method.
Do you pretend not to see, or do you see that you are powerless to change?
Either way.
It has also become Pan Yueming's "eleventh layer", which is a hidden danger that exists but cannot be seen.
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