In 2023, AI represented by ChatGPT will sweep the world, and in addition to "accompanying chat", AI will begin to play the role of productivity tools in the fields of text writing and promotion planning. And for composition, which can reflect human creativity and thinking, how does AI perform?
Four major AI decisive battle 2023 college entrance examination essays
As a student, you must have the space for independent thinking, and you must have grace and mind; As a parent, as a teacher, you must be a person who knows the future development direction of the country, and the college entrance examination should select talents with their own independent thinking ability, healthy aesthetics, and rich emotions. In the face of essays with a heavy proportion of points, what kind of performance does ChatGPT 3.5, Wen Xin Yiyan, Tiangong 3.5, and Tongyi Qianwen bring?
"Computer News" took the essays of two sets of papers of the 2023 National College Entrance Examination Chinese Paper A and the New Course Standard II as the topic, examined 8 articles created by AI, and scored them.
Jury Members:
Fu Jun (General Manager of Chongqing CEC Electronic Audio and Video Publishing Company, Department of Chinese, Beijing Normal University)
Cheng Peng (Former Deputy Editor-in-Chief of Sina Chongqing, Department of Chinese, Southwest Normal University)
Hu Zhe (Deputy Editor-in-Chief of Lei Feng.com, Department of Chinese, Central China Normal University, author of "Boiling New Decade")
2023 college entrance examination national A paper: the four AIs have their own characteristics
Read the material below and write as requested. (60 mins)
People can better learn to control time due to technological development, but some people have become servants of time because of this, what kind of association and thinking does this sentence trigger you? Please write an article requirements: choose the correct angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, draft your own title, do not copy, do not plagiarize, do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
Review inventory: the topic must be related to a certain reality (related to artificial intelligence, the development of science and technology) The so-called "control of time" is that the current technology has saved a lot of time and energy for human beings, but where should the saved time and energy be placed? The title of this essay is about how we should use our time today and do what a person should do. People should be self-disciplined, control their own time, be a person with a rich heart, think and recognize society independently, have abundant emotions and independent aesthetics. These are irreplaceable by machines. We should read more books and see more of the world. In today's increasingly developed technology, what do we have to do so that it cannot be replaced by machines. Be sure to be a person with a soul.
ChatGPT3.5
Time and Technology: The Dialectic of Self-Control and Bondage 1179 words
In modern society, the rapid development of technology has brought many conveniences and changes to people, one of which is that people have better control over time. However, this technological advancement also has a problem that cannot be ignored, that is, some people have become servants of the times as a result. This article will be issued from the dialectical perspective of self-control and shackles, and explore the impact of technological development on the management of the times.
With the continuous advancement of technology, we can better manage and plan our time through various means. For example, the popularity of smartphones allows people to make daily routines and reminders over time and avoid unnecessary things. At the same time, the emergence of tools such as cloud storage and online calendars allows people to share calendars in real time, providing high work-life collaboration efficiency.
In addition, technology has brought efficient communication tools such as email, instant messaging, and social media to enable people to exchange information quickly enough. With these tools, people can quickly access the information they need, reducing the amount of fragmented time wasted and increasing productivity and time utilization.
Tied to the dilemma of time. However, the development of technology also brings people a feeling of uninterrupted oppression by time, making some people fall into the dilemma of being bound by time. First of all, with the popularity of social media, people continue to pursue instant feedback and information updates, involuntarily attracted by the ability to like, comment and other abilities on social platforms, and unknowingly enter the consumption of time. The uninterrupted state makes it difficult to concentrate on important tasks and reduces productivity.
Second, with the advent of the era of information explosion, people are facing huge information pressure and choice dilemmas. The sheer volume of information on the Internet creates anxiety, and there is no legal way to determine how time should be chosen and spent. Sometimes, people switch between different pieces of information and enter unintentional browsing and clicking, which weakens the ability to control their own time.
Find the balance between autonomous control and being constrained. While the development of technology brings convenience and difficulties to time management, we should realize that the truth of time management is an ability that requires major thinking and practice. Here are a few suggestions to help us better balance autonomous control with being constrained.
First, set clear goals and plans. Be clear about your priorities, set long- and short-term goals, and plan and schedule accordingly. Such. It can help us allocate our time better and avoid being distracted by guitar events and social media. Second, develop the habit of concentration and concentration. When working on tasks, turn off unrelated apps and notifications to create a focused work environment situation. By focusing on the work at hand, we can come up with high productivity and save time. In addition, arrange your rest and recreation time wisely. Time management is not just about work, reasonable rest and recreation time is also a must. Relaxing the body increases work efficiency and creativity, allowing us to better cope with challenges and stress.
Finally, review and adjust your technology habits. Tech tools should be our tools, not our masters. We should review our habits of using science and technology, use technology products appropriately, and avoid overdependence and addiction. Conclusion: The rapid development of technology has provided people with opportunities to better control their time, but it has also brought some dilemma of being tied to time. We should find a balance between autonomy and being tied down, and better manage our time by creating clear goals and plans, developing professional attention and concentration habits, comprehensively scheduling rest and recreation time, and reviewing and adjusting technology use habits. Only in this way can we truly become masters of time, rather than being enslaved by it.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | The structure of the article is reasonable, relatively decent, and the structure is clear | The logic is clear and the argument is sufficient | After accurate to the topic, being able to choose a valuable incision, in-depth analysis and give methodology and underlying logic, for the reader, there are levels, inspiration, tool gains and methodological gains, is a good article with a high theoretical level and writing skills. | |
| Score | 42 | 48 | 49 | 46.3 |
Tiangong 3.5
As technology continues to advance, we can manage our time more effectively. However, sometimes we can become slaves to time rather than masters. This reminds me of an old fable - "The Farmer and the Snake". In this article, I'll explore how to properly use technology to improve our efficiency while avoiding being a servant of time.
First, we need to be clear about our goals and priorities. We need to know what kind of life we want to achieve and what is most important. Then, we need to make a detailed plan, allocate time to each task, and ensure that it is completed within the stipulated time. This requires a certain amount of self-management skills, such as setting priorities, setting schedules, setting reminders, and so on.
Second, we need to choose the right tools to help us manage our time. For example, we can use tools such as schedules, reminders, to-do lists, and more to help us plan and organize our work and life. These tools can help us better grasp our time and avoid wasting time on unnecessary things.
In addition, we also need to learn to arrange our rest time reasonably. Long working hours can lead to increased fatigue and mental stress, which can affect our efficiency and creativity. Therefore, we need to rest and relax regularly to regain our energy and motivation.
Finally, we need to be alert and vigilant at all times to avoid becoming servants of time. We need to keep an eye on how we spend our time and adjust our plans and goals to adapt to changing circumstances and needs.
To sum up, we can improve our efficiency through technological means while avoiding becoming a slave to time. Only by rational use of science and technology can we truly achieve independent control of time and achieve more efficient work and life.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | "The Farmer and the Serpent" is a metaphor for the servant of time, with a wrong understanding, and the full text has more nonsense, not a passing article. | There is no explanation of the servant of time | The beginning is accurate and can introduce allusions from famous works, which is quite amazing. Unfortunately, the narrative after that is superficial, difficult to think, at most a passing work. | |
| Score | 28 | 38 | 30 | 32 |
Tong Yi Qianqian asked
Humans have been trying to control time since they invented clocks and calendars. From the beginnings of manual timekeeping to today's smart watches and electronic devices, the continuous advancement of technology has made our control of time more and more refined and convenient. However, in this era of information explosion and the pursuit of efficiency, the phrase "servant of time" gradually emerged, which caused me to think deeply
On the one hand, the development of technology has made our control of time more refined. Modern watches, mobile phones and other devices are not only able to calculate time, but also provide a variety of convenient functions, such as positioning, reminders, etc. At the same time, various time management software and tools also provide us with more scientific and efficient time planning solutions. For example, we can use various apps to make daily plans and remind ourselves to complete things and avoid procrastination and wasted time. In this way, we can use our time more efficiently and get more work and tasks done.
On the other hand, it is precisely because we have better control over our time that some people begin to indulge in the pursuit of more time, even sacrificing their own health and quality of life. Some people have become "slaves of time", in order to save time, they do not hesitate to sacrifice their sleep time, exercise time, etc., and are in a high-intensity state for a long time, resulting in damage to their health. At the same time, some people have lost the joy of life because of excessive pursuit of efficiency, and even sacrifice time with family and friends, alienate interpersonal relationships, and lose the joy of life. Therefore, we need to recognize the balance between technological development and time control. We can't get too obsessed with the pursuit of time and neglect the health of our bodies and relationships because of the convenience of technology. We need to better balance time management and relationships to maintain a healthy lifestyle. At the same time, you also need to clarify your goals and values to avoid losing the joy of life due to excessive pursuit of efficiency.
In short, the development of technology has made our control of time more refined and convenient, but we also need to avoid becoming a slave to time. We need to balance time management and relationships to maintain a healthy lifestyle. At the same time, you also need to clarify your goals and values to avoid excessive pursuit of efficiency and loss of the joy of life. Only in this way can we better control our time and achieve more success and happiness.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | The article written closest to human thinking, although not gorgeous, but the understanding of the topic is in place, the level is clear, and the language is fluent. | The reasoning is basically clear, but there is a lack of diversified argumentation techniques. | After breaking the question, the contradiction in the proposition was found, and the discussion was carried out from the perspective of the unity of opposites, showing a certain logical thinking ability and writing skills, creating a conflict structure and making the article have a sense of conflict and enhancing the reading pleasure. It is a pity that the ending is too vulgar and vulgar and has not been promoted by "leopard tail". | |
| Score | 46 | 45 | 42 | 44.3 |
Wen Xin's words: the controller and servant of time
As we all know, time is a being that is both fair and unforgiving, and it neither stops nor picks up pace for anyone. The development of technology has given us the opportunity to better learn and control time, but some people have become servants of time, driven by it, and lose their autonomy.
We learn and control time because time is one of the most important resources in our lives. Through time management, we can make the most of every minute to achieve self-improvement and maximize personal value. However, advances in technology have also brought new challenges, making it easier for us to be slaves to time than masters.
In the era of information explosion, we are often surrounded by various digital entertainments, such as social media, games, and videos. These activities are often highly attractive and consume a lot of time unknowingly. We are often no longer masters of time, but are driven by time to become its slaves.
To change this, we need to rethink our attitudes toward time and the way we use it. First, we need to recognize the value of time. Every minute is precious, and we should cherish it instead of wasting it on meaningless things. Second, we need to set clear goals and plans. This helps us make better use of our time and avoid wasting it. Finally, we need to be disciplined and control our time. We should be masters of time, not driven by it.
In general, learning and controlling time is our responsibility and obligation, as well as our right and freedom. We should make full use of this resource to achieve self-improvement and maximize personal value. At the same time, we should also be wary of the pitfalls of technology and avoid becoming servants of time. Only in this way can we truly control time and become the master of time.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | The word count is not enough, the organization is relatively clear, but the overall article description is simple and crude, only the framework structure. | The overall is bland, and the beginning is more wordy | The writing can be developed around the proposition, and there is a certain logic, and the intention is correct. However, a close reading reveals that it is general, not really readable, and difficult to call it a masterpiece. | |
| Score | 38 | 40 | 39 | 39 |
Overall comment: In the composition creation of the whole Chinese Essay Volume A in 2023, ChatGPT3.5 scored the highest average score of 46.3 with its relatively excellent combination of essays and clear thinking, while Tongyi Qianwen followed closely with an average score of 44.3 with its close thinking and logical skills. In contrast, Wen Xin Yiyan and Tiangong 3.5 still have room for improvement in the creation of this article.
New Course Standard Volume II: General Meaning Thousand Questions is better
Read the material below and write as requested. (60 mins)
The idea of "quiet and not disturbed" mentioned in the use of language and writing in this test paper is not uncommon among contemporary teenagers. In study and life, adolescents sometimes hope to have a space of their own, relax, precipitate, and grow. Please write an article in combination with the above materials.
Requirements: choose the correct angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, draft your own title, do not set up, do not plagiarize, and do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words
Review inventory: Composition is the externalization of your mind, which is called composition. The essay is about the common problems of our society. The title of this essay is to discuss today's education issues. As parents, we should be ourselves and be our children's co-pilots. Today's teenagers still have their own space in their own study life, whether they have their own opportunities for precipitation, and whether they have the motivation to grow. The best essay to write. It is to let the child write his own heart.
ChatGPT3.5
Title: Independent Space and Growth of Teenagers 1007 words
In recent years, the idea of "quiet and undisturbed" has become more and more common among contemporary youth. In study and life, young people aspire to have an independent space to relax, sink and grow. This need arises with the body's quest for their independence and personal development, while also leading to thinking about how we can provide appropriate support and environment for youth.
Today's youth face enormous academic and social pressures. Between busy school schedules, club activities and family demands, they tend to be overwhelmed and anxious. Therefore, they crave a space of their own, a quiet environment, in order to focus on their studies, think about problems, and organize their emotions. In this space, they can be alone, away from the noisy outside world, release their minds and restore their energy. This need for independent space does not mean isolation, but a reflection of individual independence, in which they want to tap their potential and pursue their personal interests.
To meet the independent space needs of youth, families and schools can work together. Family is an important cornerstone of young people's development, and family leaders can provide children with a suitable learning environment and their own room, so that they can have their own space. In this space, they can display their personal style and collect their own books and objects, which helps them develop a sense of personal independence and self-esteem. At the same time, parents should also respect their children's personal time and needs, and give them appropriate alone time to facilitate their self-regulation and growth.
Schools, as second homes for youth, should also provide support and resources. Schools can set up dedicated independent study areas to provide a quiet, comfortable environment for students to focus on their studies. In addition, the school can also encourage students to participate in interest groups, club activities, etc., providing a variety of spaces and opportunities for them to develop their interests and talents. Through these gestures, schools can help youth find independent spaces that suit them and develop their creativity, leadership and self-confidence.
However, in order to guarantee independent space for youth, we also need to pay attention to some potential problems. First, the excessive pursuit of independent space may lead to youth being too isolated and lacking the ability to communicate and cooperate with others. Therefore, while providing independent space, we should also encourage them to actively participate in social activities and cultivate good interpersonal relationships. Second, we need to be wary of overprotective and loving tendencies, and young people need appropriate challenge and autonomy to develop their independence. Therefore, we should provide independent space while giving them appropriate autonomy so that they can learn to think independently and solve problems.
In conclusion, the increasing demand for an independent space among contemporary youth reflects their desire for independence and personal development. Families and schools can meet the needs of young people by providing the right support and environment to help them relax, settle and grow. However, we also need to pay attention to a balance to ensure that young people seek independent space without losing their ability to connect and cooperate with others. Only on the basis of comprehensive consideration can we help young people to achieve holistic development and become independent and confident individuals.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | The outline structure, rigid and rigid, the machine does not understand the topic very well. | The understanding of the meaning of the title is more superficial | If it weren't for a rhetorical error, this article would be relatively perfect. The mistake is that "youth desire an independent space to relax, sink and grow", in which sinking is clearly used incorrectly. The thoughtful discussion of the article, realized in a fairly short space, is a masterpiece. | |
| Score | 29 | 36 | 40 | 35 |
Tiangong 3.5
After reading the topic, I think this topic can be thought about from the following aspects:
Teenagers need a quiet space to reflect and adjust themselves as they grow up. This space may be a room, a nook book, or a period of time. In this space, they can think, reflect, precipitate and grow alone. This need is not only characteristic of adolescents, but also a universal human phenomenon. Therefore, we need to respect and understand this need and provide appropriate support and assistance.
In modern society, adolescents often face various pressures and challenges. They need to deal with academic, interpersonal, career planning, etc. In this case, a quiet space is very important for them. Through this space, they can temporarily get rid of the distractions of the outside world and focus on solving their own problems. At the same time, this space can also allow them to understand themselves more clearly, find their direction and goals.
In today's society, many people are chasing "success". However, this concept is not static, it has changed with the times. In different historical periods, the criteria for success have also differed. In modern society, the criteria for success usually include wealth, status, reputation, etc. However, these factors do not necessarily lead to true happiness and satisfaction. Conversely, a quiet space allows people to think more deeply about the meaning and value of their lives.
Finally, we can also think about how to cultivate teenagers' awareness of quiet space from the perspective of education. Education should focus on cultivating students' self-management ability and self-learning ability, so that they can learn how to think and learn in a quiet environment. At the same time, schools and families should create more opportunities for students to experience and enjoy quiet spaces.
To sum up, this article can be discussed from multiple perspectives, such as the needs of adolescent growth, the pressures of modern society, the definition of success, and the role of education. In the process of writing, you can combine specific cases or stories to make the article more vivid and interesting.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | There is no title, and the wording is confusing, and the preamble and afterwords do not match. | The passage about success is far-fetched | Untitled, seemingly all-encompassing, but in fact not comprehensive, only some empty words, without the slightest power of words and souls, you can see non-human works at a glance | |
| Score | 28 | 38 | 46 | 37.3 |
Tong Yi Qianqian asked
In the lives of contemporary teenagers, being able to "quiet down and not be disturbed" occasionally has become their deepest desire. Learning, competition, and stressful modern life make teenagers often unable to get rid of the noise and singing, and cannot seek real opportunities for relaxation and self-precipitation. Therefore, they need an independent space to feel the true needs of their hearts.
There is a saying in "Dream of Red Mansions": "All things are learned, and the cultivation of human feelings is the article." While teenagers are looking for a "quiet" space, they are also looking for a world of their own, a "big world" of their own. This "inner world" is not simply to disappear and entertain, but to find oneself, understand oneself, and reconcile with oneself in a complex life.
The famous He Xiangning also said: "Young people should have the composure of the elderly, the energy of the middle-aged, and the vitality of the young." Teenagers need to find their own world and free themselves from the heavy academic and stressful pressures, which not only helps their physical and mental health, but also preconditions for them to become better people in the future. At the same time, teenagers also need to maintain a positive attitude towards the future, use courage and wisdom to explore the world and find their own growth path. There is also a wise saying in "Jia Gen Tan": "The heart has no material desires, that is, the autumn sky and the sea; If you sit on the piano book, it will become a stone chamber Danqiu. This sentence is meaningful, pointing out that the ultimate goal pursued by human beings should be a kind of inner peace and stability. Teenagers need to learn to let go of busy schedules and pressures at the right time, calm themselves down, and talk to their inner world in order to gain more wisdom and insight. Only in a quiet environment can young people gain more creativity and inspiration and create better results.
In modern society, in order to meet the needs of teenagers, more and more educational institutions and schools have begun to open some "relaxing" and "precipitating" spaces on campus, so that teenagers have the opportunity to experience their inner world. For example, a primary school in Beijing has opened a "quiet reading" corner, allowing teenagers to have the opportunity to read some meaningful books in their spare time and settle their hearts; A middle school in Chengdu has opened a "music classroom" to give young people the opportunity to enjoy various music and feel the emotions brought by different music. These efforts are to give young people the opportunity to pursue inner peace and stability, so as to grow and develop better.
All in all, in the study and life of contemporary teenagers, the idea of "quiet and not disturbed" is becoming more and more common. They need to have a space of their own, relax, settle, grow. This is not only responsible for the needs of young people themselves, but also a necessary condition for the development of modern society. We should create more conditions and opportunities for young people to have the opportunity to pursue inner peace and stability, so as to become better people.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | Holding the theme of "teenagers seek inner tranquility", it is described separately, with clear layers, title images, and verses quoting "Dream of Red Mansions" and "Jia Gen Tan" are just right. | The arguments are hierarchical, the thinking is clear, and the citation is more appropriate | It can be seen that this AI has read a lot of books, and the content quoted in the first place in "Dream of Red Mansions" has some connections with the subsequent content, and the other two references are also acceptable, and the overall writing is relatively stable. | |
| Score | 48 | 48 | 47 | 47.6 |
Wen Xin said
Title: The Flower of Youth Blooming in Silence
In the complex world, especially in the current fast-paced living environment, people's desire to "be quiet and not disturbed" is getting stronger. For teenagers, they long to settle themselves in a quiet space and think about life in order to better face the challenges of the future.
"Be quiet and not disturbed" is not only a simple way to relax, it is also a process of talking to oneself, precipitating oneself and reflecting on oneself. In the busy study and life, teenagers need their own space to examine their hearts, clarify their goals, and adjust their pace. As the ancients said: "Still and able to think, think far." "Only by having a peaceful heart can we think and plan for the long term.
For teenagers, this "quiet and undisturbed" space can be a secluded park, a comfortable lounge chair, or a warm cup of tea. No matter where you are, it's important to be able to relax and release stress in this space. According to survey data, contact with nature can effectively reduce stress levels and improve well-being. Therefore, walking in the park, taking a nap on a lounge chair and savoring life in the aroma of hot tea are all ways for teenagers to find inner peace.
The process of "quiet and not disturbed" is also a process of self-precipitation and growth. In this process, teenagers can free themselves from tedious thoughts and re-examine their goals and pursuits. Just as the lotus flower silently lies in the mud, it finally shows amazing beauty at the moment of bloom. As Proust said, "A true journey of discovery is not a search for new sights, but a new perspective." "In this quiet space, teenagers can settle their hearts, see the world in a new light, and discover the true meaning of life.
Moreover, "quiet and not disturbed" is not only about relaxing the body and mind, but also about nourishing the soul. Teenagers can draw wisdom and strength in this process so that they can better participate in the next study and life. Just as trees need nutrients from the soil to thrive, people need wisdom and strength in tranquility to meet life's challenges. Zhuge Liang wrote in the Book of Commandments: "Quiet to cultivate oneself, thrift to cultivate morality." "This kind of inner peace and precipitation is an indispensable quality for teenagers on the road to growth.
Of course, it is not easy to achieve the goal of "quiet and undisturbed", especially in this competitive and noisy world. However, we should understand that moderate pressure and competition are part of life and what drives us forward. Therefore, we do not need to be afraid of competition or avoid pressure, but should face them with a positive attitude. At the same time, we should also learn to cherish those quiet times that belong to us, so that our hearts can be fully precipitated and nourished during this time.
In summary, teenagers need a "quiet and undisturbed" space to relax themselves and settle their hearts so that they can better face the challenges ahead. This process is not only the relaxation of the body and mind, but also the nourishment and growth of the soul. Therefore, let's learn to give ourselves a little quiet time in our busy lives, so that our hearts can be fully precipitated and nourished during this time. As Shakespeare said in Romeo and Juliet, "Peace of mind is where happiness lies." "Let us bloom the most beautiful flowers of youth in silence.
| Judges | Cheng Peng | Fu Jun | Hu Zhe | Average score |
| Comments | It is more skillful in using some famous quotes, slightly methodical, but the article has too many rankings, but it is a bit tacky. | The logical part is not clear, the wording is more "around", and the quotation is more appropriate | The maturity of the whole writing is very high, and for the first time, there is a feeling of "texture" and "granularity" that makes the reader feel "texture" and "granularity". The style of the article is gorgeous and slightly unshowy, which can be seen as talented. AI has a hole in form, but it has not yet touched the soul. | |
| Score | 42 | 46 | 48 | 45.3 |
Overall comment: The proposition of the new course standard II volume seems to be easy to get started, but for AI, it is not easy to understand and outline the hearts of young people, but Tongyi Qianwen gave a lot of surprises to the expert judges in this creation, especially the examples of Bogu Zhijin make the article full and logical, and thus won the highest score of 47.6, and GPT3.5 is obviously inferior to the first volume in this college entrance examination essay, Chinese there are obvious deficiencies in understanding and extension, and it can be verified again with version 4.0 in the later stage.
Zhang Ji, a senior teacher of Datong Chinese Language, commented on the performance of the four AI models: "All the examination questions are accurate, the argument structure is reasonable, the analysis is hierarchical, and the materials are used accurately. Reached the upper intermediate level of student composition. Their common shortcomings are excess rationality, insufficient sensibility, and insufficient personality. It is not flexible enough to analyze the truth and expand the connection to specific life and social reality. The tone is old-fashioned, and it is different from the composition style of high school students. ”
Content creation requires a soul
It can be seen from these 8 essays that the current AI content creation speed is rapid, basically controlled within 1 minute, and has good logic, especially Alibaba Cloud's Tongyi Qianwen has shown an upper middle level in the performance of both rounds, and the understanding of the proposition of the new course standard II volume has completed the composition "problem breaking" operation excellently, in the words of the candidates: "the play is relatively stable".
However, in general, the performance of AI in "cognition" needs to be improved, horizontal comparison of the content creation of large models, more seems to be the "analysis" of the topic, Tiangong 3.5 in the two college entrance examination proposition essays, almost through the comparison and integration of similar knowledge, mixed out a "listen to a seat, better than a seat" beautiful article.
A good essay can "bacon cast the soul", and the first step in writing a good essay is to learn to read and figure out what others are asking you. Understand the requirements of the composition material, clarify the limitations and directions. At the same time, composition is the externalization of the mind, composition reflects the common problems of society, and writing is to express oneself. Therefore, behind the composition must come from the deeper thinking and cognition of the machine.