Main comment 丨 Wei Yanming
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Review: Su Dongpo is a literary hero I like, and "Chibi Fu" is an article I like. Many of the sentences in the endowment, I think everyone is familiar with, such as "as long as a reed is like, Ling Wan is dazed." Hao hao is like Feng Fei Yu Feng, and does not know its end; fluttering is like a relic of independence, feathering and ascending to immortality", and then such as "sending ephemera to heaven and earth, a millet in the sea." Mourning the beard of my life, envying the infinity of the Yangtze River. Flying immortals travel to the end, hold the bright moon and end up", and also such as "only the breeze on the river, and the bright moon in the mountains, the ears are sounded, the eyes are colored, the forbidden, the use is inexhaustible", and so on, it is pleasant to read.
Fortunately received the main review of "Chibi Fu" a large wave of the task, of course, do not dare to slack, in the first time to revisit this article, but also once again to understand the author's background, mood, consciously and the author's thoughts and thoughts closer to some, and then carefully taste the more than a hundred joint works across the country also feel great gains.
More than a hundred joint works, some vividly showing the chibi fu scene of that year, some evaluating the value and status of the article, some focusing on the feelings of the article, and some are also good at association, involving the chibi fu before and after. My understanding is that writing "Chibi Fu" in a joint form, of course, the theme is the most important, so some who only focus on the performance of Suzi, Cao Gong, Zhou Lang or the Battle of Chibi and the Three Kingdoms, even if they are well written and the words are very beautiful, but I think that after all, they are free from the theme; there are some works on the contrary, clinging to the theme without any deviation, not daring to stubble at all, and appearing to be too dead, so that it is trivial, dull, unable to be light and flying, and the style of "Chibi Fu" itself is not consistent. It is also not among the best. That is to say, it is necessary to closely focus on this famous passage and reinterpret it in the language of Yang Lian.
Song Fangde once commented: "This endowment learns the grammar of "Zhuang" and "Sao", and none of the sentences are similar to "Zhuang" and "Sao". Non-transcendent talents and extraordinary knowledge cannot do anything. Dashing and magical, out of the dust, like riding the clouds and the wind and standing on top of the Nine Heavens, looking down on the Liuhe, what is the vastness? Not only the teeth that are not hung, nor are they enough to enter its Lingtai DanFu also." Zhang Boxing of the Qing Dynasty also had a similar comment: "Hanging on to the rivers and mountains, hating life as a sending; lingering in the wind and moon, and liking the selflessness of creation." A difficult solution, leisurely and open". Sincerely! This is true of endowments, and so can unions. At the time of not leaving, not sticking and not falling off, it is often possible to produce unique and impressive masterpieces, and the co-author may wish to savor them.
Xu is the reason why this gift is loved by everyone, throughout this joint work, there are indeed many good products with their own emphases, and they can only endure the pain of cutting love, and choose ten pairs from them to make a brief evaluation. The choice of good works is always a matter of opinion. A tube of opinion, the level is limited, if there is any omission, please readers Zhu Jun Haihan! (Wei Yanming)
Excellent main evaluation of 10 pairs
Shu Ganlai Huangshan, Anhui
Xinglai Nostalgia sees the void and the light, shocks the Eastern Slope and its endowment, the text runs thunder, and the chapter flows and rhymes;
Feeling the soul of Chibi, the hero is immortal, and the wind and moon are boundless.
Brief comment: Born from the fuwen, the association is rich, the realm is grand, free and unrestrained, like the wind of Suzi.
Huang Yikun Chaozhou, Guangdong
Chibi recalls the wind and clouds, invites friends to look at the moon, sees the world float and sinks, and realizes the three realms of life;
Huang Zhou poured out his feelings, hurt the present hanging ancient flying, the empty eunuch moved who, and chanted into an article in his heart.
Brief comment: Laying out the scenery, triggering discussion and lyricism, interlocking with each other, and becoming a hill of its own.
Luo Yi Meitan, Guizhou
Guests are intimidated, v. Flat Boat Cangsu;
Zi Zi Da Yi, eat the bright moon breeze.
Brief comment: a guest (the guest in the endowment) a son (a thousand ancient Po Immortals), a pity and a reach, two contrasts, the meaning of the text is immediately apparent.
Fang Zhuanwen Yueyang, Hunan
A page of storm clouds, the river to carry;
All kinds of sorrow, Chibi found it.
Brief comment: All kinds of emotions, pay time and space; eight characters sonorous, self-reliant wind and bone.
Zhang Xiangxue Sanmenxia, Henan
For the vast view, the boating to collect the moon, hanging the ancient wounds the present, the heart and the river rise and fall together;
Through the meditation aura, sighing in the sky, thinking of the truth and illusion, endowed with the rhyme of singing and chanting.
Brief comment: Leisurely traveling in the world, looking at the ancient and modern, can be put and received. The sentence "The heart rises and falls with Jiang Tao" returns to the present; the lower knot ends with "Endowed with the rhyme and singing together", returning to this endowment, seeing the author's pen power.
Wang Yanqing, Tianjin Hedong
Sending love to the mountains and rivers, boating Chibi, chanting poems to the moon, sighing that things are a thousand lines in a moment;
Outside the eyes of the wind and smoke, the wine is far away, the river is on the ancient, and the endowment is more than a thousand years.
Brief comment: Imitation of the scenery, the intention of lyricism, such as the trip to chibi in the endowment to do a scene reproduction, making people feel like the scene, such as feeling its feelings.
Hu Heming, Shandong Linqing
To the wine as a song, Jiang Shui remembers the millennium to wake up drunk, read Geng Geng's heart, clear as the moon;
Indulging in emotion, the poet is half a life of ups and downs, sighing the vast sea, and the rest of his life.
Brief comment: From the author's writing, his state of mind, his eunuchs, his life situation, and the situation in the endowment are also naturally integrated, and the two reflect each other. You two knots sing a sigh in a loop, and the afterglow is deep and long.
Liu Dengjia Danzhou, Hainan
Here several times to swim, the water is also singing, the moon is also singing, sending love to guests, there is a reason to dream of lone cranes in the middle of the night;
Go to the reeds of your life, listen to what it stops, know what it stops, put the wine in the wind, and give the river a great river in drunkenness.
Brief comment: Starting with the question, it is not only fascinating, but also increases infinite emotion, inherits the song of "Water Moon", adds color to the words, and the realm is empty. The upper and lower couplets are better than the gods who can take the fuwen, and the repetition comes down to the endowment, and when it is far away, it looks empty, and when it is close, it is far-reaching.
Who eunuch night boat tour, comment on the wind and moon, discern the sound of the flute, the bright things I am infinite, endowed with Xiongwen into a unique singing;
Qunsheng Shen Chanting, On Cao Zhou, Qin Suzi, Wu Xing and Death, and Won Chibi Mu Gaoxian.
Brief comment: The upper than the writing of the eunuch tour into a masterpiece, closely around the author's activities at that time in Chibi; the next than writing the group of students to praise the endowment of this divine product, more naturally came to the understanding of "rise and fall for the substitute", sublimated the theme.
Lu Yue Xingtai, Hebei Province
A few of the guests, holding the moon condensation wave, listening to ten acres, and finally chanting as a thousand years of absolute;
Spit out a hundred sentences of lizhang, overlook the river and the valley, just look in all directions, and read that all the worlds are clear.
Brief comment: The process of writing endowment, reading and feeling, the joint language is not far from the theme, it is not too much to comment on "a thousand years of one must", and it is also possible to convey the spirit with the feeling of "all the worlds are clear".
There are 105 selected works
Lou Xiaofeng Suichang, Zhejiang
The WM Fighters go;
Three points is enough.
Tian Xinglong, Yueyang, Hunan
Let go of the chibi with friends, the sea of the vicissitudes, and the ephemera also;
Xing Yin put the wine dream of the blue sky, the bright moon in the mountains, and the breeze on the river.
* Up and down than the last two sentences, belonging to the sentence self-pair.
Tian Tao Hunan Linxiang
The waves are exhausted, the winds of the ages, and later what;
When the wine wakes up, one article is given, and several people have been in the history of the past.
Nie Dan Heilongjiang Daqing
Across the great river, the wind and clouds have been tearful for thousands of years;
Floating boat Chibi, water moon a bay ink guest heart.
Fan Rong Shanxi is biased
Bold still, Q&A free, sighing heroes lost water storm dreams;
The most relaxed is the most, the feelings are ups and downs, and the song of the falling flowers of the years is sung.
Hu Jinhai Shandong Linqing
Tour Chibi, Fu Hong, rafting to enjoy the scenery, the river flows into the sea breeze;
Appeal to sorrow, express indignation, put the wine pleasantly, and the water moon will be filled with ancient dreams.
Wang Jirong, Harbin, Heilongjiang
Gather friends on the Yangtze River, enjoy the bright moon in the mountains, think about the rise and fall of the past, and send out thousands of emotions;
Rafting chibi, bathing in the breeze on the water, expressing love and hate, spitting out a little sadness and joy.
Zhou Zaixiang Hunan Xinhua
Qingfeng Mingyue Reward Confidant;
Distant waters and remote mountains are full of pride.
Xie Yinglai Yueyang, Hunan
Drinking and boating, blowing flutes and humming songs, and passing on the Dongpo literature for thousands of years;
Indulgent reasoning, nostalgia for the past and the present, chibi history continues for ten thousand years.
Zhou Zhizhong, Changchun, Jilin Province
Degraded Huangzhou, hanging the ancient wounds to the present, a generation of lyricists have been given;
Accompany chibi, lyrical chants, thousand autumn historical relics forever left their names.
You Chunhai Hubei Shishou
Where the fire ship is, the scenery is long, who knows the battlefield of the year;
Literature and history try to see, riot people come and go, car fly is a tourist city.
Yang Defeng Hubei Songzi
Boat Shake Chibi Autumn Moon;
Send Huangzhou Su Zihuai.
Lai Yizong, Harbin, Heilongjiang
Blending scenes, questions and answers, discussions and lyrics, successful masterpieces;
Contains allegorical poems, also texts and endowments, and also scatters, passing on famous passages to the world.
Fan Weiping, Shanxi Ruicheng
A light boat swings on the Yanbo River, where songs are played, and harmony is played over there;
Chibi shore head worried Mengde, and Jun indulged in wine, for the guests to release.
Mikuanlu, Shandong Tai'an
Ask what the mood is like after the Dongpo poetry case;
Watch the lone crane fly west in the moonlight of Chibi.
Xie Weiming Yueyang, Hunan
Once Chibi was terrified, and there was no owl, but it left a bright festival for thousands of years;
Tonight Qingjiang wine is happy, although there is a bright moon, it also has the original heart to fight.
Chen Shimin Hunan Linxiang
Career ups and downs, the history of social crisis and pain;
Before and after the article, the old minister did his best to be loyal.
Yu Haidong Pingjiang, Hunan
Chibi rafting, two scattered yinfeng moon;
Smoke waves write scenes, and the ancient literary heroes sigh in the faint.
Zhao Guofang, Tianjin
Fresh wind and white dew, water color skylight, scene blending, melting meaning;
Hanging the past and smelling Xiao, poetry and drinking, ancient and modern dialogue, talking about life.
Wu Zhiliang, Shanxi County
Speaking of endowment can be without red walls;
There must be an east slope in the tanjia.
Zhao Zhijun Heilongjiang Bayan
After the front chibi, the huge production of the huge chapter, the lyricism of the chant, the infinite interpretation of the sighing Jinge turbid wine;
Ancient rivers and mountains, the side of the sinking boat, the streamers pass by, and the breeze of the bright moon circulates freely.
Wang Mingliang, Heilongjiang Daqing
Drumming and singing "The Great River East Goes to the End of the Waves" is fierce and majestic;
Dong Zhen choked up and groaned "Forget the beauty of the heavens" deep sorrow.
Liu Xinchao Gansu Zhouqu
Night tour chibi, bright moon frequently reminds ancient tears;
Drinking life, the breeze is difficult to soothe the wounded heart.
Pan Feng, Yueyang, Hunan
In the past, the fire burned Chibi, and the world was divided into three parts;
Now the water surrounds the river city, and the people are unified.
Sun Qiwen Hainan Ledong
Night tour of Chibi, rafting chanting, lyrical sentimentality in the words;
The moon shines in the sky, touches the scenery, and the illusion of the world is good and exquisite.
Deng Yuanjun Liling, Hunan
Huangzhou is drunk at night, drinking and singing, watching the magnificent waves of history, asking who can hold the top in the world;
Chibi boat tour, linjiang fuyue, borrowing wind and clouds to flutter, hoping that the world cranes will lean on the immortals.
Xu Yanli Urumqi, Xinjiang
Chibi River Flowers, singing and competing for deer in the world;
Lonely boat wine endowment, pouring out nostalgia for the famous belly.
Wang Yongzhu Guangdong Wuhua
Kanzan a masterpiece, Lai rafting, drinking, borrowing words, feeling nostalgic for the past and the present;
Although he was half a prisoner, he was lyrical, determined, and Chen Yizhun expressed his loyalty and patriotism.
Li Guanjun, Tai'an, Shandong
Floating and sinking habitually;
Poetry is endowed with longevity.
Zhou Shuijiang Yueyang, Hunan
A endowment of mountains and rivers, lupine scarves, rolling Yangtze River east passed away;
Full of melting paintings, flowers and birds, and a strong cup of wine guests return.
Xiong Wei, Yueyang, Hunan
History of the rise and fall of endowments;
People look for joy.
Li Shujie Liaoning Chaoyang
Handsome and unrelenting, Jiangzhou wine moon pleasant heartscape;
The wind and currents are far away, and Shi Jian is thinking of reason.
Chen Wangui Yueyang, Hunan
Chibi rafting, moonlight Shanshan sighed;
Su Gong groaned, and his heart was always haunting.
Pang Changliang Pengxi, Sichuan
Autumn River Moon Night Swing Boat Literature Dedication;
Chibi Song answered the Lord with open-mindedness.
Fan Xieping Repairs Water in Jiangxi
You Shanshui, Mu Zhoulang, calmly directing the burning of Chibi;
On the rise and fall, sigh change, optimistic and dashing and literary.
Lang Hongwen Langfang, Hebei
Chibi clashed, and the three three stood;
The title of the eastern slope is famous throughout the ages.
Lü Pengfei Urumqi, Xinjiang
Dongpo residents rely on the appendix, the old traces think of flying, and the pen falls to the best talent;
Chibi Orchid Boat flooded the water, and on a whim, endowed with famous passages through the ages.
Lin Zhengyu Fujian Yongtai
Memories of the Yangtze River Book drunkard;
Dream of scaring the chibi fire ship.
Li Jianbing is in Yueyang, Hunan
Pan Chibi boat, sighing the tide of the rising;
Reading Su Gongfu, I feel that the world is ups and downs.
Hou Weipeng Yueyang, Hunan
Boat tour chibi, two thousand autumn masterpieces;
People belittled Huangzhou and the first Eight Years of Strange Grievances.
Wang Great Wall Sanmenxia, Henan
Fresh breeze and bright moon, fine wine and cuisine, enjoying the water and swimming in the mountains;
Chibi fills in the words, Huangzhou makes endowments, and caresses the present and forgets the sorrows.
Wu Haiyan Huaihua, Hunan
Bian Zhou shadow into the night of the breeze, touching the scenery and feelings, nostalgic for the past and the present, and small in the dust;
The aroma of turbid wine floats in the open air, stop the cup to hide a few, push the heart to the belly, and appreciate the years before the bottle.
Maori people Luoyang, Henan
Rafting under the wall, the main and guest questions and answers, the sound of alpine flowing water, the bright moon breeze and jade rhyme;
Jiangzhong's commentary on wine, Cao Zhou's commentary, the rise and fall of history, and the joys and sorrows of life. (New Rhyme)
Peng Hezhang, Yueyang, Hunan
A generation of heroes, walking at night on the ancient road;
Thousand autumn chibi, wine invites ink guests to swing light boats.
Zhang Zhiming Tianjin Dongli
Qianqiu Chibi left an ink;
The culture of the two is full of sorrows. (Today' voice)
Li Yanmin, Harbin, Heilongjiang
Boats swaying and waters, wine gushing psalms, with texts as a thousand years of odes;
The moon star is faint, the flute is mournful, and the writing scene is full of love.
Zhang Liguo Heilongjiang Bayan
Two chapters of nostalgia, qingfeng mingyue yangyang pen;
Wounded today, Chibi Long Flute Hao Hao River.
Yang Zili Zhuzhou, Hunan
Drink wine on the Yangtze River, the waves crash on the shore, hit the throat and sing freely, and rush the bull to fight;
Rafting Chibi, paddle poetry, listening to the wind and holding the moon and enjoying leisurely, two covers ancient and modern.
Xiong Hongbo Hunan Xiangyin
Lun scarf lupine fan, folding the sword sinking boat, beacon fire reminiscing pride, leaning on the sword to sing sadly the water;
Overlooking the city near the river, embracing the green, the mountains and rivers are condensed, and the sand and waves look at people.
Wei Guo, Handan, Hebei
The song under the moon, the sound of the river, the sound of the teaching, the ethereal spirit realm;
The wine rhymes, the poetry rhymes in the mouth, the sighs are leisurely, and the boat moves to the sky.
Zhou Xiongguo Yueyang, Hunan
Water blue sky light, birds singing and fish dancing, road shuttle, building brocade, boat swing drawing open, where is not Haunting Su Zifu?
Eight arrays of mountains, the moon shines in the autumn, the brother holds the hand, the sister leads the waist, the love melts the waves, and now it is all a dream.
Yao Yuhui Jilin Tonghua
Because of Wutai, degrading Huangzhou, indulging in joy and sorrow, intending to have a brilliant life;
Swim chibi, leave no singing, hurt the present and hang the past, and have no intention of rotting the style.
Wang Ruihua Liaoning
Poetry wine takes advantage of the light madness, this endowed qing high edge Chibi;
Words and deeds are romantic, and the king's heart is a hero.
Fu Qingsong Tianjin Hedong
Rafting Chibi, supporting the present and hanging the ancients;
Put the wine in the sky, and give it a new one.
Liu Yaqin Sanmenxia, Henan
Huangzhou Chibi Smoke Cloud Jing;
The Haoshihua chapter is long and long.
Li Xueying, Harbin, Heilongjiang
Not because of adversity;
More borrowed from the autumn to pick up elegant feelings.
Zhou Guoqing Zhangbei, Hebei
Looking at the gushing river, boating on the night of the moon, nostalgic for the past and the present, why not sing songs with wine, and melt Chibi into fame;
Looking for the faint green mountains, the polar eyes are long in the sky, the poetry is crossed, the tragic wind cannot be stopped, and the scenery accompanies Yingxian to write a brocade.
Peng Xiao, Kaizhou, Chongqing
The battlefield of the past, the moon and the night of the boat, sighing the heroes of the ages;
The famous passage of the eastern slope, the breeze Yongzhi, will be a cavity block in the middle of the river.
Sun Deli Hainan Ledong
Idle chibi, wind and moon follow, lead wine as a song boat;
See through the red dust, the spirit is unbound, and the dream wave is still flat.
Tan Guotai Zhuzhou, Hunan
Read more sensibly;
Yanggu doubled to feel Chibi Xiong.
Chen Xin Yunnan Zhenxiong
Rafting near Chibi, nostalgic for the past and the present, the main guest drunken river sound, feathering Dengxian Mingyue Gong;
Put the wine to the breeze, chant poetry, the hero returns to the crane shadow, and the song enters the holy dawn.
Chen Jianjun Xinjiang Kokdala
The boat drinks wine to cover up the basil, lamenting how many heroes have passed away today;
Leaning on the shore of the piano to chant ancient tunes, the song two or three battles cut down from sorrow.
Sun Zhijiang, Harbin, Heilongjiang
Nostalgic boating, allegorical scenery, expressing ambition;
Wounded today and riding the moon, sending affection to the scenery, and bringing friends to pin the country.
Shi Huashi Shandong Linqing
A cheerful word, a stormy and bold ink;
Dripping brush, several pictures of the quiet and quiet of the river and the moon.
Tang Ge'an Zhuzhou, Hunan
Sorrowful ancient dispatch, close to Huangzhou, there was a burning smell of Chibi;
Jing yi is also affectionate, He Shu is clear of water, and he has stayed for a long time to hate Wutai.
Tian Zhenhua Yuanling, Hunan
Jin Zhun invited Han Yue, the Three Kingdoms wind and clouds again, and the Thousand Autumn Hegemony by whom to remember;
Chibi exhibits talents, full of smoke and rain into the heart, immortal articles are at my disposal.
Xiong Guiying Yueyang, Hunan
Red Dust;
Philosophy.
Zhi Weiran, Quyang, Hebei
Rafting on the river, nostalgic filler words chibi;
Kishimae boils wine, and hurts the hero.
Gu Lifeng, Shanxi Ruicheng
There are rioters groaning on the blue water;
Sigh the floating name drowning in the great river.
He Zhengming Pingxiang, Jiangxi
Adversity rafting, admiring the boundless wind and moon, showing the openness of the heart, once into a chibi;
Qingqiu sent a sigh, enlightened with a number of surpluses, exhibited xiongqi literary talents, and looked up to the eastern slope through the ages.
Li Xiuqing Quyang, Hebei
With the breeze and bright moon, look at the vast Yangtze River, cliff climbing;
Ride on the reed leaf light boat, listen to the lone crane singing, and chase the past and the present.
Zheng Cuijuan Xingtai, Hebei
Du Yizhou is short in The Zi, the strange vicissitudes are vast, the white moon is empty, and the sparkling is where to stop;
Exploring the thousands of feet of broken peaks from the other, even the valley of the roaring valley swooped down the river, climbed the dragon and the leopard, and melted the silence around the surrounding and let himself rest.
Zhou Ying, Kaifeng, Henan
A Hero endowment of the Three Kingdoms;
Thousands of miles of yangtze river bright moon huai.
Huang Hasli Guangxi Cen Xi
Night tour Chibi, put the lamp on the song, talk about reason, poetic life is still sighing;
Forgive each other, turn sadness into joy, lyrically write scenes, and tone the world more nostalgic.
Note: Chibi Fu, divided into two parts, author Su Shi. The former endowment, talking about the mysterious reasoning; the latter endowment, the narrative writing scene.
Cui Gangbing Huaihua, Hunan
Boating under the wall to see the beauty, belonging to the friends of the yin, Mo Dao Wutai poetry case horror, forget the hardships and pains, the river water clear and shake the night moon;
Wave heart to look for the truth, sit and understand, always collect the green field folk songs into the ears, throw away regrets and sorrows, and whisper and send autumn winds.
Ma Shuyi Yueyang, Hunan
Officials degrade Huangzhou, and the bright moon and clear wind haunt wanli;
Night tour chibi, one boat two endowed with a thousand autumns.
Li Xiaotian, Tangshan, Hebei
Drums and horns squabble, Chibi lamentations that frighten the water;
Mountains and rivers testify, and the hero's mighty spirit runs through Changhong.
Huang Guohui Jinggangshan, Jiangxi
Heaven and earth are leisurely, and poetry drinks under the moon;
Where the hero is, hang the ancient wounded in the boat.
Cattle grazing in Lanzhou, Gansu
Ancient rivers and mountains, the famous Zhou Lang a fire;
Boundless wind and moon, giving SuZi two tours.
Yang Xueyin Shandong Linqing
Wushu Alliance, Burning Chibi Passing Good Story;
The words are nostalgic, and the rafters are written in The Su Gong left the American text.
Guo Muyuan Linqing, Shandong
Guests hang ancient, resentment and sound sense of world dust, heroes pass away;
Su Zi Kaizun, the breeze and moon color tour wonderland, current affairs neglect.
Liu Yingqiang Shandong Tobacco Shop
Two thousand years of relics, revisited here, the most praise chibi Zhou lang, Huangzhou Suzi;
In the west, the old fortress put light boats, facing the wind, still seeing Xuan Baoyu, white dew across the river.
Luo Zhiyong Shandong Linqing
Suzi boating, enjoy the lake and mountains;
Sending love to the scenery, feeling nostalgic for Chibi Zhoulang.
Wei Jishan, Shandong Linqing
Pan boat hanging ancient, reminiscent of Zhou Lang Chibi;
Boil the wine and pour it in, and cherish the bright moon breeze.
Jin Zhiyun Zhangjiakou, Hebei
Chaotic stones are shocking, and Gongjin is heroic and burns Chibi;
The great river hangs in the moon, and the eastern slope is proud of Huangzhou.
Xing Yingxin Linqing, Shandong
Heroes of the Ages;
Junjie millennium water and fire.
Chen Fang'an Huaihua, Hunan
Silver hook chibi, a tour to wash away a thousand grievances;
The river surface is fresh, and the two endowments are cultivated into ancient names.
Under the moon, the sun is soaring, and the realm is full of yin and spirit;
The boat head thinks of the ancients, the river runs away, and the thousand years also swing sadly.
Gao Yanhua Linqing, Shandong
Rafting Chibi, drinking and singing, thousand-year-old allusions are tragic;
Bring the Cangcang River, the singing of the flute, and the heroes of eternity to the fullest.
Chen Changfu Huaihua, Hunan
The moon is cold and autumn is high, a fresh breeze, and where is the ancient soul of the wounded;
The lamp is cold and quiet at night, three pots of hot tea, and the rhyme of the poem still exists.
Cheng Xin Shandong Linqing
Amorous Huafa, who moved Su Zisi's legacy;
Lu fan scarf, talking and laughing Zhou Lang tired of Dengxian.
Jiang Zhiliang Hongjiang, Hunan
Panjiang boat sighs ancient and modern, the royal wind dances, the bright moon and song, and the famous chapter is given;
Psychic shore exploration of the virtual reality, the leopard catching the dragon, the sea bass sobering up, the long roaring wood frightening the valley song.
Li Shaorong Liaoning
Chibi is a thing of the past;
Light boat drunken singing laughter life.
Gong Fuxiang Shandong Linqing
Zhou Lang became famous all over the world;
Suzi traveled to Kyushu.
Sun Fengshan, Shandong Linqing
Lush and elegant, Qiwen proud rhyme, poetic and new, good words and words passed down through the ages;
Huanghuang model, miaoli bao tiandi, bright moon and fresh wind for a long time, into the victory of the Fanle Wanjia. (New)
Formerly revitalized Xingtai, Hebei
Literary arrogance;
Give the wind and the new.
There was a Gung in Huaihua, Hunan
Drinking and singing, a water moon throwing sorrow and joy;
Poetry is written, and the thousand-year-old fishing tree road rises and falls.
Li Xianzeng, Shandong Linqing
Drink wine and raft, invite the moon to buckle the port, the landscape and water melt Su Zifu;
Wounds are hanging from the past. Commenting on the history of Cao Cao, the article runs through the broad and broad feelings.
Chen Guang, Changsha, Hunan
Magic Fire Attack Cao Shui Zhai;
The last ink dyes qu dongpo.
Zhou Chu, Yueyang, Hunan
Read strange texts like illusions, climb the real scene like immortals, distant mountains and waters, chaotic rocks through the air, ask where is the lufan? Bearded?
Enlightenment changes and ups and downs, thousands of autumns have passed, haoyue chasing stars, people's dreams come true, watching the brocade of the tower, and the business sea is yangbo.
Wang Hongxia Quyang, Hebei
Chibi Echo Drum Horn;
The yangtze river surges heroes.
Li Ping, Tianjin Hedong
Starry night rafting drinking poetry, recalling Cao Gong's victory in battle, flag dancing to cover the sky;
The breeze and the moon mourn the sad song, watch the river and the river flow, and cultivate the heart of Zhigao adversity.
Deng Tao, Guizhou, Qiandongnan
Five hundred words bi sat on the Chi Chi, Jun once brought a passenger in the boat, a fishing tree on the river, to find here;
A thousand stars move around, I want to ask the wind and moon, the mountains and rivers are lush, do you know who to go to?
Chibi meditates, regretting the past like smoke, but knowing the poetry of Yokozuna, Dengbei Wine Shows Divine Martial Arts;
Famous passages of enlightenment, sighing that life is short, only the bright moon in the mountains, the breeze on the river to send me affection.
Partially wrong
Editor: Long link is broad, the overall view is acceptable, retained.
Yi Yanfeng, Huaihua, Hunan
Invite friends to the moon night lack of boats, over the Chibi a piece of autumn light, full of river fog, as if it has transcended the outside;
The wine journey is lyrical, on life is not bound to the world, but looking at the future, it is still faintly like a splendid east.
Don't work against the war
Zhong Ruiyi, Shanwei, Guangdong
Sigh the river to the east, the trees disappear with the fog, the mengde is difficult to find, Zhou Lang Yingjian, puxi shi zai Su Fuyun;
Riding on the north of the small ship, the scarf accompanied by the wind, the memory of Zhongmou is still there, Zhuge Shenliu, and the Chibi stone engraving Song Danshu.
Flat and unconscionable
Editor: Long link is broad, the overall view is acceptable, retained.
Fang Liuju Sanmenxia, Henan
Under the cliff, make the flat boat drink and buckle, read the leisure of heaven and earth, the ups and downs of the eunuch sea, and the sorrow of a thousand years comes out;
On the side of the river, Yin Mingyue is pregnant with the waves, feeling the insignificance of the mountains and rivers, the shortness of life, a beautiful gift from Silai.