The fifth-grader wrote "That Moment, I Grew Up", which was touching to read.
First of all, the true feeling revealed in the composition, especially the analysis of his own psychological activities at the end, through the understanding of maternal love and the expression of gratitude, point out the theme of "growing up".
The opening paragraph's quotation "Moment" is used very well and meets the requirements of "that moment". The text also highlights that moment, making this point in time more visual.
The narrative and development of the middle storyline is clearly layered. From the mother's illness to the mother's cooking, to the final mother's thanks, the development and climax of the storyline are reflected, and the character language description and the description of the inner psychological activities also make the content much more vivid.
An excellent essay deserves more parents and classmates to appreciate and learn.
Elementary school students synchronize essay reading comprehension
