Before reading "Flowers", I thought it was about the prosperity of Shanghai, the life of the magic capital, but after reading it, it was actually the end of the flowers, and the song died.
1. Overall: no theme, no main line, struggling to finish reading...
This book is too trivial, no specific theme, no clear main line, eating, small talk, partying, buying tickets, carnal desire, marriage, theater watching drama, daily life, no story line, flow account writing, when you see more than 50 pages, you can't read it, rely on will support, struggle to read.
Aren't Shanghainese people unable to read?
A large dialogue, the whole thing is "xx said." xx does not ring. ”
Although borrowing from novels, not every author can successfully learn the essence.
Struggling to read the whole book, although it also talked a lot of content, but this way of writing caused the readability and storytelling to be weak, lack of basic readability.
After reading it, I didn't read a good book in one go, and I felt refreshed and swinging.
2. Content: complicated, chaotic, reading anywhere in the middle does not affect...
A large number of character dialogues and dense storylines in the book are complex and chaotic, and it will feel that the author's writing ability and language are lacking, and the psychological change process of the characters cannot be expressed.
The whole story begins with 10-year-old Ah Bao and ends with the death of a middle-aged Xiao Mao.
Content: by one thing, bring out another thing; After talking about one person, talk about another person.
Genre: pure white painting, no lyricism, less discussion.
Structurally: one chapter writes about the past, one chapter writes about the present dynasty.
Temporal: Focuses on Shanghai in two time periods, one in the 1960s and 1970s and the other in the 1980s and 1990s.
The novel seems to have two main lines, in fact, these are not the main lines, and the small Shanghai characters on the side of the story may be the real essence of the novel.
3. Characters: frivolous personality, flat characters, not three-dimensional, low recognition...
The relationship between the characters is too complicated, there are many characters, there are more than a hundred characters, but there is no main line, too loose.
Male characters: Hu Sheng, Ah Bao, Xiao Mao (not much in the scene) involves a large number of men and women.
Female characters: Betty, Mei Rui, Bai Ping, Fang Mei, Li Li, Tao Tao, Shu Hua, Miss Wang, Chun Xiang, Shu Wan, Ling Zi, Lan Lan, Xiao Qin, Yin Feng, Xue Zhi, Pan Jing...
Male and female, many characters are extremely lowly recognizable, including the three main males, the personality characteristics are not distinct, will not be able to distinguish who is who.
4. Story: Carnal desire is too strong, the story is shallow, green to panic...
Checked the "Blossoms" character relationship diagram, green to panic...

Solid red line = occurrence of relationship;
The red dotted line can only be understood = ambiguous / one party has a will / has talked about friends.
The main character relationship, the gray background is male, and the white background is female. Some of the characters who played soy sauce were not put in, such as Miss Zhang, Miss Qin and so on.
The carnal desires of men and women are too strong, without the causes and background introductions of this phenomenon, only the flesh and skin and no soul of Shanghai life...
The female figures are even more chaotic, making people wonder if the author is biased against women?
They are all selfish, narrow-minded, disguised, vulgar, selfish, bourgeois, hypocritical, scheming, and short-sighted.
For example, the female violin in the book:
First from the expression of great joy and great sorrow, Fang Mei finally agreed to divorce Tao Tao, Tao Tao can be bright and Xiaoqin together (the two have eloped), because they are too happy, the room hip-hop is noisy, resulting in Xiaoqin falling from the fourth floor, there is no sign of life.
After the police investigated the case and confirmed the accidental death, Tao Tao found that Xiaoqin's diary recorded his tricks and various "disguises" in order to want to be with Tao Tao.
The original text of the book:
Husbands and wives, who are not as good as friends, will never trust each other.
If it is not right to marry someone, it is better not to be false. If you don't get it right, it's bad luck.
Why does the author write about women that way? Why do you write about the relationship between a man and a woman before this?
In fact, reading a book is like a dialogue with the author, from which you can see the value judgment of the author.
5. Ending: The song ends with people dispersing
Everyone's experience, the love between different people and different people, the separation, and because of this, there is no contact between good friends, Xiao Mao and HuSheng, Ah Bao broke off friendship, and finally reconciled. The story of men and women before, together, and various problems separated, but also for various reasons because of love and death, trapped by love, such as Li Li shaved out of the family.
In the words of the book: Men and women can only face reality in the end. There will be all kinds of changes, which is normal.
There is a fortune teller in the book, reminiscent of the leper monk in "Dream of the Red Chamber". There are also foreshadowings, hints, and metaphors, but these foreshadowings will be ignored because the plot is too scattered.
If Tao Tao touched the railing a little panicked, the xiaoqin fell behind the building.
The overall expression is that the flowers are gone, and finally only themselves are left, the poignant after the hustle and bustle, in a short period of time, everyone falls in love with a few people (different people), but in the end it is still a person to go, life is lonely after all.
The author used a hilarious name "Blossom" to write "Bleak".
6. "Blossom" drama: The success or failure of Hu Ge's next stop lies in "Blossom"
Hu Ge: Next stop, can you blossom?
The trailer released by the previous episode also caused a lot of controversy, and the male protagonist Ah Bao, played by Hu Ge, appeared on the scene, oily noodles, and raised the wine glass.
Netizens said that it was like a famous wine advertisement...
Because Jin Yucheng's "Blossoms" is not a gorgeous Shanghai like the trailer, but even the most unbearable fragmented Shanghai of urban life.
The background of the city, the characters and images in the book, each with its own concerns, will face a huge adaptation.
Will it be made into a sweet pet drama?
Hu Ge does still maintain a sense of free youth, the new drama to win, but how to adapt the script is the biggest problem that the director and the main creator must overcome.