Today, I was idle and read a novel by Aunt Mizuki Nomura, titled "The Crime and Punishment of Xiang Hongkai, Who Likes the Girlfriend of the Dead Party". Heck, you don't need to read this book, whether you've read it or not, reading my article has absolutely no impact!
The title is so concise that it tells you what the story is all about. And the content is not off-topic, completely complementary to the title, can only say that this title perfectly summarizes all the elements of the story.
Yes, it's an NTR story.
But it has a pure love ending.
The plot of the story is deliberately described very simply, that is, the feeling of female love from the perspective of the king's male that is common to everyone.
I'm trying to summarize the plot of the game in 800 words so that you can read it in three minutes. Those who think they want to see it for themselves and don't want to be spoiled can skip the next "*" and "*" content. Then I'm going to talk about how to use the elements of NTR to add watchability to an orthodox love drama.
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The male protagonist Xiang Jing, who has a mediocre personality and loves to read, has a crush on the female protagonist Ofe Wenjing, who rides the same train with him every day. On this day, his friend Sunshine Boy said that he had found a girlfriend! This made the male protagonist also pluck up the courage to try to take a step forward to talk to the female protagonist. It turned out that Ji You's girlfriend was the Wenjing heroine on the tram who the male protagonist had a crush on! The male protagonist was shocked, and his heart was like a knife, but he could only pretend to bless Ji You. Through the base friend, the male and female protagonists can also be regarded as acquaintances.
But the fate is terrible, the male protagonist and the heroine will always meet by chance alone, and every time the male protagonist intends to ignore each other, he always finds that the other party is in trouble, such as squeezing bread in the welfare club, obviously deliberately staggering the tram but finding that the other party is still there, and the other party on the tram is just being touched by the wolf... All in all, the male protagonist has to help the heroine every time, but finds that he can't forget the heroine more and more.
Therefore, what follows is a large section of the male protagonist's desperate struggle to struggle with the crime of betraying relatives and friends and the punishment of maintaining himself.
Among them, we will see the male protagonist inadvertently peeping into the scene where the heroine and the base friend hug each other deeply.
We will hear the heroine say in front of the hero: "What I like is your friend".
We will hear Ki-you talk about how hard he tried to take action to defeat the heroine step by step and finally win her heart.
We will see Ki-yo showing off to other classmates and clubs that the heroine is her girlfriend, and the heroine is blushing and shyly holding Ki-yo's hand.
We will understand how the partner and the heroine have established a nested bond where the male protagonist does not know. Their first date, their first trip to amusement park, their first...
The male protagonist is embarrassed to go crazy. So the male protagonist could not hold back, decided to betray the base friend to confess, so found the heroine, suddenly the wind blew, the heroine has been holding the sketch book in her hand fell on the ground and automatically turned the page, just stopped on a page - that page is painted is the appearance of Wen Jing male protagonist who is reading a book. The male protagonist instantly understood, and then went out to confess. It turned out that the two were in love with each other.
At this time, he was caught and raped by Ji You. So Ji You and the male protagonist fell out and began a mutual fight between men and men. In the end, the two fell, and Ji You confided the truth - he found out at the beginning that the heroine liked the male protagonist, and the girl who liked the male protagonist must be a good girl, so he liked the female protagonist, and also used various moral kidnapping methods to catch up with the female protagonist and did not allow her to break up with himself, which also led to the heroine's inability to confess to the male protagonist. But seeing that the male protagonist is willing to betray friendship for love, Jiyou feels that he has lost. So in the end, the male and female protagonists finally became dependents, and everyone was very happy. The whole play ends.
Okay, spoiler over.
I've been trying to make some of Amway's works before, and I've hardly ever written a negative review of the work! So I'm going to try to write some reviews that describe both the bits and the flaws of the work recently.
Readers who have dealt with me for a long time, or readers who have met for the first time, should be familiar with the word NTR, right?
Although I have tried to describe the meaning of NTR in various definitions such as "wearing a green hat" and "wife running away with someone else", I have found that it is all in vain. Because these words simply can't fully describe the broad meaning of NTR. This is indeed a concept that can only be understood ineffable and difficult to explain clearly. www.23ciyuan.com/index.php/18946.html
The work I read, "The Girlfriend who Likes the Dead Party, the Crime and Punishment of Xiang Jing Hongkai", is a novel that uses NTR as a selling point to attract consumers on the title.
In the work, there are also many plots in which the object of the favorite is flattering to other men, the object of the favorite is indeed deepening the bond with other men in the place where he does not know, the object of the favorite shows an expression that he will never show in front of other men, the object of his choice is accidentally witnessed by himself hugging and intimately touching other men, and the object of his choice clearly says in front of him that he likes other men, and so on.
But this plot, how to say it... That is to say, although it is a love novel with NTR as the selling point, the elements of these NTRs are not particularly strong. Things are not used to the fullest.
There is hardly any NTR in this game that can hurt your heart. It's hard for you to substitute for that sour feeling of jealousy. In the pattern of this work, in order to meet the power of shaking people's hearts, the elements of NTR actually need to be slightly more "vulgar", such as using some GAL or Lifan techniques to render the sense of betrayal and despair. However, Nomura Mizuki is always afraid of hurting you too deeply and as if he deliberately left a hand, he did not exert his full strength.
Therefore, even if you see the two people at the end of the cultivation of positive results, the happiness of reading a love novel and seeing the two finally together is not particularly strong. This is not even comparable to the most ordinary king's love story. As a result, the appeal of the story is insufficient, and it is difficult to impress the reader, and in the end, the book can only be regarded as a mediocre third-rate love novel.
Originally, the NTR element was a powerful weapon that could strengthen the appeal of pure love, but this book did not fully exert its effectiveness. This is the place of regret.
Our most common NTR element is "marriage contract". Otherwise, the famous aristocratic lady of the modern metropolis and the commoner are fierce on the surface, but in fact she has a marriage contract with another rich man's son. Otherwise, in the familiar other world, the aristocratic heroine actually has a favorite object from childhood, and that object is still the agreed fiancé. And the male protagonist you are the third party who appears in the middle.
"Zero Demon" has this kind of plot. The pattern of this plot in the story is completely different from the pure love above, the position is not particularly heavy, and it is often a "incidental" result. For example, in fact, the Zero Demon mainly solves the conspiracy of Louise's bad fiancé, and that emotional line is a by-product of this "king's road battle". In such a pattern, this slight "fiancé" NTR element can allow the reader to silently grasp a point of view in the mind, and even if you write a lot of boring conspiracies with a lot of word counts, the reader can temporarily lose the ability to appreciate and read, in order to see the male protagonist win back the heroine's heart. This maintains the centripetal force of a continuous reading.
This little bit of NTR element has played a pivotal role in the whole work, and has also deepened the bond between the male and female protagonists.
Have you seen "Memories of a Certain Pilot"? This is a shocking and touching work that you must read when you read light novels, and it has also been adapted into a theatrical version in recent years. The male and female protagonists of this work also fell in love on the way, but in the end, the heroine still carried out her mission as a political prop, gave up herself for the sake of the world, and became a victim of marriage. It's a great story of pure love because its ending isn't perfect. And this "married to someone else" NTR element, although only an understatement, here it plays a role as if it is better to coordinate the whole and sublimate the whole story, so that this novel can be put on the stage of god.
You see, these are all examples of more please taste, but they all have a profound impact on the whole work, and even become the biggest attraction throughout the end. Obviously, the pen and ink are very light, but they can attract a lot of attention. The NTR element is such a sensitive and unique charm. Of course, if you use it well, it will be very good, and if you use it a little bit, it will rot to the bone. Hey.
Next time, we'll talk about the slightly heavier NTR expression.
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PS: Two years ago watched the "Broken Blade Sword" TV animation should know, not 300 comic than that weapon, there is also a theatrical version, in that work, the heroine is the male protagonist Kiyou's wife this setting, Saito Chiwa played, and Kiyou and his wife are the country's majesty and queen, but later on the surface the heroine and Kiyou have not slept together, and Kiyou also knows that the heroine has a crush on the male protagonist, the heroine and the male protagonist often engage in ambiguity, almost everyone knows that this relationship is really a bit complicated, However, the animated machine combat combat is still very good. Unfortunately, the TV animation has not finished telling the story. By observing Jun