When students write essays, the most difficult thing to grasp is the material, and the problem exposed by most students is that there is no material to write. The single life of two points and one line causes students to feel that what they see and hear is not rich, and when they lift the pen, they only have repetitive materials such as eating, drinking, and doing exam questions, which is difficult to shine. Therefore, some shortcuts are regarded as the golden rule of composition. For example: play simulation games first and then write; piecing together materials by so-called borrowing from other people's articles; or even fixing materials and then filling in essays.
The selection method of drinking and quenching thirst, seeing the temporary bright side, makes it difficult for students to rely on it from then on, and it is difficult to write their own articles, and it is even more difficult to substantively improve the level of composition.
To improve the writing level of composition materials, mainly from the accumulation of materials, selection of two aspects.
First, the accumulation of materials
The materials are all in life, and they are the bits and pieces of life. No matter how single life, there is also a colorful side, students have experienced, but some students feel different angles, or some people pay attention to it, some people do not pay attention to it. With new feelings, students who pay attention will be inexhaustible material.
The difference is whether it is intentional, the intention is to think, many people think that observation is to recognize children to see more, increase experience, see useless, see thinking, in order to form materials. Then it is very necessary to develop the habit of writing a diary, and it is very necessary to freeze the moments in life on the text, which is the process of thinking.
Second, the requirements of materials
Not all the accumulated materials can be used for composition, and the materials that are not positive and positive are not controlled by students, and it is easy to write biased when they are written. Choosing authentic, novel materials is key.
Choosing a real material is not to say that the material is a real thing that is really happening, and the real material mainly depends on whether you have real feelings. For example, see a news story, a story of a disabled zhijian, true, but not well written, why, because I don't have real feelings.
Many students will say that where the novel material comes from, it is all the same life, let's look at an article written by my junior high school students.
The thunder of qianjiang
The heat and dryness that is unique to summer is everywhere. The sky often dispels clouds, leaving brilliant sunshine.
The thunder of the Qianjiang River is the most ferocious natural phenomenon I have ever encountered, and it is very active in the summer.
A few years ago, I came to Qianjiang during the holidays, and within a few days I met Lei. Staying at home, I was in a very low mood, and my eyes were staring blankly out the window. The sweltering heat gradually dissipated, and the sky became darker and darker. The dark clouds rushed to the low altitude as if they were gathering vigorously. For a time, the clouds were thick and the sky was low. My whole body was cold from the outside to the inside, and my heart was like a cloud outside the window, falling down, falling down.
In an instant, a silver snake swept across the sky.
A loud thunderclap followed, like the roar of a beast, scaring away what little heat remained. The lightning came suddenly, my nerves tensed, and the cold made me eager to burrow into the warm bed. The sky outside the window was overcast, and in my heart it was as terrible as the devil, and my heart was as dark as it was.
The lightning left a terrible impression on me, and it was only a few years later that I returned to Qianjiang again.
Like meeting the deceased, the past things came to my mind, maybe I grew up, maybe I experienced more, I found that those thunder and lightning are nothing, I can face it bravely. In the summer, thunder is a very common thing in Qianjiang, so the sky is often dark, dark like a greedy demon, trying to swallow the whole world. Lightning bolt after lightning streaked by, bringing a deafening noise.
In the midst of the roar, my eyes suddenly went black and the power went out.
I calmly took out a few candles, lit them, and there was light in the house. The little flames beat, and a cool breeze burrowed into the house and tilted it, but when the wind dissipated, it stood up straight again. I was shocked, infected by it, and the same light appeared in my heart, warm and tenacious. It turns out that when dark clouds fill the sky, pessimistic people see "black clouds crushing the city and destroying the city", while brave and optimistic people see "the light of armor opens to the golden scales of the sun".
My heart is the sky of its own, I have changed it, and even if I encounter difficulties, there is still light in my heart.
Summer skies are often obscured by dark clouds.
My sky, there is always a brave light of hope.
appraise:
The theme of this article is positive, through the natural phenomenon of "Thunder of Qianjiang", it is allegorical to the scene, showing us the process of psychological growth of a fourteen-year-old student. It turned out that "the black cloud pressed the city to destroy" or "the light of the armor opened to the golden scales of the sun" depended on their own inner choices. From the perspective of the pen, the method of selecting juxtaposed fragments is adopted, and the same scenes and different mentalities are described delicately and vividly before and after. At the end of the article, atmospheric expression of his determination, the text is like a person, and the image of an optimistic and brave teenager jumps on the paper.
The above article, the choice is "Qianjiang Thunder", this material itself is not novel, who has seen the natural phenomenon, the key is to capture the ordinary life of not bland, not bland feelings, not bland details, not bland understanding. Plain materials can also become novel materials.