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"Pulling the Net" Column (Issue 7)

Sentence: Heaven and earth are neutralized, and the tiger roars a sound of landscape and green (Hunan Zou Zongde)

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The results of the selection of the "Dragnet To Sentence" column (the sixth issue) were announced

Sentence: Xueji Meixiang Hut Drunk (Hunan Luo Jun)

Selected sentences:

Sun Oblique Flower Shadow Bamboo Hedge (Shanxi Zhang Xin)

Ice Open Fish Leaping Fengchi Hustle (Chongqing Xiong Yu)

Feng Han Bamboo Skinny Jade Ladder (Liaoning Fu Xiaoyun)

Yunkairi Liyu Xiyou (Chongqing Wu Hongchuan)

Stove high fire wang er sweet (Hebei Zhang Qiuhong)

Wind and leisure day li horseshoe light (Guizhou Tang Shiyou)

Frost Hanju Ao Banqiao Heng (Hunan Ouyang Richu)

Shanmingshui Xiuri blush (Shanxi Zhang Rundi)

Yan HanHua Shadow Of the Dead (Hubei Yuan Weiming)

Cold Furnace Warm Cave Leisure (Guizhou Chen Yu)

Qin Xian Mo Dan Zhongbin Gui (Hunan Li Xiaoyan)

Furnace Wine Warm Orchestra (Hunan Chen Xiangyang)

Ice Melting Wind Soft Bird Sound (Hunan Jiang Chunfang)

Shicheng wine hot friend Xin (Inner Mongolia Baosuri Galatu)

Cold Wine Fever Deceased Relatives (Xiaoxiang Pavilion)

Ruan Lang Sorrow (Wu Jianhua, Hunan)

Cold Wine Flag Red (Shanxi Qi Zhiwen)

Yunyou Bird Whispering Shiqiao Qing (Liaoning Ma Xiaodi)

Qiqing Tianlang Zhutingyou (Henan Zongyingui)

Spring Willow Green Lotus Pond New (Hebei Hanhai)

Yunshu Rinuan Liu Tangxin (Hunan Yuan Qingmiao)

Vine Dead Tree Old Xiaoqiao Sorrow (Guizhou Guo Lijuan)

Spring Return To LiuCui Bamboo Hedge New (Anhui Deng Yahong)

Ice Melt water heating duck group fun (Hubei Maple Leaf Dan)

Spring Return Water Heating Wild Tour (Hunan Toot Yan Ye)

Yunkaiyan Dance Willow Curtain New (Hebei Hanhai)

【Comments】 The sentence "Xueji Meixiang Hut Drunk" seems ordinary and has no organs, but it uses anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques to create an elegant picture to express a mood. It is not difficult to just seek to straighten out the battle, but it is quite difficult to integrate with the artistic conception of the sentence and to further expand or extend the meaning. If the symmetrical beauty requirements are used in the same way as the sentence, the difficulty is added to the same as the use of corresponding rhetorical techniques. As for the "incense" word of "plum fragrance", it can be let go, and it is okay to use adjectives and nouns.

The sentence describes the scene of the first sunshine after the snow, the cold plum turui, and the hut mu incense. A "drunken" word, not beautiful but beautiful in it. Among the many pairs, there are not many sentences that can meet the above requirements, and the better ones are "Sun Oblique Flower Shadow Bamboo Hedge Support", which closely follows the characteristics of the sentence, and further extends from the scene described in the sentence: the sunlight after the snow shines obliquely, and the shadow of the plum blossom is placed on the fence next to the hut, and the fence seems to know how to pity the fragrant jade and hurry to hold her. The picture is vivid and meticulous, blending with the mood of the sentence, and at the same time using anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques, which is full of fun. "Ice Open Fish Leaping Phoenix Pond Noise" depicts a different scene in the ice and snow, switching the camera in the same environment: there is a beautiful pond next to the hut, the ice in the pond begins to melt, the fish begin to be active, and the whole pond begins to be noisy. A "noisy" word with anthropomorphic characteristics. The phrase "wind and cold pine rhyme bamboo bridge sleep" also uses anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques, but the word "song rhyme" is slightly far-fetched in the coherence of the joint meaning. WeChat search pays attention to the WeChat public account: Submission Essay Station (ID: TGZWYZ), which updates a large amount of call for papers every day. Reply to the keyword [benefits] and receive thousands of free email resources!

If the requirements are relaxed a little, relatively good sentences are: "Yunkai Ri Li Yu Xi You", "Wind Cold Bamboo Thin Jade Step Void", "Smoke Cold Flower Shadow Returns to the Past", "Ice Melting Wind Soft Bird Sound", "Cloud Tour Bird Language Stone Bridge Green", "Qi Qing Tianlang Bamboo Pavilion You", "Cold Wine Flag Red", "Furnace High Fire Boom Boom Sweet Words", "Cold Furnace Warm Cave Xiao Idle", "Qin Idle Ink Light Guest Return", "Furnace Raw Wine Warm Pipe String You", "Poetry into Wine Hot Friends Xin", "Cold Wine Hot Late People Relatives", "Poor Wine Ruan Lang Sorrow". These sentences can be roughly divided into two categories: writing scenes and writing people. Most of the scenes are written in the scene that matches the mood of the sentence, and the camera is shifted to show another scene in winter, which basically matches the scene of the sentence. Writing about people can be said to be deeply rooted in the true biography of Chinese literati of all generations, it seems that in the environment of cold plums and proud snow and the elegant huts, do not cook wine around the stove, do not chant poems against each other, and do not manipulate strings, is it not too much to live up to this quiet and elegant environment? So most of the generals have expanded their intentions to this aspect, so that there is still movement, sound and color, and there is emotion and scene, if you can use the rhetorical technique corresponding to the sentence, it will be more vivid. Of course, everyone's thinking of seeking differences has been used very well, such as the sentence "The way is poor and the wine is exhausted, Ruan Lang is sad", which is unique in writing people's dialogues, not aesthetic and joyful, and writes the sorrow of Ruan Yuan, which is unique.

There are also some pairs of sentences, which are not a big problem from the perspective of the battle alone. However, because the winter scene of the same picture is difficult to expand, it has to change time and space to depict the scenery of spring or autumn. Although the picture is very beautiful, it is inevitable that there is a suspicion of being separated. (Luo Jun)