【Su Jun commented on campmates "Night Reading"】
Chen Leping
Night rain amorous knocking. The white head first read the unburned book.
He Ci was sick with flying mosquitoes, but Ren Wu's heart was thirsty.
The characters seem to be tai chi, and the words are all tai chi, and the words are gone.
More angry, Xin ji was hungry and prescient, and the scrolls were released and thought about the beginning of the ancients.
Comments:
Sentence meaning and refinement, from the present to the ancient times, a piece of divine action, completely natural. Against the agents, the flying mosquitoes are thirsty and wonderful. I was thrilled by the work of pressing the scroll.
Chen Piaoshi
Alone in the west, the autumn lights illuminate the shadows of the two Xiao Shuo.
The foolish heart did not solve qin pit hatred, and the old eye Youzhen Lu bishu.
The pen has no trace of fun and waste, and the sentence has a taste to climb the comb.
The groan broke at the sound of the slug, and he booed for me.
The old pens are full of old pens, and they are not unique. The whole is also mixed, but the weather is slightly inferior, and it is worthy of the best work.
Liu Xiaoyan
Siege the city a mustard invisible skeleton, silent shadow deep lamp sitting small fast.
Eight hundred miles outside the dust door, five thousand years of events in the middle row.
Han Tang called me to pursue my dreams, who will Wei Jin inherit?
It is difficult for white-haired Luzhou to sleep, such as the long street of pan night air pressure.
Style and charm prevail. Only the neck joint is slightly broad, and it is difficult to support up and down. Point for exploring flowers to show their show.
Zhou Zihui
At the bottom of the curtain, youlan is accompanied by the moon, smelling the fragrance and reading the most acacia at night.
Pick up the ancient rhymes and good sentences, and take the wonderful words of leisure.
When learning to the depth, Fang Jue is shallow, and Wen Linping is always curious.
The spirit of the unity of body and mind is to the point where all things are contemplated by our teacher.
The first four are slightly white, good sentences, and good words. The neck joint is still called its title below.
Chen Jinping
Sitting on the lone lamp and closing the house deeply, the sky is windy and the night is calm.
And leave the dust and dreams to the pillow, so that I can borrow books to purify my heart.
Zimei's feelings are thousands of years old, and the Eastern Slope Realm is a lifetime of searching.
The three more concealed scrolls were still sleepless, and Haoyue hovered in the Mao forest.
The qi pulse is still smooth, but it is a pity to owe the police strategy. The ancients cloud "see the strange in the peace", this is only seen in the peace.
Zheng Xiaoyue
Holding a scroll of books to send oblique light, sitting alone in the chicken window The sky is gradually fading.
The moonlit night is cold, and the people are lonely and the lights are sparse.
With hard work, he was ashamed to chisel the neighboring wall, and He Didn't bother to obey Yu Yi.
Pointing out the article Junzi Zhi, Qian Qiu Wu Dao Yun Fei.
The time to start four sentences is too much. Holding a volume of a book is also not poetry. The last four sentences are still true.
You Inna
The breeze is still around the bookshelf, and the rolling lights are also fast.
Three hundred Tang poems read with me, and a round of bright moon came into my arms.
Talent is like the sound of the sea, and the night air is like a tidal wave of wine glasses.
If you want to be happy, you should see the pen blossom in your dreams.
The cervical joint is overheated and loses its purpose. Yu Shang said.
Shao Yuexi
The wind blows the leaves and the sky is getting cooler, and I want to sit alone in front of the lamp.
The sound of the poems in The silence is thin, and the drunken sentences are long.
Three more moonlight invasion book case, ten acres of banyan yin nursing school.
Laughing at yourself, you worship the five willows, and don't ask for a solution.
Four sentences of vulgarity. The last four sentences are not yet elegant.
Zhao Guiyun
Sit deeper into the gui yingsheng, the window contains the moonlight with the book lamp.
The desk admires Ju Si Tao Ling, and the poems he writes are used to serve Shaoling.
Familiar with the sages' ghostly realm, poor and mysterious Reason Dao heart increased.
Whoever knows the true meaning of this is the best in the words.
Although it is deducted, it is lifeless.
Xie Ying
The lights and flowers wandered in a scattered way, and half an acre of square pond washed the vulgar.
Bamboo shadows swayed in the window, and the moon marks reflected the moss.
In the courtyard, the frost chrysanthemum is the same as the twilight, and the new word fee in the epidemic is cut.
The book was rolled up unconsciously, and a wisp of morning light came into the curtain.
The moon marks are inconsistent with the situation, and the words are especially rude. Although the rest are slender and weak, they are not yet seriously ill.
Wu Huajie
The old man read the west of the house corridor, and the clouds faded and the stars faded and the moon became confused.
The black characters and white heads know that there is remorse, and the empty fist and yellow leaves stop crying.
And turn over the old paper to open new eyes, redial the residual lamp as the old question.
Pillow rolls who wake up Jinyu Dream, a chicken outside the warm sun window.
The jaw is condensed. Jin Yu dream is also a birth.
Li Jingquan
Sit on the lonely and forgetful. God has befriended the most virtuous of all time.
Yuheng Kaoyao Tong Tianli, Jin Jing ChengWen List History Chapter.
Chabi Sun Kang will be snowy, should be the same as Che Yin set fluorescent light.
The west window is half hidden without wind, and people are silent frogs singing like frost.
The most virtuous three words are not passed. The second link is lifeless. Tail link is acceptable.
Xu Shuxian
He once stayed at Garam Night to read the Bible. The green light is a little bright.
The incense ball case corner is frightened by the dream, and the leaf falls on the Zen bed as a drum.
Quietly observe the mind from the world, and the thoughts enter the eyes and feel the dust.
Knowing what is like the curtain of the moon, do not say Tingting accompanied Xiao more.
A light and spiritual work that can be pulled to the forefront.
Yao Guiyu
Roll up the bed in front of the shadow of the lamp, a hundred years of loneliness and no friends.
The wind and rain at the head of the building are still chaotic, and the hearts of the people in the world are unclear.
Sending a ruler book to sell old hatred, chanting poetry to the top.
After years of frost invading the sideburns, the proud bones still see the steepness.
If the hundred-year sentence says that friends are broken, it does not have to be lonely. The jaw connection is untidy, excessive. The high-level is suspicious, and the closing sentence is also exposed.
Guan Yanping
The bucket room is buried in the pile of paper, and the cold night is accompanied only by shadows.
The stars do not extinguish the embers, and the words are still ashes after the disaster.
There are many tears in the articles of this ancient era, and the tyrants and hegemons only dust.
Kuwata's vicissitudes allow me to be there, leaning over the sky and mourning every time.
The jaw is too close to the palm. Tail link missing title.
Tan Weiyuan
The cold insects whispered silently, and an autumn lamp accompanied the moon.
The storms at home and abroad start from paper, and ancient and modern personnel are evaluated by heart.
The article is cleverly read back and forth, and the truth is shallow and clear.
Wait for the party to release the volume, and the neighbor's courtyard will chirp early.
The opening sentence is stagnant. Although the middle two leagues are shallow, they are still passable. Wait for the seven words to be exposed, and the neighbor is cloudy and small.
Guo Jinwei
The small building is lonely and cool at night, sitting alone in the study of the ruler.
The fengya god gave Su Zifu, and the yin heart folded the jun madness.
The lamp read to Qin Shiyue, and entered the seat song to come to the North Sea Frost.
And ask the world's fame and fortune, who is full of ink marks.
The last four sentences are too much.
Lin Zhongxian
Close the doors and windows to resist the cold wind, but in front of the mirror, I feel hazy.
Holding the book is afraid of the sideburns, and the exhibition volume used to be candle-shadowed red.
The refining sentence is exhausted, and the search for the chapter is empty and the hatred is endless.
Born clumsy and knows what to do, poetry is urged to be the end of work.
The first two sentences are missing, and here it should be straight to the point. Holding books, spreading volumes and palms, refining sentences, and searching for chapters are the same, and the situation is flat.
Huang Xiangshou
Cold night candle dark sense camp, ten thousand books without half a page flat.
Several times because of the wind and fire, over the years to the paper mercy.
In front of people, the cold and warm view is revived and abandoned, and the spring and autumn on the wall are overturned.
Be careful not to sleep lightly, he may do early thunder.
The first two sentences are missing. The word camp is untouched. Unknown due to the wind sentence. The following are all raw.
Huang Meiqing
Family letters read and write nostalgia at night, dreaming of several autumns.
The yellow flowers of the road are barefoot, and the white hair of the old garden is worried.
Qiao Yin sent early in the spring, and the silver letter was delayed in the summer harvest.
If Xu Qingfeng is literate, the end of the world will remember the heart.
Reading books and reading letters are two different things, and they are far from the topic.
Ye Jinping
The cold wind and rain in the house were continuous, and the night drums and shrews did not sleep.
The butterfly dreamed of Mourning, and Yang Hua was sad.
Vast life and death mocking today, loneliness and sorrow and joy for a hundred years?
The demise of personnel is changing day by day, and it is better to sleep on the old silk string.
Fifty-six words from head to toe have no interference with night reading.
Su Jun is a native of Gaozhou City, Guangdong Province. Director of the Commentary Department of the Institute of Culture of the China Association of The Association of Chinese Associations. He has won two Tan Keping Contemporary Poetry Awards, the Zu Rong Cup Annual Poetry Award, and the Second Xiang tianhua Cup Poetry Department Gold Award. He has also won more than 1,000 awards in the National Poetry Contest. He has served as the final judge of the National Poetry Federation Competition for many times. There are many books.
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