Composition guidance: Build a model for the composition language, exchange famous sentences for yuan, and write high-scoring essays

The so-called modeling is to build a model; the so-called commutation is to swap elements. Some famous sentences read with teeth and cheeks, and we can use these famous sentences to exchange yuan and become our own witty words.

In fact, it is to require everyone to accumulate famous sentences, appreciate famous sentences, and then use the commutation method to imitate famous sentences, so as to create their own language model. We explain it on three levels.

3 levels of famous sentence substitution

Level 1 4-step substitution of simple phrases

The second level is the 4-step substitution of complex famous sentences

The third level is the grafting of many famous sentences

01

A 4-step metamorphosis of a simple phrase

【Famous sentences】

True silence is not to avoid the hustle and bustle of the cars and horses, but to cultivate the chrysanthemum in the heart. (Lin Huiyin)

1. The real indifference is not to avoid the hustle and bustle of the cars and horses, but to cultivate the hedge and plant chrysanthemums in the heart. (Change Object)

2. The real indifference is not to sit in the ancient temple of the deep mountains, but to cultivate herbs and flowers in the heart. (Image change)

3. We always think that the real indifference is to sit in the ancient temple in the mountains, but we do not know that if we do not cultivate herbs and flowers in the soul, we will be insulated from the real indifference. (alternate sentence)

4. We are always full of naivety thinking that the real indifference is to sit in the ancient temple in the mountains, but we do not know that if we do not cultivate herbs and flowers in the soul, we will be permanently and completely isolated from the real indifference. (for emotion)

02

4-step substitution of complex famous sentences

Wei and Jin calligraphy is like a deep well, full of expectation, admiring people's hearts like a hook, reaching in to hook out the rhymes hidden in the depths. This is indeed like the rice wine brewed by the village women, with a kind of shock power and endless thinking. (Isaac Zhu, "Between the Fingers")

1. Luo Zhongzhong's masterpiece "Father", full of affection, is like a deep well, the well is full of countless possible expectations, appreciate the human heart like a hook, carefully probe into it, hook out the infinite charm hidden in the depths of the well water. Like the rice wine brewed by the villagers, after getting drunk, there is a kind of post-attacking power and a long aftertaste. (Change Object)

2. Luo Zhongzhong's famous Chinese painting "Father", full of affection, is like a pool of water, the pool of water is full of countless possible expectations, appreciate people's hearts like a hook, carefully probe into it, hook out the infinite charm hidden in the depths of the pool. Like a master playing the piano, although the action stops, there is a continuous aftersound and a long aftertaste. (Image change)

3. Have you ever admired Luo Zhongzhong's famous Chinese painting "Father"? The indissoluble emotion is contained in the thin paper, like a pool of water, which is filled with countless possible expectations. Our hearts are like a hook, carefully probing into it, even if only a little bit, can hook out the infinite charm hidden in the depths of the pool. Like a master playing the piano, although the action stops, there is a continuous aftersound and a long aftertaste. (alternate sentence)

4. Have you ever admired the famous painter Luo Zhongzhong's shocking Chinese painting "Father"? The indissoluble emotion is contained in the thin paper, like a pool of turquoise water, which is filled with countless possible expectations. Our hearts are like a sharp hook, carefully probing into it, even if only a little bit, can hook out the infinite charm hidden in the depths of the pool. Like a master playing the piano, although the action stops, there is a continuous aftersound and a long aftertaste. (for emotion)

03

The grafting of many famous sentences

Famous sentence 1: In addition to the immediate gouge, there are also poems and distant places.

Famous sentence 2: True silence is not to avoid the hustle and bustle of cars and horses, but to cultivate a hedge and plant chrysanthemums in the heart.

Grafting and replacement:

We all have a poetic yearning, and we always think that poetry is to get rid of the immediate stubbornness and go to poetry and far away. In fact, the real poetry is not to get rid of the chai rice oil and salt in front of you, but to have the desire for spring flowers and autumn moon in your heart, and to hide the reverie of hiking sichuan and Tibet.

Famous sentence 1: How much confusion and how much attachment, scabs between gain and loss. (Du Junhua,"Grey Country")

Quote 2: No one can make a bell to knock us back to the time that has passed. (Dickens' Christmas Tales)

Famous sentence 3: Time is like this, wandering in it feels slow, once you fix your eyes on it, you can feel it slowly. (Mo Xiaomi)

Grafting and changing yuan: youth is easy to pass away, how much youth, how much attachment, scabs between pleasure and pity. But no one can make a net to net us of the time that has passed. Unfortunately, youth is like this, wandering among them you feel as slow as an ox cart, once you fix your eyes on it, you feel that the wind is rushing.

Famous sentence 1: Too much noise makes us full of customs, but often just fear of loneliness is the reason why we turn to the hustle and bustle.

Famous sentence 2: The world is full of flowers, but our hearts are becoming more and more desolate. (Pan Yungui, "Wasteland")

Quote 3: We tend to only dream of the magical rose garden at the other end of the horizon, and forget to admire the roses that are blooming outside the window today. (Dale Carnegie)

Famous sentence 4: In the vast and ignorant desert, knowledge is a mirage that gradually fades away until it disappears. (American scholar Will. Durant)

Example 3: Impetuous waves make us vulgar, but often the fear of loneliness is the reason why we turn to impetuousness. Therefore, although we read in the chicken soup text that the world is full of flowers, the garden fields we have accumulated in action have become more and more desolate. Even more tragically, we tend to dream of a rose garden that is out of reach at the other end of the horizon, rather than the roses blooming outside the window. In the impetuous desert, reason and authenticity are legendary mirages.