Drink a lifetime of wine out of a lifetime of ugliness, a lifetime of literary loss of a lifetime of people

Literati are conceited and high, in fact, most of them are self-conscious. Playing with words is similar to drinking, drinkers "drink a lifetime of wine, out of a lifetime of ugliness." The person who wrote the article "writes for a lifetime, and loses a lifetime of people". As long as you deal with words, you can't avoid mistakes, big names make big mistakes, small editors make small mistakes, and no one does not make mistakes! Doing writing work is also very similar to driving a car, newborn calves are not afraid of tigers, and the more novices they are, the more rash they are. On the contrary, the longer the dry time, the higher the level of people, the more empty their hearts, the more trembling, like walking on thin ice. Because if you are not careful, you will ruin the name of a british person.

The following copywriting are examples encountered in the author's work, it is estimated that many people have a sense of déjà vu, compiled and summarized here, for your reference, welcome criticism, discussion, correction.

100 Common Mistakes in Press Releases I(20)

1. Truck driver Huang Moumou, starting from March 2021, has been suspected of illegally collecting about 40 tons of waste mineral oil in more than ten large and small car maintenance points in our city.

Interpretation: "more than 40 tons" itself is a divisor, and there is no need to add "about" in front of it.

2. One 、............ ：

（1）…… ；

（2）…… ；

（3）……。

（4）…… ；

（5）…… ；

Interpretation: (omitting text, only talking about format, punctuation) The 5 sub-items under a large item are juxtaposed, except for the last 5 sub-items used." "The punctuation after (3) (5) in this case is misuse.

3. On November 2, 2020, in a small area of Chongqing, a pair of siblings under three years old fell to their deaths. After a police investigation.... The court announced that on July 26, 2021, the case of the fall of two young children will be heard.

Interpretation: News writing should generally start with newly occurring facts or dynamics, and then explain the background information. "The court announces..." is in line with the expression practice before it is set.

4. A few days ago, Mr. Zhang of Changzhou, Jiangsu Province, purchased a cake and found that the blue cream color could not be scrubbed off after eating,...... Suspected that the pigment is excessive, I plan to test it.

Interpretation: The correct expression should be to find out "after" eating, not to "find" after buying a cake.

5. "So-and-so buying group" is to serve buyers and developers, and strive to select and recommend high-quality and preferential properties for buyers, and provide professional property purchase guidance and rich property market information.

Interpretation: Half-cut sentences. What is "so-and-so buying group"? It should be "... Information (of specialized organizations or home buying platforms). ”

6. The secretary of the party committee and the director of the Municipal Taxation Bureau visited and comforted Comrade Wang Moumou and sent him care and greetings... Thank you for their dedication and perseverance in the cause of taxation.

Interpretation: The confusion of people is "he" or "they"!

7. On the afternoon of June 29, the Party Committee of the Second People's Procuratorate of the Municipal People's Procuratorate held a commendation meeting to celebrate the "July 1st" and the Party Secretary gave a lecture on the Party.

Interpretation of mistakes: before and after is a juxtaposition relationship, it is possible to convene a commendation meeting, and it does not make sense to convene the party secretary to give a party lesson.

8. A city: appoint or dismiss a director.

Interpretation: Appointment, removal, appointment or removal. Is it the appointment of a director or the removal of a director!?

9. It is expected that the maximum hourly rain intensity of this rainfall process is 20-40 mm/ h, the cumulative precipitation in the process is 40-80 mm, and the local precipitation is about 100 mm.

Interpretation: 20-40 mm / hour, which means hourly rainfall. The maximum hourly rain intensity is 20-40 mm / hour, "/ hour" is redundant.

10. July 2, Bengbu, Anhui Province. Because of the dog walking dispute, the woman and the passerby had a dispute: you are not worth my dog, and tens of millions can afford to pay.

Interpretation: "Dispute" is repeated.

11. The Municipal Fire Rescue Detachment quickly dispatched two fire trucks, two rubber boats...

Interpretation: The unit is used incorrectly, and the unit of the rubber boat should be "ship".

12. On the afternoon of November 11, the Natural Resources and Planning Bureau of a certain city held a cadre meeting. The meeting decided that comrade so-and-so was appointed as the secretary of the party group and director of the natural resources and planning bureau of a certain city...

Interpretation: This is a major mistake. The appointment of secretaries and directors is strictly organized and legally prescribed. The cadre congress does not have the right to decide on the appointment of secretaries and directors.

13. On July 18, the 2021 CBA Draft was held in Qingdao. Luohe boy Jia Hao was selected by the Shanxi team with the 11th pick, becoming the first basketball player in the city to log on to the CBA League.

Interpretation: "CBA" is the English abbreviation of "Chinese Men's Basketball Professional League", so the "league basketball" in the text is redundant!

14. During the summer vacation, children and parents who have lived in the epidemic area should report to the community and teachers immediately.

Interpretation: If you have not "been to" a certain place, where does the "sojourn history" come from? The meaning is repeated, leaving one of the two.

15. As of the afternoon of July 25, the city has discharged farmland water area of 1029520 mu, and there are still 91,926 mu of farmland water, of which Linying County is 75,654 mu and Wuyang is 2,860 mu...

Interpretation: This "of which..." is ambiguous whether it is drained farmland or farmland that still has water. After calculation, it was determined that it refers to farmland that still has water accumulation. Here, just change the 1029520 acres later" to "change it to"; "it will be clear at a glance."

16. The man involved was summoned to the police station, saying that after graduating from graduate school, he was under great pressure to work, so he stole a colleague's takeaway to relieve the pressure.

Interpretation: This is an indirect quote, and the two "selves" are repeated. Delete the second "self" with the previous "," and merge the sentences. This error is more obvious.

17. On August 4, at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Zhujiang Road in the urban area, a two-wheeled electric vehicle collided with a normal traffic truck because it ran a red light. If the electric vehicle is damaged and the driver is injured, it bears full responsibility for the accident.

Interpretation: The subject of this sentence is an accident, with both parties involved. Who is referred to here by "its", the expression is not clear, it should be "electric vehicle driver".

18. Recently, the Linying County Tobacco Monopoly Bureau issued the first ticket for the sale of e-cigarettes to minors. On the same day, the Linying County Tobacco Bureau received reports from the masses...

Interpretation: "Recently" itself is a vague time, a taboo for news reporting. Which day is the next "day", which is even more "nonsensical".

19. After two months of joint efforts by more than 100 police officers, the members of Li Moumou's extraordinarily large prostitution gang were arrested in one fell swoop.

Interpretation: Someone or organization doing something at a certain time is a complete sentence. "Down" is to draw snakes to add feet.

20. The trajectory of close contacts of the positive COVID-19 case in Shangrao, Jiangxi Province, was announced.

Interpretation: Inaccurate expression. There are positive for the new crown pneumonia virus, positive for the new crown pneumonia virus nucleic acid test or positive for the new crown virus antibody; "new crown pneumonia" is a disease name, and it does not matter negative positive.

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November 15, 2021