At night
I took a flashlight and shined it into the river
The one who drowned half a year ago/kid
Write your homework in the water
He saw light
Just look up
Smile at me.
On the big night, seeing this poem that was titled "thriller" by the major media hot lists, it was indeed a strong sense of picture, which made people tremble in their hearts.
The author of this poem is the recently popular "Jiang Erni", Jiang Erni, also known as Jiang Erni, born in December 2007, began to compose poetry at the age of 5, with a spiritual language and rich imagination, won the love of many netizens. Although she is only 14 years old, she has already published her own poetry collection, and won the Lu Quan Poetry Award, the International Chinese Finalist Award, etc., which has been praised by the media and industry.
As Wang Han commented: "The reason why Jiang Eryan's poems are liked by people is because she has a childlike heart, a pair of eyes of discovery, and full of imagination!" ”
Teacher Xiao Xu read a lot of Jiang Erni's poems, and I have to say that this child does have superhuman observation and imagination, and many small poems, although only a few short sentences, can give people a refreshing feeling.
For example, "When you don't want to laugh / Smile / I'm so tired"
"Grow up / These two words / Grow up / Very lonely / Not even a side"
"I'm standing in the crowd / Lonely like P's up"
"Life is like shrimp cake / Sometimes you don't have money / See the boss selling there / Wait until you have money / He doesn't sell anymore"
From the above verses, we can clearly read a profound and thorough interpretation of "tiredness", "loneliness", and the expectation and helplessness of life, which can't help but make people resonate strongly, and the most surprising and admirable thing is that these philosophical and poetic poems are from the hands of Jiang Erni primary school students.
It is precisely because Jiang Erni is so young to be able to write such convincing poems both poetically and poetically, and has been repeatedly questioned on the Internet, thinking that her poems may be ghostwritten by adults, however, Teacher Xiao Xu has always believed that people should not judge this matter by subjective assumptions in the absence of evidence, after all, if they can't write it themselves, they think that others can't write it, and this understanding itself is superficial.
This poem, which is considered "shocking" by parents, but appears on the poem "Modern Writing" in the junior high school reading material " , "River", what is the level of poetry?
When parents and students can feel a strong impact after seeing this poem, it proves that this poem is a rare and good poem, after all, the moving part of poetry lies in the penetration of the heart. Imagine abandoning the artistic level of poetry, but the picture described in this poem - "Drowned child, everything disappears, but the only constant is still to write homework" For a time, the world in the eyes of children made countless adults sigh, and at the same time had to sigh at Jiang Erni's unique perspective, and there was a penetrating eye under the innocent child's heart, which could see what we could not pay attention to.
However, such a somewhat "psychic" or even "thrilling" poem should appear in junior high school books?
In The view of Teacher Xiao Xu, when Jiang Erni wrote this poem, she must have thought of the innocent soul of the dead child, and she should have hoped that although the child died unfortunately, his soul still remained in the human world, doing what he wanted to do, as if he were alive. This also means that in the eyes of a child like Jiang Erni, she does not want this child to disappear from the human world from now on. If you think so, this little poem has something heart-warming.
However, in the eyes of some adults, it is possible to think that people become "ghosts" when they die, and it is terrifying that the ghosts are not scattered. This proves the saying: "What you have in your heart, you will think in your head." "Guessing the author's intentions from the perspective of one's own mind is itself a blasphemy against the author, of the poem.
In short, poetry, novels, all literary works are thousands of faces, a thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets, why should we be "thrilled" by some people to be rhythmic, we may wish to look at this poem from the perspective of children, is it not good to inspire children's hearts?