Paradoxically, "Imitation is the first step in creation." "Imitation can improve students' observation ability, thinking level, association ability and imagination ability, thus truly improving the writing level of junior high school students."
For example, "From the Hundred Grass Garden to the Sanwei Book House" can be imitated in the text: "Needless to say that the turquoise vegetable beds, the smooth stone well bars, the tall soap pod trees, and the purple mulberry trees; it is not necessary to say that the cicadas groan in the leaves, the fat wasps lie on the cauliflower, and the lightly called Tianzi (skylark) suddenly flew straight from the grass to the clouds." Just the short mud wall roots around it are infinitely interesting. Butterflies sing here, crickets play the piano here. Turning over the broken bricks, you will sometimes encounter centipedes; and the spotted centipedes, if you press your fingers on its spine, will clap and spew out a puff of smoke from the back. He Shou Wu vine and wood lotus vine are entangled, wood lotus has lotus-like fruit, and He Shou Wu has swollen roots. Some people say that He Shou Wugen has the form of a humanoid, and when I eat it, I can become a fairy, so I often pull it up, implicate it continuously, and I have also damaged the mud wall because of this, but I have never seen a root like a human. If you are not afraid of thorns, you can also pick raspberries, like small balls made of small coral beads, sour and sweet, and the color and taste are far better than mulberries.
Appreciation and description method:
The second paragraph of the article writes out the endless fun of The Hundred Grass Garden.
1. Through the 14 scenes described, the endless fun of The Hundred Grass Garden was written. It doesn't have to be said: from low to high, and it doesn't have to be said: from high to low (leaves, cauliflowers, grasses) Writing order: whole - local; first still life - then animal
2, the characteristics of things - shape: fat, tall, bloated, small balls; sound: long chant, play the piano; color: turquoise, purple, cauliflower and bee "yellow"; taste: sour and sweet.
Spring scene: Cauliflower. Xia Jing: Singing cicadas. Autumn scenery: crickets, mulberries.
3. The order of description
The first layer depicts the order of depictions - first still life: turquoise vegetable beds, smooth stone well bars, tall soap pod trees, purple mulberries; later animals: singing cicadas long groans; fat wasps called Tianzi (skylarks) lightly.
The second layer of the order of description - always write "Just... Endless fun". Oil frogs, crickets, centipedes, spotted scorpions.
4. Depiction angle - The scenery of Baicao Garden is complete in shape, sound, color and taste.
This paragraph describes the scene from several angles of visual, tactile, auditory, and taste.
Vision: Turquoise vegetable furrows, purple mulberries, tall soap pod trees Fat wasps, swollen roots Raspberry is like small coral beads.
Hearing: Cicada long chant Oil moth low singing Crickets play the piano Taste: Raspberries "sour and sweet".
Touch: "If you are not afraid of thorns"
Seasonal Angle Spring: Cauliflower mulberry is a scene of late spring;
Summer: Cicadas chirp in the height of summer
Autumn: Crickets play the piano
5. The techniques used ---- comparison, metaphor, and anthropomorphic rhetorical techniques.
Rank ratio: "Smooth..., tall..., purple...", purple..."
Metaphor: "... Raspberries are like small balls made of small coral beads..."
Anthropomorphism: "Butterflies sing here", "Crickets play the piano here"
The image vividly writes out the wonderful imagination and special feelings in the child's heart. It shows the author's love for nature.
It is not necessary to say that the fluttering willow leaves, the blue sky, the busy groundhog, the red cherry; it is not necessary to say that the tired spider weaves a sweater on the eaves that can never be woven, the lazy cat lies in the sun, and the agile squirrel suddenly "flies" from one tree to another, alarming a group of snoozing sparrows.
There is so much fun in the mundane grove around it. The cicadas sing here, and the cuckoos sing together here. Turning over the old fallen leaves, sometimes you will encounter crickets, sometimes there are a few single chestnuts, and when you smash its thorny armor with stones, you will jump out of the white and fat little chestnut, and no one can imagine that there is also a sweet heart hidden under its indestructible appearance.
Bamboo shoots saw this beautiful scenery also came to join in the fun, can't wait to drill out, the body of the clear color to deceive, relaxed. I often pull this cold little guy out of the rice and take off his thick coat one by one, revealing his snow-like skin, which is the best choice for cooking. If you are not afraid of getting tired, you can also pick cherries, which are like red lanterns, hanging on the branches, and the color and taste are even more evocative.
Practical exercise: imitate the second paragraph of "From the Hundred Grass Garden to the Sanwei Bookhouse"
