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Excellent Essay Phase II | Linzhou Guiyuan School Class 6 (7) Yang Kairu "Mother-Daughter Love"

Mother and daughter are deeply in love

City Guiyuan School Class Six (7) Yang Kairu

Excellent Essay Phase II | Linzhou Guiyuan School Class 6 (7) Yang Kairu "Mother-Daughter Love"

I have always felt that "mother" is both great and sacred. She gives you life, embraces all your flaws, and endures all your bad tempers. She has been paying for you since you were born, running for you, she is the dearest person in the world!

It was the winter when I was ten years old, and it was unusually cold. I don't remember what happened, but I remember that I was angry, angry, and yelled at my mother: "I'm going to run away from home!" I'm ignoring you!" Mom was also anxious: "Okay, you! The wings are hard, the tube can't move you, I want to go quickly!" I was angry and strode out of the door. Looking back several times, I didn't see my mother catching up, I was even more sad, more annoyed, and thought: Just go! Who's afraid of whom!

On the street, the lively scene of red and green lights is extremely inconsistent with me, a little girl who is silently weeping. As I walked, I became more and more sad, and my stomach grumbled, and I realized that I had not eaten. I found a small restaurant on the side of the road and ordered some food, sat at the table and devoured it, half of it found that I did not bring money, and hesitated for half a day before I stood up. I didn't dare to look into the boss's eyes, bowed my head and said, "Grandma, I'm really sorry, I don't have any money on me now, can you forgive me for a few days?" The owner, an amiable grandmother, said, "Don't be so polite, little girl, I know you didn't mean it." My tears suddenly flowed down like broken beads, muttering, "Grandma, you are so nice, unlike my mother, who always says me, this is not okay, that is not hit." When I left home this time, I wanted to deliberately anger my mother..." "Grandma just gave you a side of tolerance, how can it be compared with your mother's selfless tolerance for you for more than ten years?"

I suddenly froze...

Excellent Essay Phase II | Linzhou Guiyuan School Class 6 (7) Yang Kairu "Mother-Daughter Love"

My mother gave everything for me, how can I hurt my mother's heart because of a small thing?

I ran home and wanted to apologize to my mom immediately...

Not far from home, my mother hovered nervously in front of the house, looking into the distance from time to time, looking forward to my return...

My eyes were moist and I ran into my mother's arms and cried bitterly...

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[Comments] The article is straightforward and simple. The whole article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely focusing on the quarrel between "I" and my mother, using psychological description, language description and other writing techniques in the text, comparing the grandmother's tolerance of the "I" side with the mother's selfless tolerance for more than ten years, profoundly showing my mother's meticulous care for me. The ending uses the action of "I" to deepen the theme, highlighting the deep feelings between "I" and my mother, and the story is sincere and full of ordinary feelings.

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