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"Daming Gold Lord" after reading the feeling

author:Don't be Uncle Nine

Let's start with the ratings, the book is 55 out of 100.

Passing is impossible, just because the author himself can't write it, it ends abruptly, and he is not embarrassed to give him a pass.

But this book still has something to see.

The opening is quite good, the male protagonist starts low, and does not take the road of examination with self-knowledge, which is a very good idea.

Then rely on the teacher's introduction, into Xu Ge's hometown as a little guy, the starting point is very low, but the prospect seems to be very good, after all, this is the former Daming first assistant!

It's called a strong contrast, and it's fascinating.

At the beginning of the work, the first thing was also very dramatic, and then the performance was outstanding, and he began to take charge of Xu Yuan, which was under the hands of the housekeeper.

The Xu family gave him a scene to get acquainted with the county grandfather and got the head of the county trial case, which is also a matter of the past.

Later, the author began to mess up.

From September of the second year of Longqing to five years of Longqing, three years, from a small guy to a huge business boss, even the bank is on the agenda, this stall is too big.

I think it should be so big that the author can't control it, and he can't write directly, which is the main reason why he is bad.

There is a passage of poetry that is quite profound, that is, the poem that is picked from the east and the west, and the male protagonist has such a good memory and is so talented that he will go to the examination.

There is also The kindness and trust of Xu Jie and the eldest son to the male protagonist is also a bug in this article, which is not an outsider at all.

There is no heroine, all day long thinking about making money, not interesting.

In the middle, I accompanied my mother to my grandfather's house, and there was an old watch dressed as a man, which was good here, but unfortunately the author wrote crookedly.