This is an essay written by a third-grade boy: "Happy Me"
You ask me why I say I'm happy, because I grow up with everyone's love every day.
I eat breakfast with the whole family every day, and every day the meal is different. Every Saturday, my mom and I would go to places like Dragon's Dream. Every day, I am very happy, because if I cry, can I still be happy? Every little long vacation, I would go to other places with my family to play. Every time, I get a big buck. Every day, after my family eats with me, they study with me.
You ask me why I'm happy because I have a group of friends like me who live and grow up with me. Each of the friends is very happy. Because they live carefree lives with me. Each of my friends has a strength, such as running, jumping high, climbing over walls...
I have a happy, wonderful and happy day. I want everyone in the world to live freely and carefreely; not to live without worrying about the world and not being able to live without my own imagination.
Note: There are some typos in the original manuscript, in order to make it easier for everyone to read, the manuscript has been corrected from time to time :))
Original manuscript of Happy Me
My son doesn't like to learn Chinese, he doesn't like to write, because there are too many words to write. He loves math and can just write a number.
So every time he wrote an essay, he treated it like a big project, Alexander.
Below is the story of another essay written by my son.
One day after dinner, my son was writing his language assignments at his desk.
Son: Mom, the essay we left behind today is "The Man I Admire Most." I'm going to write Daddy, you won't be angry. Because I don't think there's much to admire about you, my dad can make me all kinds of guns.
Although I was a little depressed inside, I couldn't hit the child, so I asked him: "Is it good to write a gun?" ”
"My dad's gun is very handsome, and I always like it."
So he wrote it with great interest...
The next evening.
Son: Mom, I didn't listen to your opinion yesterday, and I didn't pass the essay today. The teacher said that the composition is very good, that is, you have to change things, to write meaningful things. My classmates wrote about sanitation workers and teachers, but I still wanted to write about my dad.
The advantages of the child's father are really hidden too deeply, so we meditate on all kinds...
"Yes, write about Dad's weight loss." Being able to bear not to eat so much delicious food and still insist on exercising every day is too great! ”
For his snack goods plus little sloth, it is too difficult to do!
So he started writing again.
I believe that his essay can be qualified!
Here's a little insight.
Although my son's writing level is not very good, he writes as he pleases, and he slowly becomes interested in writing.
He had a child who attended a special elementary school, and their Chinese teacher required each student to memorize several sample essays. At any time in the classroom, you can check the situation of the recitation, and wait until the language test to directly write out the sample text.
The school's grades are high, with two-thirds of a class having perfect scores in math and English on the final exams. Students who take the ninety-odds test are classified as "poor students", and parents are likely to be found by the class teacher to talk. Therefore, the children who can become the best in ordinary schools are living a life of anxiety in this school.
The great scientist Qian Xuesen never asked for full marks for his children, and felt that if he mastered the knowledge he learned well, it would be enough to get eighty points.
The interest in learning is more important than a high score. Although children are not good at writing essays now, they can slowly exercise writing one after another. One article is always better than the other. If primary school students only memorize the sample texts and memorize them by rote without their own thoughts, it is difficult for them to truly master the skills and methods of expression.
The so-called practice makes perfect, lack of exercise process, how to form their own skills?